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In the cold night When our bones ache with pain We draw nearer to the fire As we warm up again. Fire brightens the night And it lights up the dark It casts shadows and secrets With every spark. "What can you show us Great Fire, you are? Show us the truth For we have travelled far." "Gather ye around Young ones and old And I will tell you a tale That few people know." We all gathered around The great fire of light To hear the old tale And drive off the cold night. "Ye humans are cruel" We all held our breaths "Fighting among yourselves Till there's none of you left." We shake our heads, no "We're not all like that Surely, Father Fire We are better than that." "I will give you warmth I will give you light I will cook your food And I will be your delight." "You don't deserve it You selfish beasts of prey You will become extinct And I will flee away." "Your light will grow dim And your bones will freeze As you realise Begging on hands and knees." "But I will not come I will not rejoice Till you learn to behave You all have a choice." "Father Fire, do not leave Don't abandon us, poor and lame We have no one but ourselves In all this to blame." "Show us your light And give us your warmth Otherwise we die From our greed and our wants." "Yes, I will stay But only for a little while Learn to love peace Like a little child."
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May 4
May 4, 2026 at 11:39 PM UTC
The Flicker
Are you man enough To walk the path carved in your marrow? To let instinct speak? Can you listen to the wild in your chest not tame it, but understand it? Are you man enough to protect without owning, to fight without hatred, to cry without retreat, to bleed and still rise not as a martyr, but as a force of nature returning to form? You are not a flaw in evolution. You are its edge, its hammer, its echo through time. Stand tall, not in defiance of the world, but in allegiance to what made you. Nature never doubted you. Why should you?
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May 16, 2025
May 16, 2025 at 7:43 PM UTC
To Be a Man, As Nature Intended
Oceans away, lies an island; A beach where the waves reach the sand. I found peace there once. The ocean felt so good on my skin. The inner peace I felt, I craved it more and more; every sense of relief and every worry left my body. Then something happened, I slipped and cut my foot. My feet could touch the bottom so it wasn’t that deep. The rock caught me off guard, I was pulled under, water filling my lungs; my organs turning against me. I fought, pulling me under. A beast, a blue beautiful monster grabbed me and pulled me by my shirt with his mouth. I woke up, drenched, lying inside a cave; by a warm fire. This man was a beast, with beautiful blue fur, staring at me. I must have passed out, because he had been watching me sleep. He was beautiful, sharp teeth and more animal than human. He saved me, I almost died but he saved me. Part 2.
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Nov 18, 2020
Nov 18, 2020 at 11:32 AM UTC
Beast
I smell the wild on you. How the snow is caked in your fur. When the night falls, what does It offer besides survival. And the means to be something besides human. We're stuck here somewhere where The earth has broken. And the cold envelopes everything it Touches. You stand there in the snow Teeth bared. Not afraid to go at it once more. I've grown tired, so very tired. Your eyes burn the snow. That fierce longing to stay alive. What else does the night offer, We've consumed pretty much everything else except each other. And I am tired of fighting. Nothing pretty survives out here alone, In the dark. Together, you and I nestled in each other's warm. When hunger subsides. We'll find it in each other
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Nov 8, 2024
Nov 8, 2024 at 1:26 PM UTC
Howl in the Dark
Ignited Excited My body roars Through my veins Lit Straight fire Passion incarnate Primal desire.
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Jul 18, 2021
Jul 18, 2021 at 2:10 AM UTC
#92
Hollow Doesn’t have to be a bad word Hollow Doesn’t have to mean “empty” And “missing” When I listen It means there is a container Wrapped tight And taut in something warm The hide of a once wild and free animal is now a fate reverberated as another passionate, wild being Strikes it Sparks the potential aflame Into a sprout of a heartbeat Or it is The fog Once aimless and reaching Until it finds a lighthouse Its beam also reaching for it So when light strikes the micro droplets Each effervescent molecule Is lit in the turn of the path In each passing round An orchestra plays That is the word “Hollow” To me
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Jul 1, 2020
Jul 1, 2020 at 2:59 AM UTC
Hollow
Read to me the story of the sun and how our first lovers were the stars Your mind beams penetrate me radiate my cells pump my blood I'd swim in my hair like you do Some melodies don’t need a literal space, you see world traveler, you don’t know this place I like that you can’t give me an animal intercepted patterns trim unchartered moments primally coded in me and you Don’t be afraid Whatever happens it’s only Love
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Jul 1, 2020
Jul 1, 2020 at 2:39 AM UTC
Chosen
I first heard the lullaby in the womb. It has a pulse and rhythm. It was embedded in my tissue and cells. And when I was shot out, ****** and naked, the cord was cut. The journey began. At five years old, I remember closing my eyes, and lying down to go to sleep, it felt like I was being rocked. I wonder if the subconscious mind was remembering the rhythm of the womb. My Mom--pregnant with me walking upstairs--downstairs, elevators escalators movement pulse, the eternal lullaby of the womb. When I closed my eyes, it felt like I was being rocked. It felt like I was in a swing; back and forth. Easy, like a fragrant spring night. I feel and hear the pulse--the rhythm, the heart in everything. In footsteps--in the wind, in the ancient river, and in the mermaid's song. I feel it in the beating of the hummingbird's wings. I see it in Van Gogh's jagged sky, in the flight pattern of the wasp. There is a rhythm in death and birth. Oh my God, the rapture of the rhythm of love and joy--so sublime. The primal beat of a heartbreak--pain, like painting with blood. So real too lucid. Icarus, let's fly into the sun, drunk on ***** or cheap wine. We'll escape--liquid smooth, until our wings melt, and we fall back down, crash to the pulse the rhythm ***  *** ***  *** ***  *** Sometimes, I wish I were a rock.
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Feb 29, 2020
Feb 29, 2020 at 4:36 PM UTC
The Womb's Lullaby
I disassociate to my "friends" lives scrolling by, I don't need any spliff or fungus to reach Peak apathetic non self congruence. Watching years pass by in seconds Is all the psychedelic room temperature Mental priming for my primate mental That I could ever hope for Before being snapped back out By the cubed carrot reward of Internet interaction Which keeps me salivating and searching For ways to increase the amount of time I don't have to associate with that guy inhabiting my body For a while I can see my problems as goners Being slowly erased from my mind like a magnet over a hard drive Until a kindly panic attack reminds my of My lack of lack of control And the selfless self centered guilt keeps me Wishing I were working instead of living Who could be so audacious As to propose a life out side
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Nov 3, 2019
Nov 3, 2019 at 3:27 PM UTC
Facebook
# #1 I’m no good at merrymaking I do it alone I do it dark And I go at it with rabid excess I am fellow to it Until morning And I make the morning hurt A mark is embed #2 Amoungst great company I am dog unwanted In the comapany of one I am villain bird I am influence I hit a drinking partner in the weak knees of weak truths And things go madly south But tonite I am alone As I ought And not sought out #3 Astray from the fireside Into the woods In the territory Where I fear to thread the pathways I shall recover my work In the graven woodland I shall face myself down And bed darkness Where I am truely wed #4 Thriving and well hausted I strain and clamp upon the energy I face my enemy My power I bide from his readings I make ****** pleasings Form verbal greeting And extend a hand For this The first of many a meeting #5 Upon this connection This Faustian reflection I make the primal The woe in me And the red wash of ravenous pages My activity My moulded tool My rage My howl against creativity
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Jul 11, 2019
Jul 11, 2019 at 8:14 PM UTC
Kiln
Laid down, the only answer that can be given. Clearer light, separate and distinct, from the same fountain. Ambition, to counteract ambition. Human nature, to reflect on human nature. Angels were to control itself. Divide and fortify. Natural defense, safety. Absolute negative connection between this weaker and the weaker. All the power surrendered. Evil will render This, turned against, broken into. Justice is the end, pursued until it be obtained, or lost in the pursuit. Unite and oppress, anarchy to rein as a state of nature, not secured against the violence.
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May 21, 2019
May 21, 2019 at 9:14 AM UTC
M.O.
like-a-night-terror slip pin g  out of vie w                                   the words elude.   so keep there the                 eyes      unfocused at paper or/// screen till the sentence---- rushes into sight.                   break it.                         ^^                  butcher it.      keep it.<<      >>  analyse it.   toss it .                                         kiss it. where w a  s it?                  was it ee ee e even here? a tremor in the night awoken without the memory (all poets say is a million different "I can't love you any other way.") of a line i wanted to write.
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May 11, 2019
May 11, 2019 at 7:40 PM UTC
remembering a line when drunk at night.
They say that the human being is a primal creature That deep down likes to bite, to scratch, to hunt Mark their own territory And like so many other primal animals, feels this intrinsic pleasure in subduing others People say many things But in my world, pleasure and pain mix together Primal creatures show their claws For others willing to be subjected I once heard that *** becomes human from the moment it becomes ****** For me however, eroticism doesn't depend on *** And the primal is the most human and the most civilized of them all Just like the ones that look at me right now They see my movement and judge me feline Sharp claws, curious look, precise movements And I don't even need to show my fangs into a smile For them to understand who the predator is After all, as I already mentioned Pleasure and pain mix
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Mar 27, 2019
Mar 27, 2019 at 2:25 PM UTC
Primal
You use to sneer at me, As if you were better than me, You use to look down at me through soft lashes, You smoked so you could slowly choke me with ashes, You would say "Without ME you are NOTHING", Well I might not be much, but I AM something, I will not stand in your shadow, I'll cast my own, I won't let your self loathing deliver me into an early grave stone, Although I must admit I crave the feeling of your flesh upon mine, I want to slide your taste over my lips like fine wine, Im slightly disgusted by this need to satisfy this primal hunger inside me, My body betrays me while an unnatural lust brings me to my knees, The only good thing about you was your ability to ****** Only through carnal cravings could we call a truce, You thought that if you could make my body feel good I would need you, You would tell me that the only thing I was good at was laying beneath you, You tried to dig me up so that I couldn't bloom where I was planted, You thought those fevered desperate kisses would keep me enchanted, I left because I got tired of your lust games, we don't share anymore perverted love claims, When I think of you now I snicker, too no one in particular, I liked how you were twisted and ****** But thats all I liked about you, Its funny how I was so drawn but also so repulsed by you, I guess that means that I'm a little sick too, I don't regret it though, cause then I'd have to admit that a part of me cared, Try not to mourn the wicked temptations that we shared, I'm fine on my own, are you;
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Dec 12, 2018
Dec 12, 2018 at 4:34 AM UTC
Lust Games
You use to sneer at me, As if you were better than me, You use to look down at me through soft lashes, You smoked so you could slowly choke me with ashes, You would say "Without ME you are NOTHING", Well I might not be much, but I AM something, I will not stand in your shadow, I'll cast my own, I won't let your self loathing deliver me into an early grave stone, Although I must admit I crave the feeling of your flesh upon mine, I want to slide your taste over my lips like fine wine, Im slightly disgusted by this need to satisfy this primal hunger inside me, My body betrays me while an unnatural lust brings me to my knees, The only good thing about you was your ability to ****** Only through carnal cravings could we call a truce, You thought that if you could make my body feel good I would need you, You would tell me that the only thing I was good at was laying beneath you, You tried to dig me up so that I couldn't bloom where I was planted, You thought those fevered desperate kisses would keep me enchanted, I left because I got tired of your lust games, we don't share anymore perverted love claims, When I think of you now I snicker, too no one in particular, I liked how you were twisted and ****** But thats all I liked about you, Its funny how I was so drawn but also so repulsed by you, I guess that means that I'm a little sick too, I don't regret it though, cause then I'd have to admit that a part of me cared, Try not to mourn the wicked temptations that we shared, I'm fine on my own, are you;
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"It Comes At Night" (Desire) First renewed Under the silver light (of the moon) "A Quiet Place" (A) Fatal Attraction There will be blood (he hopes) Venom (drips from his tongue) (as he forces open her) Jaws ****** (the) Heat "Let Him Have It" Primal Fear (is all she knows) "The Usual Suspects" Goodfellas (they claim) (making her play) The Game
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May 20, 2019
May 20, 2019 at 2:53 AM UTC
The Crime
The Sounding Foam of Primal Things *(The title and the poem, taken from and inspired by Carl Sandburg's "Who Am I?") wind and rain pound the surf. snow falls on the beach, on the shore. man-observer cannot tell: has the earth gone mad, all wet? do the seas rise, whipped up, filling the heavens, or does the white rain replenishes the very body, from whence it came, and now returns? this matters greatly, yet nothing answers this, his question. the furious soundings, the green foam churn, the silence of no response inebriates, drunk on the tempest's hard wet liquor, weighed down, sodden with the despair, solitude, silence, absent answers, his natural walking companions! No Stopping signs on almost every corner, Do Not Pass, Do Not Enter, One Way, Two Way, No Thru Passage, but the one sign he seeks, "Stay On The Path" absent. Eluded, dispassionate endings, the essential quietude among furious surround-sounds of creative destruction he ceases to ask, for unanswered, undirected. Concluded, either their is no one listening, or, there is no one caring, or, Deluded, illusion is truth, he is an illusion. ------------------
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Feb 14, 2014
Feb 14, 2014 at 10:57 PM UTC
The Sounding Foam of Primal Things
The pulse of all the universe is the vibration of Om the primal sound of the Creator it manifested from. __________________
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Sep 22, 2018
Sep 22, 2018 at 1:06 AM UTC
Simple Observation #318 - The pulse of all the universe......
...and 'oh my God' did I cry I sparked like I was made of knives and it carried me I was adopted It took me and I gave up me easily This had become dimensional Life seamed I was played I was playing I was addressing reasoning and burying it fiercely and fare Pounding clay over it and enhancing my surroundings content and without trust Restart Welled and sad Sick excited A primal plug Connected
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Apr 14, 2018
Apr 14, 2018 at 10:56 PM UTC
Spark plug [of Crying]
Eight billion people, call this planet home. Eight billion people, all of them alone. Arbitrary borders, divide and define. Who belongs where, who's on which side. Propaganda and lies, hatred and fear, accompany those borders. "You're not 'From Here'". They shout and they rant, "Protect us from harm! Protect us from monsters! who work on our farms..." Save us from humans! That are really just the same, but they look a little different, or have a "funny name". Every human is flawed, We dig our own graves, Eight Billion people, Who do not want to be saved. We have come so far, but we have to do more, to be better than primates, looking for war. Eight billion minds, That think only of one. And how they can prosper, alone in their fun. Religion and Government, forms of control. That tell you to fight, for country and soul. The heathens that march, against the life that you made, must be destroyed! It's the only way! Build us our bombs, our weapons in space, expand our borders, war is a race! Money and lead, power and greed, These are the things, we are taught to need. Complicated desires, from animalistic wants, pollute the whole planet, by "draining the swamp". We call ourselves modern, With our dollars and glass, but our future is as dismal, as our most recent past. A species divided, is one doomed to fail. And there's so much to lose, with a world this frail. Are we together? Or alone in a crowd. A decision must be made. and it has to be now.
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Dec 14, 2017
Dec 14, 2017 at 1:06 PM UTC
The loneliest herd