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#pitfall
my own mind has been my pitfall i may have eyes, but i can’t see it all have had to look outside myself cause that’s the only thing that helps to not amplify something small the calls have came from inside the house but i’ve only chose to answer now
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Feb 24
Feb 24, 2026 at 12:06 PM UTC
crawling out from the pitfall
Can the ocean really get flooded?. when the ocean in my brain gets flooded ...... my thoughts are tangled up in the tornado twisting and turning in my head surrounding my brain that fight through the tossing thoughts, emotions and feelings that my lips may have trouble speaking my pen is the oar I use to pull my drowning soul out from the troubles waters The ship wreck of words sail through the rough thinking waters running fast causing a whirlpool headache as they fight pushing and clawing at my brain walls yet surviving thoughts that were able to brake free from the storm of depression they smudge a trail through the dripping wet ink falling from my oar of a writing pen dragging behind the clustering drift wood of lost words smearing through the lines of the solid land of paper my brain calms down a bit to inspect the rest stop of provided free range of open writing space clearing the way for all the injured broken pieces of memories and lost thoughts that were still floating behind the mind is trying to stay focus by thinking, searching for any surviving notions or ideas that hangs there on the tip of my tongue tossing out the remembering lifesavers to pull in other surfacing thoughts that wants and need to be revived from the fallen debris clustered crews of gathered thoughts form as my pen holds the ink of hope and inspiration dragging my down confused depressed soul to safety by writing my trapped untold story ink its flowing through the valleys of paper marking detailing the saved unspoken words freed from the clutches of depressions prison my brain can now release its story through my scrawling pen that I hold in my writing hand There are always traps of frustration, confusion and depression; which is the worse pitfall of them all the war from the thinking process is never over preparing for their battle I take the action to grab the already loaded weapon for writing; the "INK PEN"
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Jan 16, 2017
Jan 16, 2017 at 12:27 PM UTC
Shipwrecked Thoughts
Can the ocean really get flooded?. when the ocean in my brain gets flooded ...... my thoughts are tangled up in the tornado twisting and turning in my head surrounding my brain that fight through the tossing thoughts, emotions and feelings that my lips may have trouble speaking my pen is the oar I use to pull my drowning soul out from the troubles waters The ship wreck of words sail through the rough thinking waters running fast causing a whirlpool headache as they fight pushing and clawing at my brain walls yet surviving thoughts that were able to brake free from the storm of depression they smudge a trail through the dripping wet ink falling from my oar of a writing pen dragging behind the clustering drift wood of lost words smearing through the lines of the solid land of paper my brain calms down a bit to inspect the rest stop of provided free range of open writing space clearing the way for all the injured broken pieces of memories and lost thoughts that were still floating behind the mind is trying to stay focus by thinking, searching for any surviving notions or ideas that hangs there on the tip of my tongue tossing out the remembering lifesavers to pull in other surfacing thoughts that wants and need to be revived from the fallen debris clustered crews of gathered thoughts form as my pen holds the ink of hope and inspiration dragging my down confused depressed soul to safety by writing my trapped untold story ink its flowing through the valleys of paper marking detailing the saved unspoken words freed from the clutches of depressions prison my brain can now release its story through my scrawling pen that I hold in my writing hand There are always traps of frustration, confusion and depression; which is the worse pitfall of them all the war from the thinking process is never over preparing for their battle I take the action to grab the already loaded weapon for writing; the "INK PEN"
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How do I start to tell people? That you are my favorite pitfall. You've put me into this battlefield, without me knowing all its hazards. By-and-by it's your presence, that I cannot contain this growing imminence. I saw this coming and I got immune to the pain fell deeply in love as your light slowly fades away. You challenge me you play very well, used every card even my pride in peril. Left alone with the hope you'll start to see, all the menace that abrupts everything will lead to me. If this is too much to ask of you, spare me no trouble for I am afraid too. Fck readiness fck life, for you I'd wait even until the great divide. Great distress and jeopardy, whatever happens you know you'll have me. Cold as ice you pull away, assiduously I will travail. You are the threat I will always salute, the danger I'd fiercely hang on to. All the risks you try to put me through, I'd be gratified to fight for that single fcking chance to have you.
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 10:08 PM UTC
RISKS.