#pinpoint - Hello Poetry

I don't know how I can write all this Know all this With a pinpoint, laser focus Tuned so far into, Most every issue, I come out the other side of existence To get a look at if from every angle, This ain't checkers, this is chess From biggest To littlest Catalyst, To coroner visits Call every witness There's an obvious will, To one day still, Find a bottom to this Accountability, Twords the top of the list While I skirt a bit of responsibility, Let's be honest But can't fold any of it into my healing process So after all this, And after being told it would absolutely aid in the progress, I'm still a mess Can't make it make sense ©2024

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Apr 15, 2024

Apr 15, 2024 at 3:57 PM UTC

bettsjc187

~•§•~ Can't Make it Make Sense ~•§•~

I don't know how I can write all this Know all this With a pinpoint, laser focus Tuned so far into, Most every issue, I come out the other side of existence To get a look at if from every angle, This ain't checkers, this is chess From biggest To littlest Catalyst, To coroner visits Call every witness There's an obvious will, To one day still, Find a bottom to this Accountability, Twords the top of the list While I skirt a bit of responsibility, Let's be honest But can't fold any of it into my healing process So after all this, And after being told it would absolutely aid in the progress, I'm still a mess Can't make it make sense ©2024

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I can't tell you the time I fell in love with love Where I became crazed and I started to send wishes above Where my heart first cracked, and I felt it's first attack Where the walls that grew from the floor caved in and pressed up against my back Oh, and I can't really remember where I actually felt free Where I reached that lift off my shoulders and I met serenity It's really hard to pinpoint these moments, and there's more that I haven't mentioned, but that doesn't mean they didn't happen, and that if they didn't they wouldn't. Hopefully I one day can pinpoint my first real relationship One that's mutual, forgiving, full of love, intimacy, and friendship Where my wishes came true, at least the ones that matter most And the wounds I suffered so, that they heal, or He'll turn me into a ghost That the walls fall, and I finally feel my space expand So that I can fill it with memories and things I love, making it a new land That is what I would like to pinpoint. I hope to see it manifest into reality.

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Oct 22, 2020

Oct 22, 2020 at 12:48 PM UTC

PeacefulMoth

Pinpoint

I can't tell you the time I fell in love with love Where I became crazed and I started to send wishes above Where my heart first cracked, and I felt it's first attack Where the walls that grew from the floor caved in and pressed up against my back Oh, and I can't really remember where I actually felt free Where I reached that lift off my shoulders and I met serenity It's really hard to pinpoint these moments, and there's more that I haven't mentioned, but that doesn't mean they didn't happen, and that if they didn't they wouldn't. Hopefully I one day can pinpoint my first real relationship One that's mutual, forgiving, full of love, intimacy, and friendship Where my wishes came true, at least the ones that matter most And the wounds I suffered so, that they heal, or He'll turn me into a ghost That the walls fall, and I finally feel my space expand So that I can fill it with memories and things I love, making it a new land That is what I would like to pinpoint. I hope to see it manifest into reality.

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I was told that you do not like my disjointed arms, my geekish look, my elongated legs, my unruly manner. I never knew I am imperfect, until you pinpointed my obviously beautiful flaws.

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Sep 4, 2018

Sep 4, 2018 at 9:16 AM UTC

solluna

im perfect until you

I was told that you do not like my disjointed arms, my geekish look, my elongated legs, my unruly manner. I never knew I am imperfect, until you pinpointed my obviously beautiful flaws.

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Panic when pin-pointing. Pathetic when trying. Painful pleasure. Passively flipping the page. Packing the past. Passed out from the last. Painting it fast. Put the panther back. Probably paraphrasing this. Preparing the premises. Perfect in any position. Please be consistent.

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Apr 26, 2018

Apr 26, 2018 at 11:45 AM UTC

shadow-dragon

Pin-Point

Panic when pin-pointing. Pathetic when trying. Painful pleasure. Passively flipping the page. Packing the past. Passed out from the last. Painting it fast. Put the panther back. Probably paraphrasing this. Preparing the premises. Perfect in any position. Please be consistent.

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