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Last night, I dreamt that the friend of a friend had died. His body floated lifeless on the surface of the Pacific, tossed about between the Bering Sea whitecaps like an orca’s seal-pup plaything while the Arctic wind whipped and beat the freezing cold water across his pallid face and through his chestnut hair. Then his body began to sink, its silhouette appearing against various monotone canvases of blue on its trip downward: a vivid cornflower, a pelagic cerulean, a chasm of cold cobalt, a starless twilight, a forest of indigo, a velvet curtain of navy. Finally, as it reached the deepest possible shade of midnight— only a quantum away from black— it stopped sinking. There, in that void, where daylight and color are considered but outlandish theories, strange fish of all and shapes and sizes began to surround the decomposing corpse: Greenland sharks hailing from the frozen arctic, mantis shrimp from the mangrove labyrinths, eyeless electric eels from undersea caves near the Galápagos, vampire squid rising cautiously up out of their World War One trenches, scores of spindly ***** and pale worms that had ventured far beyond the safe familiarity of their alien geothermal worlds. At first, they approached the corpse gingerly, nibbling only the tips of its hair and fingernails, and then suddenly, voraciously, they consumed it—until not even a skeleton remained. Now, only a single point of light was left there floating in the void. And from this single point of light, where just a moment before the corpse had floated, a brilliant white lattice structure emerged, unfurling as would a fern across a forest floor. It fanned out onto the seabed and then swept upward, upward back toward those reaches of sea where color is known and fresh air gleefully permeates that foamy outer membrane that skirts the base of the sky. Scores of familiar fish began to lift up the crystalline structure— schools of shimmering sardines, stately, dignified manta rays, skipjacks, bluefins, and white-tips, brilliant cuttlefish, humble pufferfish, shifty barracuda, gargantuan whale sharks, all of them beating their tails in concert to carry this lattice away, this measure of a life, this husk of a soul at last freed from its earthly bindings. The fish were carrying it somewhere deeper, somewhere darker, to a place that I understood— even from the inky depths of my dreaming mind— that I could not enter. But then again, I knew that someday I would.
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Dec 20, 2018
Dec 20, 2018 at 11:33 AM UTC
Lattice
Last night, I dreamt that the friend of a friend had died. His body floated lifeless on the surface of the Pacific, tossed about between the Bering Sea whitecaps like an orca’s seal-pup plaything while the Arctic wind whipped and beat the freezing cold water across his pallid face and through his chestnut hair. Then his body began to sink, its silhouette appearing against various monotone canvases of blue on its trip downward: a vivid cornflower, a pelagic cerulean, a chasm of cold cobalt, a starless twilight, a forest of indigo, a velvet curtain of navy. Finally, as it reached the deepest possible shade of midnight— only a quantum away from black— it stopped sinking. There, in that void, where daylight and color are considered but outlandish theories, strange fish of all and shapes and sizes began to surround the decomposing corpse: Greenland sharks hailing from the frozen arctic, mantis shrimp from the mangrove labyrinths, eyeless electric eels from undersea caves near the Galápagos, vampire squid rising cautiously up out of their World War One trenches, scores of spindly ***** and pale worms that had ventured far beyond the safe familiarity of their alien geothermal worlds. At first, they approached the corpse gingerly, nibbling only the tips of its hair and fingernails, and then suddenly, voraciously, they consumed it—until not even a skeleton remained. Now, only a single point of light was left there floating in the void. And from this single point of light, where just a moment before the corpse had floated, a brilliant white lattice structure emerged, unfurling as would a fern across a forest floor. It fanned out onto the seabed and then swept upward, upward back toward those reaches of sea where color is known and fresh air gleefully permeates that foamy outer membrane that skirts the base of the sky. Scores of familiar fish began to lift up the crystalline structure— schools of shimmering sardines, stately, dignified manta rays, skipjacks, bluefins, and white-tips, brilliant cuttlefish, humble pufferfish, shifty barracuda, gargantuan whale sharks, all of them beating their tails in concert to carry this lattice away, this measure of a life, this husk of a soul at last freed from its earthly bindings. The fish were carrying it somewhere deeper, somewhere darker, to a place that I understood— even from the inky depths of my dreaming mind— that I could not enter. But then again, I knew that someday I would.
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*The beauty of  this expression, Makes a difference in any situation. An alternative to voiced words, A weapon against the sharpest swords. Panacea for the painful heart and tearful eyes, Connects to the soldiers under other land’s skies. Exchange of feelings between lovers, In tough times, one inspiring peace, sobers. Under the spell of rain, flows straight from the soul, Always successful in covering those doubted holes. Fills the silence with its devices, Holds the power to fill the crevices. It helps in the appreciation of the serenity of nature, Although boneless, full of life and soul, it indeed is a living creature. Yes, poetry is this electric and colourful magic. Captivating all hearts and minds, its effect is so pelagic.*
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Jun 27, 2014
Jun 27, 2014 at 12:16 AM UTC
Poetry is EVERYWHERE!
What rises at night but calls to me That cymbal-crashing, moaning sea Draws me through the humid air Woe is me, again nobody is there. And in the water that I can see Reflects the moonlight back at me “Murky Mirror, call me close, I love you though I am morose.” And then the ocean whispers so slight Its voice is silvery, quiet at night. “What love is this, from your heart? Words mean nothing, they’re empty, **** “But I am more!” Cried I to the sea, “And I came here to set you free!” And so the sea sobbed a mist, “Your eyes are dark, love you twist.” Then I again yelled to the nighttide, “Why fight then, if you just subside?” So the irate waves get loose “My soul desires your water’s sluice!” “If that is your wish, then so be it.” And for the sea, my life I quit. Like a raft, I drift away From my dreams, I’ll opt to stray. I do not know where I’ve come to be In my pelagic life on the sea But while I drift here alone I can no longer hear that wretched moan.
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Oct 2, 2017
Oct 2, 2017 at 12:14 AM UTC
Love Song to the Tide