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#overachieving
Future. One word, That sends thousands to their knees. The ultimate fear, Whether acknowledged or denied. The ultimate seduction, Overlooked and overstated. It looms unendingly, A second shadow to mock your efforts. A silent lure, Tempting and drunk on its own velocity. Constant yet uncertain... Striking fear and lust, Like a taboo so sweet, Into the hearts of the fearful and the ambitious. I walk happily into the darkness, And embrace the dark temptation. Self-destruction in a heady promise Of a tremulous future.
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Nov 21, 2013
Nov 21, 2013 at 1:40 PM UTC
A Thing of Cowards and Over-Achievers
Slumped against a wall Around the back of a Home, A week without a rest and just A lifetime to Go. A golden crown rests heavily on my head, Achievement rests light on My heart, Bracing for the second when I start Seeing stars. Success is sacrifice, And sacrifice is pain. What is a winner without A life of cruel shame? Happiness is temporary, Climbing the ranks is Life. I look at fate, Fate looks back at me, And I accept the hardship with A smile.
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Aug 2, 2025
Aug 2, 2025 at 8:41 AM UTC
Have To
Inside me lives the regret of high school. Was standing beside achievers worth it? I stood proud, loud; but what did it cost me? My crippling body—frail, pale, and exhausted. Was this the trophy? Was I proud to show this? I was among the great, yet I was a pretender. A pretender that I was okay with this lifestyle— To keep up with the pressure, but was I really? In the end, who was I trying to impress? Was I supposed to feel this empty? I achieved something, yet it meant nothing. I stood on that pedestal, but the crowd was empty. Now, I carry on the weight of who I tried to be.
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Nov 23, 2024
Nov 23, 2024 at 5:01 AM UTC
high school—the cold coffee