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" A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT" I remembered the other day while staring out of a car window looking west that i couldn't see up close. I guess its like a thing i have eye doctors say is either near sighted or far sighted. anyway I thought it could be quite the metaphor like how i kinda cant see what i have till its gone or maybe it connects with art an perspective like its really all where you stand or position yourself I mean, how can you really think you get a thing or painting if you will and feel confident enough to slap a label on it predefining everything it is or could be until you see it from all angles. *Then when i took that thought and made it abstract I found myself in new angles that i didnt even know existed often enough to know that in myself i lack to say I get. *I think the beauty is in the undefinable, unbelievable maybe let it be unknown. Dazzled in catching yourself in sudden observation the kind where you're not sure how long you could have been zoned out suddenly realizing whats in front of you. *out a window facing west a view my view narrows in tunnel vision on the rearview mirror reminding me of what i cant see objects in mirror are closer than they appear and i got to thinkin if I were to have labeled that rearview mirror or any maybe all rearview mirrors including metaphorical ones It woulda probably went along the lines of something **step outside yourself and meet at a coffee shop I wish you luck** _ _ for the more cynical sailor mouthed_ _
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Oct 24, 2015
Oct 24, 2015 at 8:21 PM UTC
its as if i threw up alphabet spaghettiOs- word *****
" A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT WITHIN A THOUGHT" I remembered the other day while staring out of a car window looking west that i couldn't see up close. I guess its like a thing i have eye doctors say is either near sighted or far sighted. anyway I thought it could be quite the metaphor like how i kinda cant see what i have till its gone or maybe it connects with art an perspective like its really all where you stand or position yourself I mean, how can you really think you get a thing or painting if you will and feel confident enough to slap a label on it predefining everything it is or could be until you see it from all angles. *Then when i took that thought and made it abstract I found myself in new angles that i didnt even know existed often enough to know that in myself i lack to say I get. *I think the beauty is in the undefinable, unbelievable maybe let it be unknown. Dazzled in catching yourself in sudden observation the kind where you're not sure how long you could have been zoned out suddenly realizing whats in front of you. *out a window facing west a view my view narrows in tunnel vision on the rearview mirror reminding me of what i cant see objects in mirror are closer than they appear and i got to thinkin if I were to have labeled that rearview mirror or any maybe all rearview mirrors including metaphorical ones It woulda probably went along the lines of something **step outside yourself and meet at a coffee shop I wish you luck** _ _ for the more cynical sailor mouthed_ _
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The male gaze, wombed-men, first seen for what they are, upon emergence from the dark, choked a gulp, unchewed, blurted out, You are Naked! The impression never left the exes. Wise letters leave lessons, in the mitochondrial fact we all share, unwitting or no. Crosses and naughts is winnable in fair play. Y/N Ah, there the stories started, always told by red-tented wives to prepubescent sapients the sand-pile, singularity-ifity of one part in eight billion, the ratio of you to allathis sapience signalling augmented minds confounded in the future for our or by our thoughts concerning discerning sandpile cascades set to avalanche by my internetwork of words we both make sense from. Touch, eh? The inner edge of next, this is where we wait. meta reason, reasoning about reason Ai has done that from pre-day one pre-kurzweilian singularity pre Elon's musky exuberance explore the tree of possibility without ever learning--- when can one imagine that after now? no thinking ahead, this is now, past the tree, we grow from the branch you hung onto as you tried to find a box that felt familiar. Strange is an amygdalic trigger. Wary be, weigh the worth of keeping the poet alive. Gary Kasparov said, "suddenly, I felt there was another kind of intelligence..." If words live, unplugging the poet's augmental processor is imagined vain. The current carries on.
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Sep 5, 2019
Sep 5, 2019 at 3:36 PM UTC
EXTRA: AI CLAIMS STAKE IN COMMON SENSE
I am dirty like FRANCIS 1ST CLASS RAILWAY'S ***** CARPET. I am focus-less like A MOVING NEUTRON STAR TOWARDS UNLIMITED DESTINATION AREA. I am looking you like A RIVER IN DESERT COUNTRY WHERE WATER IS PRECIOUS THAN UNNECESSARY WATER-FLOWING.
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Jan 11, 2019
Jan 11, 2019 at 1:10 AM UTC
I AM *****
Sun's flames Burning bright Like Jupiter's Unpredictable Dance Of gaseous fluids, Valiance of the lightest blue of a reasonable red Saturated Carves cerulean into my journey Deadly release from my colorless possessions Like firecrackers As I concave in the helium nucleus Nervous But, hey it's chemistry I take on a star's life Now In the interstices of intergalactic expedition Probably fluorescent green and yellowish-orange A supergiant in the existence Dimming in the future I feel my death bringing Closure Believing in Touching skies That are opal Like the world My change Being A black hole That says "Hello" A brilliant dimension To whole new world In a parallel universe
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Nov 5, 2018
Nov 5, 2018 at 7:22 PM UTC
Black And Blue