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Take that candle from the step of the door, for too much light is there in these bed chambers to which your affection I all but owe. Would it be so wrong to love you in the dark? Here, there is nothing but soul to love. When the face and the body are but planet to all and I am left to love double crossed sticks in the ground what else will I adore? So, remove that metal plate from the step of the door. Let it melt away! Take it's harsh light to tomorrow! Leave me with today in which I shall love you more with every inch of darkness that buries this room and lets my affection sprout from within.
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Oct 29, 2017
Oct 29, 2017 at 12:36 PM UTC
Notes on a Candle.
“I am a jealous God,” said the Hebrews’ deity. Ain’t got patience for a jealous God, for I’m a spirit free. I have many idols, on this terrestrial sphere. And if I didn’t worship them, I’d surely not be here. For they are Icons, real, of what I have struggled to attain, my ideals and aspirations, or of persistence through the pain. I worship them with love, despite their fallibility. They guide me and inspire me, with their strength and creativity. For example-- modern martyrs, who’ve sacrificed for others; I'm sure that Jesus would think of them as sisters and as brothers. And rock and roll; it’s my religion; I know the Promised Land cannot be much like heaven, without my favorite band. What I seek but never find is Plato’s ideal vision-- the unseen perfect version of our seen world. My submission is to something that we know by feeling, and I think it must be said that the traveling to find it cannot start by being dead. Surely Poetry and Art are to be followed, as a creed; they can be read and seen, and then, perhaps, believed. Music is transcendent, call it the Flesh made Word-- not reserved for us in heaven, but here, on earth, is heard. Nature is a Goddess; her work is the creation; we strive to understand it, through rational “divination,” using math and science, objective experimentation. I have so many idols; I can’t limit adoration to just one jealous God and his righteous indignation. The Bible is a document that’s full of truth, I know; but it was written a long, long time ago. I’m keeping all my idols, for they soothe me and inspire me. I’ll continue in my “lifestyle” of spiritual polyamory. You may say I’m going to “Hell” for my sinful apostasy, but I’m not afraid of the future grave, for I’ll have lived with ecstasy.
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Aug 17, 2016
Aug 17, 2016 at 10:00 PM UTC
My Spiritual Polyamory
“I am a jealous God,” said the Hebrews’ deity. Ain’t got patience for a jealous God, for I’m a spirit free. I have many idols, on this terrestrial sphere. And if I didn’t worship them, I’d surely not be here. For they are Icons, real, of what I have struggled to attain, my ideals and aspirations, or of persistence through the pain. I worship them with love, despite their fallibility. They guide me and inspire me, with their strength and creativity. For example-- modern martyrs, who’ve sacrificed for others; I'm sure that Jesus would think of them as sisters and as brothers. And rock and roll; it’s my religion; I know the Promised Land cannot be much like heaven, without my favorite band. What I seek but never find is Plato’s ideal vision-- the unseen perfect version of our seen world. My submission is to something that we know by feeling, and I think it must be said that the traveling to find it cannot start by being dead. Surely Poetry and Art are to be followed, as a creed; they can be read and seen, and then, perhaps, believed. Music is transcendent, call it the Flesh made Word-- not reserved for us in heaven, but here, on earth, is heard. Nature is a Goddess; her work is the creation; we strive to understand it, through rational “divination,” using math and science, objective experimentation. I have so many idols; I can’t limit adoration to just one jealous God and his righteous indignation. The Bible is a document that’s full of truth, I know; but it was written a long, long time ago. I’m keeping all my idols, for they soothe me and inspire me. I’ll continue in my “lifestyle” of spiritual polyamory. You may say I’m going to “Hell” for my sinful apostasy, but I’m not afraid of the future grave, for I’ll have lived with ecstasy.
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