#neanderthals
The following is dedicated to two of the People I shared Ode de Joy Acres with, Dedra Scrivener, and Dr. Lawrence "Bud" Urban who was unexpectedly uploaded to New Jerusalem one day. For a while my faith (knowledge actually) and writing is what kept me going.
Poem about an actual Event in History that led to our realization that we can fight back against death; the Person who first tried to preserve her dead Loved One with Flowers! And what this "mad act" led to!
You were young and happy way back then,
Powered with life when all the Earth was new!
In joy you ran and hugged the rain washed morn,
Danced delighted where the Mountain Wildflowers grew!
You gave your Tribe such unspoken joy!
You laughed at winds and leapt at Butterflies.
They must have questioned all their beliefs,
That such as you would sicken, fall and die!
Yet sad as that they sensed Man's coming faith.
How longing causes love's eternalling powers
They sung no hymns but showed their faith
The only way they could;
They spoke with Flowers!
If all Neanderthal should have a grave,
Or monument to what they were!
If we should honor those we superseded,
In what was surely evolution's cruelest hour!
Let it show these Able Brothers
Though clubbed to death by Cain,
Knew all of Human feelings,
All the pleasure, all the pain!
Not Savages! Not brutish Beasts were they!
Human as ourselves with Human Powers!
That we should learn the truth in such a way!
Silent, awesome, statements taught by Flowers!
Jan 8
Jan 8, 2026 at 7:05 PM UTC
(The Flowery Roots of Heaven!)
You were young and happy way back then!
Powered with Life when all the Earth was new!
In Joy you ran to greet the rain-washed Morn!
Danced delighted where
The Mountain Wildflowers grew!
You gave your Tribe such joy!
You laughed at winds and lept at Butterflies.
They must have felt within themselves
A thousand little deaths,
For the one and only one that you did die!
But SHE would not accept that you were dead!
Held to her ******* your futile cold and fading form!
The others thought her mad! They had no ken!
This was but the calm before the storm!
Soon you stank! The others grumped.
So she went before the dawn!
And gathered in her desperate arms
The Flowers that made you dance!
And flung hoards and piles upon your rotting form!
Flash forward now! Millions of labs!
The Networked World,
And up above our heads
Waltzing like silent clocks, our satellites
And all of Science seeks just as she sought,
That all the ones we love do not stay dead!
Flash Forward more: New Jerusalem!
A rainbow colored cube covered in gems!
Shining powerfully with Light and Love and joy!
Animals and Plants...The Carpenter!
Fourteen hundred miles of Forever-Life within!
They laughed bitterly at her
That withering weeds could bring back what reality forbid!
That fading flowers could resurrect a dying dance
Well it took awhile….
…...They DiD!
Jan 8
Jan 8, 2026 at 6:56 PM UTC
Lawrence Hall
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https://hellopoetry.com/lawrence-hall/
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com
Hey, I Really am a Neanderthal!
The spit-into-a-cup DNA folks
Advise me that 742 strands
Of vintage Neanderthal DNA
Are roaming loose in the tunnels of my being
It’s good to be descended from a fine old family
Maybe that’s why my ideas drag the ground
As I lope along following the science
Live chicken tastes a lot like rattlesnake
Why don’t you join me for dinner with the neighbors?
Their brains will go well with hyena blood
Mar 19, 2021
Mar 19, 2021 at 9:03 AM UTC
To all bone fragments of Galeria Del Osario
1.
I want to place you in the depths of forgetting.
Place you like a butterfly in a frame, looking alive but dead of course. Place you like how numbers are arranged from 1 to infinity (but who cares to count?) Place you like how chaos displaced darkness. Place you in the tip of a glacier knowing that the entire block will just disappear in a decade or two.
Like how climate tries to displace us. Our trace will soon be forgotten.
2.
Surely, the climate is too rigid between us; two beings who found separation in all degrees of telekinetic attractions. For two beings who found shelter in the anonymity of chance. Chance to meet. Chance to declare once and for all the unfolding of luck.
Did luck really unfold or it was just me who hoped?
3.
Time is the bare witness to all tragedies, say two lovers who never found the consolations of fate. Time is the curse of the flesh, the rotting wisdom of conscience.
Time flees. Time forgets. Time remembers.
4.
By all means, the world is too small. Sometimes we wage war to small dimensions seemingly large. Where are we by the time that the world collapses into a small room? Where are we when the room pretended to be small but the gap between us is a year, light years perhaps.
Nomads, we are not. We cannot call any cave a home.
After all, what sort of space would cater us?
5.
A massacre happened 43,000 years ago. No one cares to remember. Nine of them were killed by new comers. El Sidron witnessed the coldest crime. If only tears can shed their fate, can we cry for them?
Who cares to write their memories? Who cares to paint their thoughts? Who cares to count their broken bone fragments in the caves?
I want to place you in the depths of forgetting.
Oct 2, 2016
Oct 2, 2016 at 3:29 AM UTC
After all, poetry is a savage calling.
-Edel Garcellano
Let poetry be an interstice.
Say, an intervention to the gap of loneliness. Depressive. Let bitter medicines dissolve or, madness will make its ultimate call. Convulsive patterns of mental spasms. Schizophrenic impulse hitting the nerves.
What is known to be rational flees. Enough to learn from the burning of its wings and Youth.
Say, pulling a magic trick under the hat. You know you are being fooled but why enjoy such spectacle or, better enjoy than masking the truth.
Say, a glimpse through an interstice—from Whitman’s poetry.
An intervention to the rashness of day. An intercept to the chaos of the soul. A reminder that we are not assemblages forever desiring.
A poetry fumbling to the course, enough to welcome the rain of sad realizations.
“The task is heroic. Poetry is a minor matter” (E. Garcellano) – an intervention/interstice, the negotiator to the ultimate task of poetry.
We are savage gods. We feed on the detritus of truth, those are, lies.
Consider this poetry as an epitaph. To the disremembered victims of El Sidro. We dealt the cards of fate. We intervened to live. We pierced our stones to their hearts so cold.
Darwin’s prophesy always reminds us that in every epoch there are some interventions we cannot avoid. After all, we are his favorite animal.
We are gods feeding on loneliness. We are agnostic souls entangled in caves of shadows.
Say, are we forever trapped in the compulsive dimensions of ourselves? In love, for example.
To answer this question is the task of poetry.
Let poetry be an interstice.
Oct 1, 2016
Oct 1, 2016 at 7:46 AM UTC