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#narcolepsy
. often   i am retrodden   after passing a lengthy sleep battle day following day      i wake in and out   loftily bobbing   nodding into conversation  and durring out                                            like a tiny failing electric fan   struggling to appear present and take part    then whirring   into a congested cumulus   a colleague, (name slips me), sips her coffee she dribbles her features into her colourful lap her words become a slury chum of incoherence (she may snap back if i have energy to retrieve her she may  upon a whim   form another person altogether) i have accumulated a D.S.C. (Depression Support Creature) the opposing to what may seem                                                                  this fella supports my depressions feature being and monitor's my decline fleshed out to drain me                                                                 whilst acting as a detracting blurred vision shaking in a drabby coat  and baring its dumbed face i'm turned inward on drooping wealth                                                      and rot in the anxious conglomeration a distracted reality from reality already conquered                          flagged and declared ;     the phony thing that's real
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Oct 22, 2024
Oct 22, 2024 at 10:31 PM UTC
results of sleep deprivation
. often   i am retrodden   after passing a lengthy sleep battle day following day      i wake in and out   loftily bobbing   nodding into conversation  and durring out                                            like a tiny failing electric fan   struggling to appear present and take part    then whirring   into a congested cumulus   a colleague, (name slips me), sips her coffee she dribbles her features into her colourful lap her words become a slury chum of incoherence (she may snap back if i have energy to retrieve her she may  upon a whim   form another person altogether) i have accumulated a D.S.C. (Depression Support Creature) the opposing to what may seem                                                                  this fella supports my depressions feature being and monitor's my decline fleshed out to drain me                                                                 whilst acting as a detracting blurred vision shaking in a drabby coat  and baring its dumbed face i'm turned inward on drooping wealth                                                      and rot in the anxious conglomeration a distracted reality from reality already conquered                          flagged and declared ;     the phony thing that's real
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You aren't here You aren't anywhere. All you ever do in life Is blow clouds through the air, Wasting away through strife. You know your wife hates it. You know your children do. You know that all our money goes To your selfish habits and you As your addiction grows I love you though... I just wish you'd end this phase- The one that's spending all our cash And shortening your days until You're turned into dust and ash. You're an absent father (MY absent father..) Only here when you need to be Then you're gone for the end of this verse And most in between Either spaced out, asleep, or hearsed.
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Jul 5, 2021
Jul 5, 2021 at 2:44 PM UTC
In Your Absence,
A continuation of places I have fallen asleep - at the movies - my dermatologist appointment - the dentist - getting my nails done - the back room of my work - the car on short rides - the car on long rides - 5 minutes after waking up in my bed - the couch at 7pm - the couch at 7am - the grass in the garden - the beach - a portable hammock laying on my side - waiting for the doctors appointment - on the train - on the bus
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Jan 15, 2021
Jan 15, 2021 at 3:36 AM UTC
Places I have fallen asleep - a never ending poem
You ask me how I am “Tired” I say I slur You preach your 3 hours of sleep As though it is a feat A competition in your mind I know I have already won Yet mine isn’t so victorious I have felt years of heavy eyelids pulled down by black fingernails, the bruised under eyes and lust for more sleep A weak bag of bones is all I am now Collapsed at a laugh Or a cry My muscles show no strength Neither do I
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Jan 9, 2021
Jan 9, 2021 at 6:25 PM UTC
Narcolepsy Type 1
Like a sinful seduction, I slip off the edge of sleep, my eyes are drawn to the darkest shadows of my room... kinetically searching... I seem to penetrate them, my mind breathes life into them, they begin to stir and morph into the preludes to my peculiar dreams, bizarre at first until inevitably familiar, as if I had lived them indefinite times in the past... and infinite times in the future... remembering... becoming... unfiltered and unaffected... my subconscious is my truth, awakened by my dreams. I long to remain lost in this ethereal bliss.
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Sep 23, 2018
Sep 23, 2018 at 8:51 AM UTC
Ethereal Bliss
Soft pillow cases Engulf my skull like a magical marshmallowy surprise taking away my sub-concious every second e v e r y s e c o n d I'm still awake! daydreaming of daydreams wandering thoughts inside-out Jibbing jabber Clattering matter faster faster faster!! f i n d i n g zzzzzzzzzzz.........
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Sep 7, 2018
Sep 7, 2018 at 5:00 PM UTC
Making Love to my CPAP
One, two, three What do you see? I'll fall asleep Eventually.......
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Sep 7, 2018
Sep 7, 2018 at 12:46 AM UTC
Modaphinil Pill Thrill
“I am tired,” I say You ask if I was up late Last night And instead of telling you about My hypocretin levels I nod And laugh and say “Something like that.” “What, are you tired?” My coach asks He thinks he is Trying to motivate me But he does not know That my very existence is Bone crushingly exhausting And yes, I am tired But I wouldn’t expect him To understand So I say nothing When I say I have narcolepsy And you say “Must be nice, being able To fall asleep anywhere,” I have never related To Ted Bundy more in My entire life You suggest I stop Drinking coffee I suggest you stop breathing Teachers talk about the Impact of sleep on Mental health and I think Maybe that’s why I’m always depressed My doctor suggests I stop Drinking coffee too I am a little worried now I google “Caffeine related heart attacks In teens” My findings are not enough to Convince me and besides, A hospital visit Is just an opportune moment For a nap
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Jun 13, 2018
Jun 13, 2018 at 11:12 AM UTC
Narcolepsy: A Rant
My dreams whisper sweet things And surreptitiously speak to me My waking words are rote and empty -spilling with hypocrisy Yet their comforting embrace Simply bring smiles to my face Filling my mind while I'm asleep They send messages lined with silver That vanish when I wake To bring about a dull and listless form Who is shaping my last mistake You see I wake in a storm Simultaneously feeling constrained To my bed I can't get up while there's no filter For the rush of noises in my head If there's a difference between What you know and what you believe Then why is it not as easy To imagine my reprieve Why can I only experience a vivid life While I sleep Then once again wake up To this Fear Doubt and Anger Choking me Invoking me by pushing buttons Of their endless promises To for certain be found in youth While my vision is livid sinning Contemplating and pinpointing Who too close is uncouth You sit there and feed my veins An explanation to your lies With all the compromised Washed up water Memorized methods Coping mechanisms While it's your heart that remains Aloof Then sit there in desperation Reiterating as if you know The deep introspective answer When any fool can see your wisdom Is wrought in the vanity Of a talented dancer If you lost the truth of sanity Would you retrieve it for ten cents Or would you search inside Before hiding from the confines Of a necessary moment I'd rather die or sacrifice my life Before cowering from what's hidden The message so raw That counts your flaws Like there was some proof In what is missing But ultimately I guess It comes down to the small decision The chip on my shoulder That became a boulder When I reached out For my inner vision. So while I feel so disparate and alone In the trenches losing my senses Will I be the hero or be the villain Will I let the poison make me it's toy Or take the penicillin *Some days my life feels as heavy As that last breath left over From how loudly I shout But I guess a general synopsis to you Of how I sometimes feel inside Is a decent first step to waking up While I'm down and out*
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Jul 3, 2017
Jul 3, 2017 at 4:53 AM UTC
Waking Up
My dreams whisper sweet things And surreptitiously speak to me My waking words are rote and empty -spilling with hypocrisy Yet their comforting embrace Simply bring smiles to my face Filling my mind while I'm asleep They send messages lined with silver That vanish when I wake To bring about a dull and listless form Who is shaping my last mistake You see I wake in a storm Simultaneously feeling constrained To my bed I can't get up while there's no filter For the rush of noises in my head If there's a difference between What you know and what you believe Then why is it not as easy To imagine my reprieve Why can I only experience a vivid life While I sleep Then once again wake up To this Fear Doubt and Anger Choking me Invoking me by pushing buttons Of their endless promises To for certain be found in youth While my vision is livid sinning Contemplating and pinpointing Who too close is uncouth You sit there and feed my veins An explanation to your lies With all the compromised Washed up water Memorized methods Coping mechanisms While it's your heart that remains Aloof Then sit there in desperation Reiterating as if you know The deep introspective answer When any fool can see your wisdom Is wrought in the vanity Of a talented dancer If you lost the truth of sanity Would you retrieve it for ten cents Or would you search inside Before hiding from the confines Of a necessary moment I'd rather die or sacrifice my life Before cowering from what's hidden The message so raw That counts your flaws Like there was some proof In what is missing But ultimately I guess It comes down to the small decision The chip on my shoulder That became a boulder When I reached out For my inner vision. So while I feel so disparate and alone In the trenches losing my senses Will I be the hero or be the villain Will I let the poison make me it's toy Or take the penicillin *Some days my life feels as heavy As that last breath left over From how loudly I shout But I guess a general synopsis to you Of how I sometimes feel inside Is a decent first step to waking up While I'm down and out*
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Narcolepsy Your muscles collapse, palms sweat, darkness drowns your body with a sleep attack. Hallucinations break in and leave your mind numb, while awake at 3 am wondering why? The next morning you think it's going to be better but your wrong. It's an ongoing suffering pain and misery in a darkness that no one can ever imagine  unless they have your "disease"
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Nov 1, 2016
Nov 1, 2016 at 11:16 PM UTC
No One Understands
A beautiful butterfly beams by in the brisk bright morning hours. The alliteration of the first line is enough to make you swoon. Beauty comes in many forms as such as an amazing altogether auspicious line of aggressive, aggrandizing well written word play But just think of the amount of well written expression that was possible with any of those starter lines. Instead you are full of nagging narcolepsy that nags at your knees. Falling below even the fewest standards
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Jun 27, 2016
Jun 27, 2016 at 7:38 PM UTC
Aliteration in progress
Schrodinger's potential is kinetic. A life unknowing fault versus genetic.
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May 12, 2015
May 12, 2015 at 11:57 AM UTC
Seattle
It appears as though shadows are not of concern, To they who shed light upon every return. I am certain the sun cannot fathom night falling, And really, why would he care? For the curtain that's calling long after you're done, To be gone, I don't believe is unfair. It appears as though shadows are not of concern, To they who shed light upon every return.
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May 10, 2015
May 10, 2015 at 2:39 PM UTC
hallucid
I found out there was fire lingering beneath this skin, but it isn't of desire and I don't want to begin accepting death because a pressure expects breath because of flesh. I need a cure that isn't time for expiration of the fresh. For incessant insecure impressions, For obscure convalescent depression. For when the most unsure become expected to procure From those defaulted most demure, the idolatry sense of pure(ity) [Pure] (it evil answer idol along and so sure) purity villains were right all along and so sure maybe for eternity despite killing wrong I'm insecure. 'twas thought was sure Now wrought hot fur-(y) (Fur)[y motion] from the prime upon itself, [Emotion] To where the very notion of good health, fuels firey devotion to destroy myself. I found out there was fire lingering beneath this skin, but it isn't of desire and I don't want to begin accepting death because a pressure expects breath because of flesh. I need a cure that isn't time for expiration of the fresh. I'm where the very notion of good health, fuels firey devotion to destroy myself.
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Apr 25, 2015
Apr 25, 2015 at 4:55 PM UTC
Untitled
Emptied; by past astounded Dreamt disasters unfounded. But you. To bear. Bury myself in you. Instead keeping my ground To bed sleeping is bound Unspoken tones across                 a planet, how profound Awoken stones no moss                 we plan it, rolling now around In eachother we drown within deep resounding   Finding you surround me    Serenity has found me.    And i let love confound me. And you. To bear. I bury me in you.
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Mar 10, 2015
Mar 10, 2015 at 4:53 PM UTC
knightbears
They tolerate it because it's completely voluntary and there's nothing riding on their presence around me. Consolidated becomes the repeated solitary hiding, far gone pleasantries by loneliness compounding.
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Mar 9, 2015
Mar 9, 2015 at 7:14 PM UTC
taller80
A plot we fought in every room Distraught devouring the bloom Forgot the seed inside the womb We ought to make this house a tomb
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Mar 6, 2015
Mar 6, 2015 at 3:30 AM UTC
CBa
I'm just I can't feel my lips on my face so still i cant move them on their own i can't tell if they are parted i can't tell if they exist i can't feel my hips or my feet, or my lefs i can't move them i can't feel them i want to break i want all of the confusion, the disconnectedness i can cry but i can't escape this and i can't can't escape this there is no break a million scattered shattered steps stood stunning chameleon flattered I can't move. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6n_z-FdEkw&feature;=youtu.be ^unlisted
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Feb 28, 2015
Feb 28, 2015 at 11:59 AM UTC
Atypical Narcolepsy
I'm so ******* dizzy from remaining in one place while the world thrashes around me and collapses into space it's a wonder just how breathless i am left when the whole race i ran immobile unsure whether to flee from the life ever-giving chase
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Feb 3, 2015
Feb 3, 2015 at 7:46 PM UTC
Adelante
We're free To do, to say, to be Whatever makes you proud of me I can oblige, I don’t agree I can't see eye to eye, you see I'd lie to try evade that sigh Assumed reply consumed by why I had no say conceived the sky Each passing day perceived too high Trespassing lay bereaved to die Til watered ground believed too dry The forest falls; no use to cry You never asked to be born to any life Your say, it mattered none If ever tasked to bring morning with a knife Poor day, pit-pattered sun Wore spray, spit-spattered gun Swore stay, sit-shattered spun Floor display wit tattered won Door away fitted undone ***** will say bitter begun A score to play hit her home run Too poor to pay **** owing one A roar made sore ripcords I tore Demanding, MORE! Standing, what for? No landing, or Backhanding, or Still stand ignore Can't stand no more
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Jan 26, 2015
Jan 26, 2015 at 3:58 PM UTC
PROMPT: Free Will (?)
Narcoleptic storyteller living the dream; it's a ******* nightmare. Dark eclectic gory hell or giving up steam; watered luck is right there. Appear today; drawn tomorrow I could tell which words you borrow Inconvenienced shades of gray Eighty shades of sorrow weigh today, which way to say, I will stay here when you stray hear they may play fear, bray they pay dear Ever listen on to bold tomorrows.
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Jan 20, 2015
Jan 20, 2015 at 5:01 AM UTC
Bio
it's nice to know it's not for naught there's value in what can't be bought where my plans convene with thought i invest different kind of plot honeycomb are to the bees as madness is to mysteries and are polite priorities nectar of insecurities? the recounted sheep are bleating/(bleeding) cry of wolf to deaf misleading as i bray again repeating every note so self-defeating thrown about the limbs of trees chaos with-in-discrepancies that which we melt just to freeze wring tangles such as these my journey is while they sleep shepherdess lost counted sheep the edge, again, to fall or leap for flight first failure grade so steep My white whale wild in the seas This ship no sail, nor north agrees Ever-spurning taste of tease I am ahabs intricacies to illusion am i ****** eternally roaming the land through burning thirst for empathy -i'm plagued with insecurity in an old biblical story mortal glimpsed our father's glory From that instant's blinding light was driven mad took his own sight if i could measure and define truth and where it draws the line which cliff faces only mine encases truly, i am fine chronic illness violently supressing luminocity onlookers hang silently as ash consume ferocity speed builds on tracks in my train I know this is too fast, again upon myself, 'you dare complain, without reference to real pain?' all avert their eyes, refrain saying nothing is my bane am i alone and insane? this focus that i can't explain? creating reason for my pain purpose for and by diseased brain
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Jan 20, 2015
Jan 20, 2015 at 1:00 AM UTC
Untitled
it's nice to know it's not for naught there's value in what can't be bought where my plans convene with thought i invest different kind of plot honeycomb are to the bees as madness is to mysteries and are polite priorities nectar of insecurities? the recounted sheep are bleating/(bleeding) cry of wolf to deaf misleading as i bray again repeating every note so self-defeating thrown about the limbs of trees chaos with-in-discrepancies that which we melt just to freeze wring tangles such as these my journey is while they sleep shepherdess lost counted sheep the edge, again, to fall or leap for flight first failure grade so steep My white whale wild in the seas This ship no sail, nor north agrees Ever-spurning taste of tease I am ahabs intricacies to illusion am i ****** eternally roaming the land through burning thirst for empathy -i'm plagued with insecurity in an old biblical story mortal glimpsed our father's glory From that instant's blinding light was driven mad took his own sight if i could measure and define truth and where it draws the line which cliff faces only mine encases truly, i am fine chronic illness violently supressing luminocity onlookers hang silently as ash consume ferocity speed builds on tracks in my train I know this is too fast, again upon myself, 'you dare complain, without reference to real pain?' all avert their eyes, refrain saying nothing is my bane am i alone and insane? this focus that i can't explain? creating reason for my pain purpose for and by diseased brain
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