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#metro
I’m so happy someone slap me bring me back to earth before I float away, like a bird This is a short week, before a 4-day weekend. It’s time to push it. The density of study per square minute is chaotically high - but worth it. If I can get everything done, I’ll have days to shake off the smallness of school, perk-up my vital-signs and revitalise. I’m motivated, elated and intoxicated at the thought of it - I’m twirling in front of mirrors - can these feelings even be articulated? I’m dancing through metro crowds the uneven cobblestones feel like clouds I blew a kiss to a busking mime while bopping to ‘Lady Gaga’ sounds I shocked an old lady with an act of voluntary kindness - I gave her my seat on the metro she had groceries and looked about eighty People aren’t mean, they’re just mindless it’s a form of situational blindness I hope you guys have a great weekend too, just relaxin’ and passing into springtime. . . A song for this: Kissing Strangers feat. Nicki Minaj) by DNCE [E] Back 2 Back by Dazy Chain
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Mar 31
Mar 31, 2026 at 12:02 AM UTC
slap me
Bleary-eyed, an old man asks for change, coins rattling in his hand. A woman hands him saltine crackers across the aisle. “God bless you,” he mutters, takes a seat, and unwraps the plastic with shaking hands. He smiles at her before she leaves the train. Tonight, the passengers on the train are surprisingly quiet for a change. We are all staring down at our hands. And then the silence breaks - a woman cackles aloud to herself in her seat. Her laughter travels up and down the aisle. I overhear a conversation across the aisle between a couple who’ve just entered the train, and are searching for a pair of empty seats. They’re muttering “the country is changing” and they say they are afraid. The woman sighs, and reaches for her lover’s hand. I look over at a child holding her mother’s hand. I meet the little girl’s gaze from across the aisle. I see myself as a child too, but to her I’m a woman. I wonder how often the little girl rides the train. Does she long to see something else for a change - something other than the back of a seat? I notice a lady who has started dancing in her seat, snapping her fingers and waving her hands, bobbing to a silent beat. I imagine her changing into a sequined dress and waltzing down the aisle, giving everyone a performance to watch on the train. I imagine standing up and dancing with that woman and then everyone begins to dance with the woman - we all jump up onto our seats and suddenly we are in a ballroom, not a train. We are tapping our feet and clapping our hands to the music - the little girl across the aisle is dancing with the old man who asked for change. The train stops. We’ve arrived at my station. The dancing woman leaves the train. The passengers change and now there are strangers in their seats. I wave my hand goodbye to the little girl as I walk past her down the aisle.
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Mar 6, 2021
Mar 6, 2021 at 7:50 PM UTC
Metro Expo Link, a Sestina
Bleary-eyed, an old man asks for change, coins rattling in his hand. A woman hands him saltine crackers across the aisle. “God bless you,” he mutters, takes a seat, and unwraps the plastic with shaking hands. He smiles at her before she leaves the train. Tonight, the passengers on the train are surprisingly quiet for a change. We are all staring down at our hands. And then the silence breaks - a woman cackles aloud to herself in her seat. Her laughter travels up and down the aisle. I overhear a conversation across the aisle between a couple who’ve just entered the train, and are searching for a pair of empty seats. They’re muttering “the country is changing” and they say they are afraid. The woman sighs, and reaches for her lover’s hand. I look over at a child holding her mother’s hand. I meet the little girl’s gaze from across the aisle. I see myself as a child too, but to her I’m a woman. I wonder how often the little girl rides the train. Does she long to see something else for a change - something other than the back of a seat? I notice a lady who has started dancing in her seat, snapping her fingers and waving her hands, bobbing to a silent beat. I imagine her changing into a sequined dress and waltzing down the aisle, giving everyone a performance to watch on the train. I imagine standing up and dancing with that woman and then everyone begins to dance with the woman - we all jump up onto our seats and suddenly we are in a ballroom, not a train. We are tapping our feet and clapping our hands to the music - the little girl across the aisle is dancing with the old man who asked for change. The train stops. We’ve arrived at my station. The dancing woman leaves the train. The passengers change and now there are strangers in their seats. I wave my hand goodbye to the little girl as I walk past her down the aisle.
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i close my eyes as the Metro carriage sways from side to side giving off that constant comforting roar as it flies along the winding northern track that ends at nowhere special. i used to get off a Pelaw; the platform there seemed like a concrete field of possibility where love was just on the other side. now it seems wide, grey and pointless. a forlorn nostalgia washes over me as i pass Pelaw station. it is winter now, and the memory of those days warms my cold morning mind as i wind past it always looking back.
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Nov 9, 2020
Nov 9, 2020 at 3:19 AM UTC
Pelaw
‪huminga ka.‬ ‪hindi porket nagparamdam siya, ‬ ‪susubukan mo kung may pag asa pa;‬ ‪kung may natitira pa.‬ ‪sa oras na ‘to na lahat ay magkakalayo, ‬ ‪na lahat ng tao’y may distansiyang higit sa isang metro, ‬ ‪isabay mo na rin ang puso mo. ‬ ‪di lahat ng bagay, may pagasang bumalik sayo.‬
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Mar 25, 2020
Mar 25, 2020 at 9:06 AM UTC
metro
that feeling you get when you’re on the tube and you’ve got that song blasting in your cheap earphones you stare out the window, not that there’s anything to look at just a blurry wall you think yourself to be some sort of cinematic genius in these moments you watch yourself in something of a movie where you’re the director, the star, and the writer it’s emotional and perfect like a stupid ******* indie music video for the song you love that nobody knows
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Mar 4, 2020
Mar 4, 2020 at 1:55 PM UTC
watch yourself in a movie
Ek metro, saanp si guzar rahi hai kuch duur Ek nabh faila hai uske upar - Neela sa kaala Ek chaand chamak raha hai uss nabh mein Kuch baadal sarak rahe hain paas mein uske Usi metro ki tarah par dheere zara Thandi hawayei hain. Usme goonjta mera aaj khada Kuch thandak hai inn hawaon mein Aur bohot sara sukoon bhara Aisi hi hoti hai wo chaand ki thandak? Jinhen sunte, apna bachpan beet gaya Kya sheetalta swarg ki aisi hai kahin? Jisey suna kayion ka jeevan guzar gaya Kya raambaan sukh yahi toh nahi Kya kamdhenu vriksha aisa tha kabhi Kya Ramcharitmanas mein hanumat Ka Rambhakti amrit lagta tha yun hi? Aisa hi amritmay bachpan mein, yaad hai mujhko lagta tha Zameen se shuru uss lambi khidki Se yahi chaand chamakta dikhta tha Mama sa ban chup shant bhav se Kuch baatein meri sunta tha Kyunki khud bhumi par bistar pe so Holi mujhe khilayi thi Khud bhookhe reh uss ke paiso Se mere bhai ko idli chakhayi thi Bohot pasand thi usko uski idli Aur rangbhari mujhe holi meri Kya kabhi unhen main unka wapas Ye rinn chukta kar paungi Kya kabhi unnsi balwaan main ban kar Unke liye itna kar paungi? Kya usi chaand ki thandak si khushiyan Unki jholi mein bhar paungi? Kya bhool maaf karne ki hadd Ko paar kar kar ke thake nahi wo? Kya raat bhar bhi jagkar subah Hans dawa banna bhoole nahi wo Kya insaani roop mein hain Bhagwan, "maa baap" kehlate jo?
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Nov 29, 2019
Nov 29, 2019 at 10:16 AM UTC
Maa Baap
An emergency macaroon on a boulevard, in March, Because my sugar levels dropping, mind foggy, dopamine high crashing; because legs aching; I can’t unknot the multi-coloured tangles this evening; because yesterday; because I said yes; because. Because you never said in so many words. You say there is cloud cover with chance of rain, but you know there will be rain because you have a headache. You can tell but you can’t say.
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Jun 5, 2018
Jun 5, 2018 at 3:21 PM UTC
To Brighton With Love
Coffee blotched wool woven seats Impassive solidarity on your *** Dank rapidness Screeching scream let loose as we transend Through bleak blackness Thoughts stream "Wisdom teeth dont make you any brighter" "But Starbucks coffee makes my stomach..." ...turn left Stale air in my every crevasse The doors to the train open Crowded shuffles between aged avacado quiescent places Those weary may rest on, float on Shallow jolted perfume As cucumber melon intoxication erupts On undetermined destinations Aspiring poets gaze Out into the open world of Twinkling city stars On curved paths On dipped forks in the road "All passengers must exit" Crowded shuffles between aged avacado quiescent places Those weary return home
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Feb 11, 2018
Feb 11, 2018 at 11:54 AM UTC
Train
You always said you believed in people, even though they didn't always had faith in you. You also said that your brain does not believe in a primordial God   but that your heart does. It was always a matter of proximity, with the brain being closer to the mouth and pushing all of its messages.. the right messages. You said that you weren't convinced by the making of the cross sign because it started with the brain and ended with the heart - people always remember the last part and never the beginning you said. But I knew you had it in you - the words in the prayers you mumbled on the metro, hoping that no suicide bomber went in the same direction, in that moment, helped you have a pleasant journey. Yeah, I heard you. It convinced me to not push the button. the words came from the heart and, by the time you got to the end of it, your brain would have no other choice but to surrender. Another victory. Another loss. You pick. May your non God not bless the non believers. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9iGxoJnygW8]
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Jun 29, 2017
Jun 29, 2017 at 10:12 AM UTC
#contradiction
Sometimes I Shazam random songs. I don't even have to like'em or anything.. I just do it. Press the big blue button and wait for it to do its job. I'm always sad when it says it's sorry and returns no result. "They didn't quite catch that. Try again". Who does? Sometimes I Shazam random noises on the metro, Hoping it will pick up the coolest soundtrack of a movie I'm in, Just before the credits, When everything goes dark - but not because of a random suicide bomber that hates life and wants revenge or something. It returns no results and the TV suddenly goes louder in my head and there are 23 victims and we're all posting kittens on Facebook to show that we're not afraid. Sometimes I Shazam my parents voices while they're telling me how their day went and I discover really cool indie artists that make me listen to their work in a loop. Once, I Shazamed your heartbeat while you were sleeping. It returned my name. Can't remember the album, but it had a nice cover photo. I never Shazamed my own voice, nor my heartbeat. I'm too afraid it'll show nothing worth listening to. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A107BwLLGbE]
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Jun 18, 2017
Jun 18, 2017 at 3:23 PM UTC
#TapToShazam
I see great ***** every day in the subway and, suddenly, my favorite Hitchcock movie changes from Rear Window to Vertigo. The movement of the train calms me down and I fall asleep quickly, dreaming that I'm in Kerouac's car, quietly hitting the road like ******* hit his canvas. I see great ******* every day on the bus that takes me home, but not one single ***** for me to lay my ear on. The dream comes to a crossroad where me and Jack have to part ways. He'll go down in history like a great writer and I'll quietly go down on memory lane in oblivion. Memory disappointed me and left a bad taste in my mouth - literary *********** ain't what it used to be.
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Jun 9, 2017
Jun 9, 2017 at 1:56 PM UTC
#REM
Pods routed back and forth Inside Cells linked to the central nervous system Soulless The cry of a sapling Lush, primal sounds But deaf to the neighbours All distracted by a stream A tweet "Doors closing..." Repeated beeps Launching sprints Rivalling Olympians But not all pass the finish line The end of the line: School Work Leisure Three modes activated Upon the opening of pod doors A hurry Never stopping Never hearing Never open Of hearts Wallets A song from yesterday The flower withers Pulp for pennies The flower withers Only so much could be done Outside the system
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Nov 16, 2016
Nov 16, 2016 at 11:17 PM UTC
System (a Singapore subway)
The apparition of these faces in the crowd; Petals on a wet, black bough.
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Jul 22, 2016
Jul 22, 2016 at 2:52 PM UTC
In a Station of the Metro (Haiku by Ezra Pound)
They’re all in a hurry. All of these brave men and women are in a hurry. They’re anxious to get home and **** off before their significant others arrive, ready for a home sweet home experience, with fine wine and cheesy shows on the tube. Life simply goes on in cycles, like a loop video on the metro CCTV. No heart attack spikes, no heavy breathing, no chance for a near death experience. We are all obedient mother/father ******* waiting for the wind to put down the big old tree in front of our house, so we can have a hot topic on our Facebook walls. Trying to be different, mostly in a verbal manner, is like performing **** with a ***** dolphin, in front of a tank full of happy sharks. We’re all in a hurry, tryin’ to get back home and **** off good before the significant part of our life begins.
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Jul 4, 2016
Jul 4, 2016 at 11:08 AM UTC
#routine
Every morning I wake up in a city that feels a little more familiar each time my eyelids bloom daffodils on a fire escape horizon. Maybe I’m in love with a Newness that begins to feel like Home. Maybe I dream dumpsters in Flatbush or shoot Harlem into my forearms. Use telephone wires as tourniquets. Maybe this girl I’ve been seeing has traces of Paradise in her bloodstream.                                                                                       And then I have to remember this city is home to                                            Pizza Rat, and bedbugs in the metro benches,                                            and **** Holly Golightly,                                            she never had to take the F train. But maybe she and I can share some unspoken reality, and I’ll walk down 5th Ave. one day holding my lover’s hand as the sun turns sidewalks silver and we’ll decide to grab a croissant.
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Jan 14, 2016
Jan 14, 2016 at 11:44 AM UTC
But I Still Can't Afford Tiffany's
Early days as a flaneur; I recall the couple On the Metro When I was still innocent Of its labyrinthine complexities; Slim pretty white girl, Clad head to toe In new blue denim, Wistfully smiling While her muscular black beau Stared straight through me With fathomless, fulgorous orbs; And one of them spoke (Almost in a whisper): "Qu'est-ce que t'en pense?" Then it dawned on me... The slender young Parisienne With the distant desirous eyes Was no less male than I. Being screamed at in Pigalle, And then howled at again By some kind of wild-eyed Drifter who told me to go To the Bois de Boulogne to seek What he clearly saw as my destiny; Getting ****** in Les Halles With Sara Who'd just seen Dillon as Rusty James, And was walking around in a daze; Sara again with Jade At the Caveau de la Huchette. Cash squandered On a cheap gold-plated toothbrush, Portrait sketched at the Place du Tertre, Paperback books By Symbolist poets, Second hand volumes By Trakl and Deleve, And a leather jacket from The flea market At the Porte de Clignancourt. Metro taken to Montparnasse, Where I slowly sipped A demi blonde In one of those brasseries (Perhaps) Immortalised by Brassai; Bewhiskered old man In a naval officer's cap, His table bestrewn With empty wine bottles And cigarette butts, Repeatedly screeched the name "Phillippe!" until a bartender With patent leather hair, Filled his wineglass to the brim, With a mock-obsequious: "Voila, mon Captaine!" I cut into the Rue du Bac, Traversed the Pont Royal, Briefly beheld Saint-Germain-l'Auxerrois, With its gothic tower, Constructed only latterly, In order that The 6th Century church Might complement The style of the remainder Of the 1er Arrondissement, Before steering for the Place du Chatelet, And onwards...Les Halles!
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Jul 26, 2015
Jul 26, 2015 at 6:18 AM UTC
Tales of a Paris Flaneur
Early days as a flaneur; I recall the couple On the Metro When I was still innocent Of its labyrinthine complexities; Slim pretty white girl, Clad head to toe In new blue denim, Wistfully smiling While her muscular black beau Stared straight through me With fathomless, fulgorous orbs; And one of them spoke (Almost in a whisper): "Qu'est-ce que t'en pense?" Then it dawned on me... The slender young Parisienne With the distant desirous eyes Was no less male than I. Being screamed at in Pigalle, And then howled at again By some kind of wild-eyed Drifter who told me to go To the Bois de Boulogne to seek What he clearly saw as my destiny; Getting ****** in Les Halles With Sara Who'd just seen Dillon as Rusty James, And was walking around in a daze; Sara again with Jade At the Caveau de la Huchette. Cash squandered On a cheap gold-plated toothbrush, Portrait sketched at the Place du Tertre, Paperback books By Symbolist poets, Second hand volumes By Trakl and Deleve, And a leather jacket from The flea market At the Porte de Clignancourt. Metro taken to Montparnasse, Where I slowly sipped A demi blonde In one of those brasseries (Perhaps) Immortalised by Brassai; Bewhiskered old man In a naval officer's cap, His table bestrewn With empty wine bottles And cigarette butts, Repeatedly screeched the name "Phillippe!" until a bartender With patent leather hair, Filled his wineglass to the brim, With a mock-obsequious: "Voila, mon Captaine!" I cut into the Rue du Bac, Traversed the Pont Royal, Briefly beheld Saint-Germain-l'Auxerrois, With its gothic tower, Constructed only latterly, In order that The 6th Century church Might complement The style of the remainder Of the 1er Arrondissement, Before steering for the Place du Chatelet, And onwards...Les Halles!
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my paris begins with those early days as a conscious flaneur i recall the couple seated opposite me on the metro when i was still innocent of its labyrinthine complexity slim pretty white girl clad head to toe in denim smiling wistfully while her muscular black beau stared through me with fathomless orbs and one of them spoke almost in a whisper qu'est-ce-que t'en pense and it dawned on me yes the young parisienne with the distant desirous eyes was no less male than me dismal movies in the forum des halles being screamed at in pigalle and then howled at again by some kind of madman or vagrant who told me to go to the bois de boulogne to meet what he saw as my destiny menaced by a sinister skinhead for trying on tessa's wide-brimmed hat getting ****** in les halles with sara who'd just seen dillon as rusty james and was walking in a daze sara again with jade at the caveau de la huchette jazz cellar cash squandered on a gold tootbrush two tone shoes from close by to the place d'italie portrait sketched at the place du tertre paperback books by symbolist poets but second hand volumes by trakl and deleve and a leather jacket from the marche aux puces porte de clignancourt losing gary's address scrawled on a page of musset's confession walking the length and breadth of the rue st denis, what an artist's paradise (as juliette once wrote me).
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Jul 3, 2015
Jul 3, 2015 at 7:23 AM UTC
From the Labyrinthine Metro
Only saw you once On the metro You looked like you needed help I felt like I could have helped you Never even talked But our eyes did meet You looked like you needed hope But you looked away before I could smile Pull up to the platform I opened my mouth to speak You just picked up your bag And left Fell in love With someone I had never even met And it hurt Badly
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Jun 6, 2015
Jun 6, 2015 at 8:49 PM UTC
Never Knew You
a person on the metro, six stops from their destination leafing through a brochure titled How To Get Rich Quick - sighing in disgust, "I was never allowed to go on the metro when I was young," boasts the woman sitting beside them, an accessory of The Scene. a prop (voice is loud and nasally, and the person - five stops - considers moving) quick smile, polite: which means, go away. or, at the very least, don't talk quite so loud okay? okay? a softcover Merriam-Webster's Collegiate Dictionary is under the seat, discarded, Sharpie skidding through it (four stops) at every jolt of the train. this is normal, all trains are jerky sometimes, and the loud woman expresses her concerns. an old man, older than both people, older than anything really - coughs. wet coughs. the person frowns, but quietly, so the woman and man won't notice. (they are well-practiced in the art of subtlety) three stops. the woman leaves but the smell lingers and the dictionary, having slid back one or two rows for effect a flock of tourists board. kids in the seats parents hanging tiredly to safety holds (be still be quiet keep your hands to yourself, mandy a little boy of six clinging to the person's jacket with sticky warm fingers) two stops, and the boy asks why they look so sad. what they're reading. they have perfected the art of silence but little boys don't understand silence. the mother hovers in the background sneaking ***** looks at the person, wax smudged smile going crooked at the edges one stop, the boy asks where they got their hair (my head; he is unimpressed) he is kicking the lonely dictionary providing it with company, or maybe unaware. they leave, and the mother hisses something at them as they pass - clutches the boy's arm. the dictionary has been stuck on the word spectral for three days, and the train hums to life.
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Mar 10, 2015
Mar 10, 2015 at 9:28 AM UTC
still life taken from a moving train, 1997
a person on the metro, six stops from their destination leafing through a brochure titled How To Get Rich Quick - sighing in disgust, "I was never allowed to go on the metro when I was young," boasts the woman sitting beside them, an accessory of The Scene. a prop (voice is loud and nasally, and the person - five stops - considers moving) quick smile, polite: which means, go away. or, at the very least, don't talk quite so loud okay? okay? a softcover Merriam-Webster's Collegiate Dictionary is under the seat, discarded, Sharpie skidding through it (four stops) at every jolt of the train. this is normal, all trains are jerky sometimes, and the loud woman expresses her concerns. an old man, older than both people, older than anything really - coughs. wet coughs. the person frowns, but quietly, so the woman and man won't notice. (they are well-practiced in the art of subtlety) three stops. the woman leaves but the smell lingers and the dictionary, having slid back one or two rows for effect a flock of tourists board. kids in the seats parents hanging tiredly to safety holds (be still be quiet keep your hands to yourself, mandy a little boy of six clinging to the person's jacket with sticky warm fingers) two stops, and the boy asks why they look so sad. what they're reading. they have perfected the art of silence but little boys don't understand silence. the mother hovers in the background sneaking ***** looks at the person, wax smudged smile going crooked at the edges one stop, the boy asks where they got their hair (my head; he is unimpressed) he is kicking the lonely dictionary providing it with company, or maybe unaware. they leave, and the mother hisses something at them as they pass - clutches the boy's arm. the dictionary has been stuck on the word spectral for three days, and the train hums to life.
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Faces unknown, side by side; Cooperating and mingling; Looking for a better spot, and yet, heading the same way. Everyone becomes equal, Everyone pays the same fare, Everyone has a life, Each as complex as the rest. Every face is new, Every mood different. holding some mystery, Each different, None less or more. A game of patience; Waiting to reach the end of one path, And the beginning of another. A hurry to get up, and get down. A bus, a metro, a train, An auto and an aeroplane, The modest pace of a tram, The coziness of a shuttle van. The stories in a public transport, Are things I wouldn't wanna miss. I shall never, for the life of me, Stop traveling in public transport. Without it, I wouldn't be me.
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Mar 4, 2015
Mar 4, 2015 at 1:32 PM UTC
Public Transport