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The living reality of a metaphor, almost every ounce in-taken, Every nuance, every pronounce, measured, weighted and weighty, Fluid or firmament, each encapsulated, prior to release, scaled, Tabulated, ordered, noted, recorded, and ultimately judg-ed. Totality of it all, the varied quantities of the ingested nutrients, even the forecast of the future, if every day was a metaphor for like todayDO I speak of the day's headlines? Of the quantity and nutrition that passes through my lips? Or The surround sound of the surrounding sounds of this day, the flocks of bandito geese who exist only to torment, the landscape working crews, with their tools, like a 7::00an wake up buzzing about, for the entire street, going house to house, looking for itinerant grassy knolls of patches of bright green, overnight sprung up and needy to be guillotined, laundry to do, rugs needy for clothesline screaming/beating or merely super fast vacuuming; they, hawking their skills available for the old and infirm, or the fatty catty cattle lazy, (somewhere in there is moi); and the decibels of their machines, the rat-a-tat of their rapido, voluble speech that feeds me poetry by the ounce of their laughter, but more exactly of, What do I speak, to what do I allude? Why all and none, everything and specifically nothing, for the metaphor is meta! (1) It is life itself, from the quarter teaspoon to the overflowing bath, it is life at its most incremental, the moment of flushing face, the second of ah ha! recollection, the, long term trends trending, the flatline of my EKG, the weighty pronouncement of my talking scale (you've been bad), IT IS THE EVERYTHING that is measurable, weighable, isolatable, defined;  it is our existence of our each & every of action and inaction strung together like a necklace and a chain We are metaphor, reality, is, the script, which is the product of you. scriptwriter…/
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Aug 8, 2025
Aug 8, 2025 at 6:17 PM UTC
The Measuring Cup (The reality of a metaphor)
The living reality of a metaphor, almost every ounce in-taken, Every nuance, every pronounce, measured, weighted and weighty, Fluid or firmament, each encapsulated, prior to release, scaled, Tabulated, ordered, noted, recorded, and ultimately judg-ed. Totality of it all, the varied quantities of the ingested nutrients, even the forecast of the future, if every day was a metaphor for like todayDO I speak of the day's headlines? Of the quantity and nutrition that passes through my lips? Or The surround sound of the surrounding sounds of this day, the flocks of bandito geese who exist only to torment, the landscape working crews, with their tools, like a 7::00an wake up buzzing about, for the entire street, going house to house, looking for itinerant grassy knolls of patches of bright green, overnight sprung up and needy to be guillotined, laundry to do, rugs needy for clothesline screaming/beating or merely super fast vacuuming; they, hawking their skills available for the old and infirm, or the fatty catty cattle lazy, (somewhere in there is moi); and the decibels of their machines, the rat-a-tat of their rapido, voluble speech that feeds me poetry by the ounce of their laughter, but more exactly of, What do I speak, to what do I allude? Why all and none, everything and specifically nothing, for the metaphor is meta! (1) It is life itself, from the quarter teaspoon to the overflowing bath, it is life at its most incremental, the moment of flushing face, the second of ah ha! recollection, the, long term trends trending, the flatline of my EKG, the weighty pronouncement of my talking scale (you've been bad), IT IS THE EVERYTHING that is measurable, weighable, isolatable, defined;  it is our existence of our each & every of action and inaction strung together like a necklace and a chain We are metaphor, reality, is, the script, which is the product of you. scriptwriter…/
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_Peace abides in the gentle velvet folds of patient time; When industry is forgotten and rigid right angles Give way to soft currents of inspiration; Lacking definition, judgement or expectation My yardstick shrinks and disintegrates into nothingness... Inadequate to the task of measuring infinity._
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Mar 13, 2021
Mar 13, 2021 at 1:00 AM UTC
Measuring Infinity
Tick tock tick tock Is their any difference between a tick and a tock? I mean conceptually of course Not just the workings of a clock I guess the ticks are every moment And the tocks is what will be All tocks become ticks But all tick tocks go eventually Not to worry I care more though in concepts Of looking past our man made time Ticks and tocks don't really matter If you don't pay them any mind That's a funny thought though I like that actually Paying time our money Money equals time they say But to me it's a little funny Cause what if you don't care for money or time? What then defines your existence of being alive?  I mean to me a more sound measure Is perhaps the pleasure Of feeling my heart beating A personal repeating of self made time and space And once that tickers gone I'm sure to follow along to our final resting place Fitting we call our hearts the good old ticker then, hey? My lungs are therefore the tocks Like two little personal clocks Working together differently But in symbiotic harmony All beats become breaths and all breaths pass by eventually To me this seems a more valid sense of time Like when you think of the sublime setting of the sun Moments as these seem to slow down And you're stuck in blissful entraption Some moments just go so fast And some feel like the last an eternity And all the while inside me My heart and lungs slow and speed accordingly It's quite beautiful actually Cause now when I think of us I can count what you mean to me 115,200 ticks of my heart 30,000 tocks of my breath Those are my average daily rates at rest 80 ticks of heart a minute 30 tocks of air But around you I am sure These numbers rise beyond anything compared Like when I first met you I think my ticks were at least at 122 Yes to be fair My breaths fell short in some way I guess from all the kissing to be had that day And when we first made love I felt like both were above Anything I have ever felt before And darling If I could store my ticks and stocks in a special place for you Reserve them in a bank for us to save For special days between us two I think it's safe to say I'd gladly let you withdraw and take All my beats and breaths away
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Dec 23, 2014
Dec 23, 2014 at 10:25 AM UTC
Tick Tocks/Beats Breath
Tick tock tick tock Is their any difference between a tick and a tock? I mean conceptually of course Not just the workings of a clock I guess the ticks are every moment And the tocks is what will be All tocks become ticks But all tick tocks go eventually Not to worry I care more though in concepts Of looking past our man made time Ticks and tocks don't really matter If you don't pay them any mind That's a funny thought though I like that actually Paying time our money Money equals time they say But to me it's a little funny Cause what if you don't care for money or time? What then defines your existence of being alive?  I mean to me a more sound measure Is perhaps the pleasure Of feeling my heart beating A personal repeating of self made time and space And once that tickers gone I'm sure to follow along to our final resting place Fitting we call our hearts the good old ticker then, hey? My lungs are therefore the tocks Like two little personal clocks Working together differently But in symbiotic harmony All beats become breaths and all breaths pass by eventually To me this seems a more valid sense of time Like when you think of the sublime setting of the sun Moments as these seem to slow down And you're stuck in blissful entraption Some moments just go so fast And some feel like the last an eternity And all the while inside me My heart and lungs slow and speed accordingly It's quite beautiful actually Cause now when I think of us I can count what you mean to me 115,200 ticks of my heart 30,000 tocks of my breath Those are my average daily rates at rest 80 ticks of heart a minute 30 tocks of air But around you I am sure These numbers rise beyond anything compared Like when I first met you I think my ticks were at least at 122 Yes to be fair My breaths fell short in some way I guess from all the kissing to be had that day And when we first made love I felt like both were above Anything I have ever felt before And darling If I could store my ticks and stocks in a special place for you Reserve them in a bank for us to save For special days between us two I think it's safe to say I'd gladly let you withdraw and take All my beats and breaths away
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