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We put our problems in a bottle, sank it and said a prayer.. then hammered down the throttle and threw our hands to the open air.. The evening sky especially beautiful - It's sun bursting through cloudy skies And still, it was barely suitable to reflect those bluest eyes.. Then we tore through sparkling water - Blonde curls dancin' in the summer wind Just a worn out dad and his daughter who might not come this way again.. But today the water welcomes us.. promising to drown our sorrow.. And perhaps, the Good Lord helpin' us, we'll do it all again tomorrow..
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Aug 21, 2022
Aug 21, 2022 at 12:38 AM UTC
Bluest Eyes in Liberty
I'm getting goosebumps thinking about my coney Island baby, we're going to the boardwalk and listen to some Rock and Roll. If I'm blessed by the warped east coast gods, I'll run into Sweet Jane and score some ****** the click that makes this hell alright. with a dime bag, this madness becomes a perfect world. This should be quite the Walk on the Wild Side.
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Jun 19, 2020
Jun 19, 2020 at 12:58 PM UTC
See you Tonight
rest of title...Parkland, Fla.,February 14, 2018 One more senseless mass homicide twas the sole arbitrary aim as a former student nonchalantly sauntered empty hallways seconds preceding blame brazenly intent to maximize total killed matter of factly telling police (his incomprehensible) (ill) logic he did explain when cornered, he willingly, unflinchingly, reticently admitted guilt Nikolas Cruz rocketed to instantaneous infamous fame pulling a fire alarm ("FAKE") emergency, then going leisurely ambling along his killing spree total of seventeen slain (comprising 3 faculty and 14 students) mercilessly gunned down as if they were wild game when handcuffed, an innocuous 19 year old did readily admit emptying one firearm after another at a fairly rapid clip then at some predestined or spurious moment didst dip and dive out amidst the chaotic madding crowd before reality flopped then did flip as lower teeth he nervously bit upper lip made feeble getaway at a nearby eatery casually flirted with cashier and made no move to flit upon his seizure as cornered prey subsequently large tract massively cordoned off strong arm of the law slightly halting in speech detailed his gambit deliberately staking a stance to maximize hit and once again afflicted parents lit up with rancor and rage pit toughly battling sorrow which will not quit til death doth bring peaceful rest sans, those grieving family visit.
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Feb 16, 2018
Feb 16, 2018 at 7:18 PM UTC
Marjory Stoneman Douglas High School...
You left a white lighter on your coffee table so that when we'd go back to collect your things from a crime scene we had been to countless times, we'd know that you died thinking yourself a King of Rock and Roll. But really you were the prince heir to all the love dad had to give, bestowed upon year after year with the kind of too much faith that only parents can give. You heard their lessons about the world being your oyster but never payed attention to how to care for your people. You were always about the show, You'd give all the glitz and glamour off of your very own crown thinking that if love didn't sparkle people wouldn't know it was there. But then someone gave you purple-hazed glasses and suddenly the world was love in your pupils, they flooded your irises with a shine to which no amount of family jewels could compare. Your eyes had seen radiance and all you had to go back to was flaw you saw a life that was hard and surprisingly heavy for being so empty, And you just kept chasing the smooth blues that would never hurt your ears or play you the old song of wasted potential. Even as you wandered popping and repopping your ears, our love was dull to your rock and roll lifestyle. I know how much you missed how it was before you got discovered by it, eager and seething to sink its hooks into another good one. Instead of writing your own song, you faded into the old one. And now, I've lost word and lyric, melody is ash in my pen because the music wasn't in me, dude, it was in you. And now the record keeps playing through the air, but none of us want to hear it. When you went, you left us with a ****** white lighter and you took the music with you.
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Sep 16, 2017
Sep 16, 2017 at 12:37 AM UTC
3 Years Late to 27
You left a white lighter on your coffee table so that when we'd go back to collect your things from a crime scene we had been to countless times, we'd know that you died thinking yourself a King of Rock and Roll. But really you were the prince heir to all the love dad had to give, bestowed upon year after year with the kind of too much faith that only parents can give. You heard their lessons about the world being your oyster but never payed attention to how to care for your people. You were always about the show, You'd give all the glitz and glamour off of your very own crown thinking that if love didn't sparkle people wouldn't know it was there. But then someone gave you purple-hazed glasses and suddenly the world was love in your pupils, they flooded your irises with a shine to which no amount of family jewels could compare. Your eyes had seen radiance and all you had to go back to was flaw you saw a life that was hard and surprisingly heavy for being so empty, And you just kept chasing the smooth blues that would never hurt your ears or play you the old song of wasted potential. Even as you wandered popping and repopping your ears, our love was dull to your rock and roll lifestyle. I know how much you missed how it was before you got discovered by it, eager and seething to sink its hooks into another good one. Instead of writing your own song, you faded into the old one. And now, I've lost word and lyric, melody is ash in my pen because the music wasn't in me, dude, it was in you. And now the record keeps playing through the air, but none of us want to hear it. When you went, you left us with a ****** white lighter and you took the music with you.
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We sit down At the Bar You remark on My posture We order Your favorite Jack and Coke We sling Them back Double Shots Burning my belly Your eyes fill With disbelief I can see The photographs flash In front of You School Pictures Prom Photos Graduation Shots All Stacked up Underneath this very Bar- Stool My eyes roll Away from sentimentality Laughing it Off I order Two more I can hear you Tell me to Slow Down As if Recorded into A Broken Record Even now I’m still Your Baby Sister As My Vision Doubles Your Smile Remains As One Though your voice Seems to grow Faint My throat begins To burn Feeling myself Crying out Over a space Much more vast Than the distance Between Our two Barstools Before I misplace Myself Completely You Catch me Your other Half Your little twin I will Not be Doubled Over We are Celebrating This Birthday As I blink To see you Through My blear I see you Preparing To go Mirroring my moves To put me at ease But your Cheeks Have lost Dimension Your color No longer Changes in The light You pull your Hands away Not wanting to Make me Cold Insisting I’m Warm My clammy Palms Push Forward Just in Time To Catch That Paper Wafting Down I ****** it Up Staring at Your smile That always Did Photograph Well Flipping it Over I tried to Remember When you had Signed This photo You could never Have known About I refuse The answer Wary of the lies You will believe When you Split drinks With A Memory.
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May 2, 2017
May 2, 2017 at 12:10 PM UTC
Drinking Games
They say grieving is different for everyone, But they can never truthfully explain how. It was not until my south star exploded That I could understand how many constellations would be ruined Like the godmother who would forever spend Saint Patrick's day drinking in memory of both nephew and mother; Like the little brother who was forced to become the oldest; Like the uncle who shuddered at seeing his own son's demise too clearly; Like the step-mother who would hate herself for being right all along; Like the friend who would cut up his life with the same murderous knife; Like the father now blinded from the absence of the son's light; And like the sister who was forced to break the promise of future reconciliation. None of them could understand how the planets had aligned this way, And none of them could find their former orbit, But rather, would follow the path of the star dust left behind Flinching at it as if it were glass, Embracing the sting Because it is all that is left Of the brightest star in their sky.
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Jun 24, 2016
Jun 24, 2016 at 3:00 AM UTC
Super Nova
Bowie left town blasting off from a Lafayette rooftop his *** spewing a rainbow arc liberally sprinkling Gluten-free   golden glitter onto chichi Houston Street bistros liberating a fawning glitterati eager to prance about a shanghaied High Line for a NY second the best dressed homeless dude in NoHo spotted a Pale Duke apparition fluttering over a posse of faux figurine graffiti splashed across a Banksyless wall tagging the sunny side of the finest neighborhood car wash a ghostly Lou Reed dressed to the nines in sleek Transformer drag watched chuckling, scratching his ***** humming the final bars of an Eno inspired Perfect Day, marking odds when a long overdue Iggy Pop will crash the Pearly Gate mosh pits Ubering through the choppy seas of urban sludge, lightning bolts streak down the sullen faces of cash strapped honey dippin lust for life hipsters, luxuriating in a well nursed millennial angst stew Fun City's frenzied bare footin Little Monster darlings imprisoned in soulless high-rises, still a quarter shy from annual bonus time, pace white stained minimalist spaces indulging notions driven by economic compulsion to dial up flush with cash fund managers to seek margin loans on their large positions in alpha rich distressed asset funds while their diamond collared Schnauzers wait outside the corner State News licking the oozing sores encrusting Lazarus's feet Ziggy's lapping tongue marks time, waiting for the stretchy panted painted ladies scoring Iman's organic rouge at a corner bodega listening to a sidewalk trash can yelp today's Daily News headline "Major Tom Myna Hero!" bekighting the next 15 minute legend a talking Myna bird named Major Tom the vigilant Major alerted occupants of a Brooklyn townhouse of a furnace leaking carbon monoxide when he stopped talking and dropped dead a veritable canary in a coal mine story a special service marking Major Tom's supreme sacrifice is planned, in the spirit of neighborhood beatification the family implores those wishing to express condolences in lieu of flowers to please occupy Prospect Park to drive out the rapacious squeegee men and feed the hungry pigeons Bowie's earthly star may have gone black but the ashes of his disembodied voice will forever mark the city like the ubiquitous gray splot ashes of pigeon guano David Robert Jones 1.8.47 - 1.10.16 Well Done Beloved God Bless and Godspeed Music Selections: David Bowie, Dollar Days David Bowie, I Can't Give Everything Away David Bowie, Black Star Jazz Messengers, Wayne Shorter Lester Left Town 1.17.16 NYC jbm
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Feb 2, 2016
Feb 2, 2016 at 1:15 PM UTC
Bowie Left Town
Bowie left town blasting off from a Lafayette rooftop his *** spewing a rainbow arc liberally sprinkling Gluten-free   golden glitter onto chichi Houston Street bistros liberating a fawning glitterati eager to prance about a shanghaied High Line for a NY second the best dressed homeless dude in NoHo spotted a Pale Duke apparition fluttering over a posse of faux figurine graffiti splashed across a Banksyless wall tagging the sunny side of the finest neighborhood car wash a ghostly Lou Reed dressed to the nines in sleek Transformer drag watched chuckling, scratching his ***** humming the final bars of an Eno inspired Perfect Day, marking odds when a long overdue Iggy Pop will crash the Pearly Gate mosh pits Ubering through the choppy seas of urban sludge, lightning bolts streak down the sullen faces of cash strapped honey dippin lust for life hipsters, luxuriating in a well nursed millennial angst stew Fun City's frenzied bare footin Little Monster darlings imprisoned in soulless high-rises, still a quarter shy from annual bonus time, pace white stained minimalist spaces indulging notions driven by economic compulsion to dial up flush with cash fund managers to seek margin loans on their large positions in alpha rich distressed asset funds while their diamond collared Schnauzers wait outside the corner State News licking the oozing sores encrusting Lazarus's feet Ziggy's lapping tongue marks time, waiting for the stretchy panted painted ladies scoring Iman's organic rouge at a corner bodega listening to a sidewalk trash can yelp today's Daily News headline "Major Tom Myna Hero!" bekighting the next 15 minute legend a talking Myna bird named Major Tom the vigilant Major alerted occupants of a Brooklyn townhouse of a furnace leaking carbon monoxide when he stopped talking and dropped dead a veritable canary in a coal mine story a special service marking Major Tom's supreme sacrifice is planned, in the spirit of neighborhood beatification the family implores those wishing to express condolences in lieu of flowers to please occupy Prospect Park to drive out the rapacious squeegee men and feed the hungry pigeons Bowie's earthly star may have gone black but the ashes of his disembodied voice will forever mark the city like the ubiquitous gray splot ashes of pigeon guano David Robert Jones 1.8.47 - 1.10.16 Well Done Beloved God Bless and Godspeed Music Selections: David Bowie, Dollar Days David Bowie, I Can't Give Everything Away David Bowie, Black Star Jazz Messengers, Wayne Shorter Lester Left Town 1.17.16 NYC jbm
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Give me a chance to prove to you Do anything that please you To make you smile wide and bright As if you were saying cheese I'm ready to do everything To reverse what I have done For I need that guy back Who used to laugh and had fun So please forgive Hon For you are my only sun
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May 7, 2015
May 7, 2015 at 11:30 PM UTC
Sorry
Once passed Always alive You Lou Have me hypnotized. Not a word I have heard Sounds more real Than the ones you've told I too, Have been "Waiting For the man." Head up Lexington And start lookin' For a dear Dear friend Of mine; But mostly For that one, Quick, fix. Soon after ****** hits And I too Am dosed, I - don't - know. My only Wonder now is If a smack Syringe can be As good as It sounds at This moment
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Jun 23, 2014
Jun 23, 2014 at 12:08 AM UTC
A Reed So Sweet