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#loon
us poets, often gaze the stars wishing for them to always love the moon. thanking the sun, to kiss the sunflowers, what silly little loons
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Jul 17, 2025
Jul 17, 2025 at 1:25 AM UTC
Poets like us
combined effort       moonlight, trees, autumn breeze   form bobbing shadows a humorous theatre      mocks my solitary mood
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Mar 5, 2022
Mar 5, 2022 at 4:51 PM UTC
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This afternoon, I time a Loon the length that she stays under. Upon the shore, I keep her score, amazed and full of wonder. Beneath a wake, one minute eight. What is it that she plunders? ************************************** No hook needs she to fish so free. No line nor rod impedes her. What sense applies to depths she dives? Which rhythm moves her meter? As if in air she swims so fair To seek that which may feed her. ************************************** On this Fall day, I wish to stay and watch her dive and surface. “Get back to shore!” My mind implores as work beckons its service. And yet I stay in silence, bade the Loon to bear me witness. ************************************** Share I with Loon this afternoon to gladly dive and swim? In friendship be the Loon with me? With her would I find kin? No. As land locked Loon, I must resume to fish the drink I’m in.
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Feb 4, 2021
Feb 4, 2021 at 4:35 PM UTC
Timing a Loon on Lake Mendota
First is a tree who's name wasn't taught Next, then of course,  a tree now forgot And then many maples A spruce and a birch, Then the last leafless branch on which these words perch: Now Into blue sky Through swirled clouds I search On this dock as a bible In this lake like a church; My soul does the backstroke Toward the blue dream, I lurch.
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Aug 3, 2020
Aug 3, 2020 at 2:01 AM UTC
Murphy's
Once I was abandoned by person I never thought I would be so forlorn It is like many nettles in my life Missing those moments that you enacted as you made fantastic world around me Which cannot be forgotten even in my dreams It's like I've been a loon in front of you Believing all those false worlds You made me such a way that, There is a word alone carved in my heart That cannot be erased by anyone, even by the god So, please give me your hand,save me save me I need your true love before I fall,fall please, Don't leave me
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May 31, 2020
May 31, 2020 at 11:30 PM UTC
I Won't be Forgiving You
They are more starved for Nature Then one can ever fathom; Oh, where is that secret   Off they go in a cabin; that they may frequent All the noise and pollution It melts and floats away; Into life's little solution. It's back to the plough of life so rough; They like the smithy toil day after day Their life may be starved, very tough, Oh, to listen to the wild loon's call. How it haunts them each day after day; How they stomach their bitter gall? Taking a wooden loon back to the city. Until that cabin is reached it is a pitty. When the wild calls; Good-bye city.
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Jun 25, 2018
Jun 25, 2018 at 7:01 PM UTC
Those City Folk
Just be the **** ****** you desire Just be their icon, diva, vogue, inspire! Just shake that money-making waffle tale And put it up for every market sale Or be the coffee squirrel on the wheels Just give me mochas, lattes – those the deals! Don’t be so easy cheesy, take a shot! You drink at Hortons’, baby? You are hot! Don’t feel like ****** squirrel? Be the moose! Hang out at Lake Louise with Branta goose Just grab a Molson and then chill it out Now, isn’t that what Canada’s about? Just be polite today and I won’t bite Just say you’re sorry when you are not right Just be the polar teddy, be the loon We’ll love you all the way from Earth to Moon
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Apr 25, 2018
Apr 25, 2018 at 1:14 PM UTC
**** ******
The Lonely Loon© Long before my daily ritual begins Your call as distinctive as any sound on the lake Beckons me with your unique overture Each day like clockwork I see you there Bobbing like a cork on the shimmering lake On guard like a sentry at Buckingham palace As I meander down the long rocky spit We eye each other like boxers in a ring One step past the mythical line you have created And you will take flight to your safe haven We are so much alike seeking our solitude Drawing lines in the sand that shall not be crossed For now we cautiously examine each other’s presence Respectful of the boundaries we have set One wrong move on my part and… There will be a flapping of wings Like a plane making its initial ascent Soon you will be out of sight Until tomorrow, See you then my friend Andreas Simic©
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Sep 30, 2017
Sep 30, 2017 at 9:38 AM UTC
The Lonely Loon