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#loaded
Your questions have been selected carefully. Like bullets in a gun, they are loaded. “How are you?” Shoot me once. “How’s your job?” Shoot me twice. “How is school?” One by one. The bullets land. Wear me down. Break my heart and my skin.
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Mar 7, 2025
Mar 7, 2025 at 7:32 PM UTC
44/14 "Loaded 2"
Your questions So carefully Selected Like bullets In a gun You loaded. Bang bang bang. They only stop When I am dead
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Mar 7, 2025
Mar 7, 2025 at 6:51 PM UTC
22/9 "Loaded 1"
There once was a man named Rick Who carried a red blackthorn stick He flailed it blatantly that ancient shillelagh The bataireacht fighter was quick!
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Sep 24, 2018
Sep 24, 2018 at 1:03 PM UTC
Rhetoric Rick
A flash, a crack, Twirling smoke Sharp smell of powder On the fume, slight choke A flick, a twirl, A clinking sound Empty shells Upon the ground Don't even try I'm locked and loaded
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Aug 9, 2016
Aug 9, 2016 at 7:59 PM UTC
Gunslinger
my head it resembles a revolver My mind the spinning wheel Loaded  with thoughts ready to shoot out hoping it catches someones eye
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Mar 18, 2016
Mar 18, 2016 at 12:15 PM UTC
Loaded gun
Leaning here Hoping to have a moment Realization Clarity Bring to me; a piece of mind If God exists I'm begging If Ghandi grants wishes If I can please ******* find some peace Or even just a piece Something to hold onto, someone to hold my hand Because truth is I'm scared Truth is I'm holding my heart, griping my keyboard, hugging my mind They don't tell u how real it is Always gotta learn the hard way I don't even know what I'm writing about I'm just laying here; laying here trying to stay woke, stay free, stay alive I went to school today and didn't do to class I stared in a boys eyes, told him I'm not gone Keeping in touch, seems a bit to much Seems like I'm fighting myself Everyday I'm struggling Fear and doubt I will prevail I will not fail I have nothing to prove, I shall own up my sins I shall caress every acquaintance; in a home that feels safe, where we aren't afraid Clenching my jaw, body like a suttle current, with a mind like a hurricane I shall not fail myself I shall not let myself go I shall not hate I'm never giving in, not headed to that golden gate
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Dec 19, 2015
Dec 19, 2015 at 12:36 AM UTC
18/12/15
"Are you happy?"
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Oct 26, 2015
Oct 26, 2015 at 2:27 AM UTC
Discontent with Contentment
I wrote words To try and bandage The broken things. Things like the mind and soul and hearts, Of angels that fell apart and wings have given out, I let the broken wing do its thing, You can't fix a Devil in disguise, With words acting like tape and bandages, And your devil commanded wings Flew you down corridors of sorrow, And classroom bullies of depression, And those heart palpitations, Was your chest trying to protect you from within, Not telling you to let the devil in and steal your soul for a mere sanity, Your not as insane as they come, Devils and Angels all are one as the same hand, They have bend dealt and handed out a loaded gun, And what they chose to do with the gun, To put it to your temple, Or to there's over an over again, Is all in the free will and mind a god from above gave man kind, The freedom of free mind and thought, But why are we blind? We have the right to things other animals have there rights stripped from, And we do that to other countries, people, and ourselves, Like a god wrote a bible that is lines in the game telephone, passed on like dropped calls that still got the message with the little details missing. Because it was a story to teach you something, To help you get through a hard time, But instead we use gods gifts to oppress those around us, And those around us, Use it to oppress us, So my words try to act like bandages, Like gods did, But even God couldn't fix the broken things, because God made the world and left the broken things, while he rested on the 7th day, when he could of fixed things. what would he of changed?
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May 20, 2015
May 20, 2015 at 10:46 PM UTC
Angels and Devils, behind a loaded gun.
I wrote words To try and bandage The broken things. Things like the mind and soul and hearts, Of angels that fell apart and wings have given out, I let the broken wing do its thing, You can't fix a Devil in disguise, With words acting like tape and bandages, And your devil commanded wings Flew you down corridors of sorrow, And classroom bullies of depression, And those heart palpitations, Was your chest trying to protect you from within, Not telling you to let the devil in and steal your soul for a mere sanity, Your not as insane as they come, Devils and Angels all are one as the same hand, They have bend dealt and handed out a loaded gun, And what they chose to do with the gun, To put it to your temple, Or to there's over an over again, Is all in the free will and mind a god from above gave man kind, The freedom of free mind and thought, But why are we blind? We have the right to things other animals have there rights stripped from, And we do that to other countries, people, and ourselves, Like a god wrote a bible that is lines in the game telephone, passed on like dropped calls that still got the message with the little details missing. Because it was a story to teach you something, To help you get through a hard time, But instead we use gods gifts to oppress those around us, And those around us, Use it to oppress us, So my words try to act like bandages, Like gods did, But even God couldn't fix the broken things, because God made the world and left the broken things, while he rested on the 7th day, when he could of fixed things. what would he of changed?
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Now the new chum loaded his three-nought-three, It's a small-bore gun, but his hopes were big.
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Dec 21, 2014
Dec 21, 2014 at 10:31 PM UTC
Now the new chum loaded his three-nought-three,
Thank God          I decided     To        Use             Ink Instead        Of   Bullets
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Nov 3, 2014
Nov 3, 2014 at 5:37 PM UTC
The End
Walk away slowly       Please don't run Remember     I'm still holding the gun It's cocked         And loaded.... Aimed at my temple      Why didn't you listen? The rules....     WERE SIMPLE!!! I handed you my heart     Expecting you not to         Break It! You should've known it...    I'm a ******* poet! I can turn anything you say      Into a **** ****** scene Make you wish       It was ALL A DREAM But it's not        And you're gone I'm holding the trigger           Thank God I decided to use ink       Instead of bullets...
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Nov 3, 2014
Nov 3, 2014 at 12:50 PM UTC
Loaded Gun
If you are good in one thing You are definitely good in another thing Specialization and fear, hindered her from exploring the deep waters of herself
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Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 4:27 PM UTC
SPECIALIZATION IS LIMITATION