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You said love should feel natural which was unfortunate because nature itself is mostly catastrophe with good lighting Outside March kept dissolving into ***** water The city wore its exhaustion openly like men smoking alone outside hospitals We lived above a laundromat all night the machines turned washing strangers through cycles of heat and surrender You slept badly Every dream returned you damaged Meanwhile I developed the talent of making coffee quietly which should qualify as a minor religion One morning you stood by the window wearing my sweater the large gray one with holes near the wrists You looked temporary like jazz or governments or those bookstores that survive three rent increases too long Down below someone screamed in Russian with astonishing commitment A taxi almost hit a cyclist The cyclist hit the taxi Spring continued without moral instruction You asked: “Do you think people ruin each other?” I wanted to answer carefully instead I said: “Only the honest ones.” For a while neither of us moved The kettle trembled softly on the stove like an old actor waiting backstage to die correctly
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May 2
May 2, 2026 at 10:23 AM UTC
The Laundromat Beneath Us
Hymn to an Art-o-matic Laundromat by Michael R. Burch after Richard Thomas Moore’s “Hymn to an Automatic Washer” O, terrible-immaculate ALL-cleansing godly Laundromat, where cleanliness is next to Art —a bright Kinkade (bought at K-Mart), a Persian rug (made in Taiwan), a Royal Bonn Clock (time zone Guam)— embrace my *** in cushioned vinyl, erase all marks: **** vaginal, ****** inkspot, red wine, dirt. O, sterilize her skirt, my shirt, my skidmarked briefs, her padded bra; suds-away in your white maw all filth, the day’s accumulation. Make us pure by INUNDATION. Published by The Oldie, where it was the winner of a poetry contest. This poem was inspired by the incongruence of discovering "works of art" while doing laundry at a laundromat with coin-operated washers and dryers. I was reminded of the experience while reading Richard Moore’s “Hymn to an Automatic Washer.” Keywords/Tags: hymn, art, America, Americana, laundry, laundromat, washer, dryer, appliances, clean, cleaning, cleanliness, clothes, clothing, underwear, god, godly, godliness, water, baptism, inundation, sonnet, analogy, humor
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Nov 28, 2021
Nov 28, 2021 at 11:50 PM UTC
Hymn to an Art-o-matic Laundromat
The cute old couple across the way Gaze at the phone screen Their expressions are joyful and gay And life is as happy as it may seem I can not help but wonder What are they watching? Could it be oh so somber? Or in her wedding dress is she walking? As she walks to load the washing device He follows to make sure she will not fall Because losing her is not worth the price Of living alone at all So watching the phone they resume Until they can leave very soon.
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Dec 30, 2019
Dec 30, 2019 at 8:18 PM UTC
The Old Couple at the Laundromat
I have known many ways of birds and unseen ghosts. When I walk it is always against the wind. 7 hours talking to you in the dark only to realize you had left long ago, tucked your longing into the shadows. Inventions of you carved into walls, quietly, because that's the only way I know how to love. Girls I lay with are only figments of an imagination I write out of my pens. Every moment spent with you girl was a light on the darkest night, but now I must return to myself - the way I was when my body was made. Only Christ can know the pain I'm in, my girl she will raise her chin, forget. Meanwhile, I, conscious shadow seeker, will be looking up for reincarnation.
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Apr 3, 2017
Apr 3, 2017 at 10:49 PM UTC
Romantic Reincarnation
Sitting, thinking. Spun clean. Used, time and again. Exploited, yet reliable, your validity, supreme. Minute hand, who made you travel faster than the ******* called the hourglass. Telling faster what's feasible than with the abacus, the predecessor to all modern math. And the shorter hand, whose stealth cannot be seen in person, what remains? You use gentle remnants, and all that is spent, to strike dread into us creatures that wish to repent our wrongful gains. But the fabrics of my habit may only see the secondhand and foamy soap, unknowingly handed down through families, cleansed over happenstance tragedies outgrown. Tumbled dry. These miserable floors support a newly clean, whirring, lullaby. Buzzer sounds. Locked from the inside, the doors are now closed. My time is up. Head home, and fold. The dream of countless quarters flickers with florescent lights, all I need is myself in a quiet place, to finally take flight. Fall into the void until comfortably null, softened to a point in which I am flawless, yet dull.
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Jul 18, 2016
Jul 18, 2016 at 8:34 PM UTC
Mat
There is something magical in the whirring of a midday laundromat. A cessation of pride, maybe. People all dressed in sweatpants the air full of detergent smell and the sound of coins clicking against great tumblers as they go round and round and round and round... The people smile back, no use pretending superiority here. Whistlers twitter on, folding towels and socks into neat, organized piles. The children are well behaved, their hands full of potato chips given by their parents as a pittance for their patience. The patient patrons ponder on, their empty hands crumpling receipts. This, with the crunching of chips and the distant whistle over the percussion of clicking coins clattering in a dryer compose an unintentional opera, an ode to humility. Humility's honorable honesty heals humanity's hubris. Noisy trucks pass outside the floor-to-ceiling plate glass windows, Where the hot air wreaks its violence and men make their ways in spite.
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Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 5:00 PM UTC
Ode to Humility (laundromat)