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the irises have passed, their existence, entirety, a three week, 21 day, gun salute, to which I was witness to but an abbreviated four short generational days the Kabbalist among us say Kaddish, and a-Buddhist chants so-be-it, both celebrating the brevity cycle of natural things, both notating, that death makes room for more ugly yelloe'd and black now, these irises are now misfits on a breezy, dancing summer lawn today, shriveled and misshapen, they compare and contrast on a normative, glorious, June Sunday that picturesque presents the living and the deceased, side by side all comrades, all summer sundries on a dancing grass blanket half-graveyard battlefield, the half-heaven oft I have writ of the beach detritus, the shells, the sun burnt ***** a recycled funeral rectory where no one utters prayers for the no longer alive historical artifacts what has this to do with that human construct, artifice of memory, a string on the finger of the mind, a pausation, a man-made creation to momentarily recall another of nature's cycle - your children Have children. Am a father. Had a father in my youthful days. this is a boy scout qualification medal, marker of me as Expert, permitting me to commentary with gravitas, now that I’ve graduated to grandfather status, I enjoy superstar freedom to opine inanely on such matters of my father have I writ, of my sons, those remain unseen, likely neither will mark these day with a telephone call or an all-I-got-was-this-lousy-t shirt gift of gall I say that's ok for what else is there, certainly not an unthinking, dismissive whatever it saddens me some for sure, but it makes judge myself as human being on a gradation of one to none but more than this internal reflection, I ponder this hallmark'd day, as life cycle point notarized, in verse and rhyme, for that is what I do best for before, many father's day in the priory passed, most unrecallable, just another ceremonial checkmark, habitually acquitted, but somewhere in a drawer of shirts, in a home I store stuff in, I do believe, there are some cards from decades past, that prove nothing, other than life goes on, and we best capture what we can, as best we can... with small, objet d'art of sorts Perhaps one will call after all... in any event, to honor the dead, to mark the existing, the bannered ship's bell rung, its sonorous sound, notable and onerous, fades as well but man and animal, plant and tree, a living fraternal sorority, who all look over my shoulder as I compose on that Adirondack chair you by now, we’ll acquainted they know, for whom the bell tolls this day, and why as well, as we all pause and contemplate where we are on this day, on our own overlapping cycles
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Jun 15, 2014
Jun 15, 2014 at 11:55 AM UTC
A Be-lated Father's Day Note (June 2014)
the irises have passed, their existence, entirety, a three week, 21 day, gun salute, to which I was witness to but an abbreviated four short generational days the Kabbalist among us say Kaddish, and a-Buddhist chants so-be-it, both celebrating the brevity cycle of natural things, both notating, that death makes room for more ugly yelloe'd and black now, these irises are now misfits on a breezy, dancing summer lawn today, shriveled and misshapen, they compare and contrast on a normative, glorious, June Sunday that picturesque presents the living and the deceased, side by side all comrades, all summer sundries on a dancing grass blanket half-graveyard battlefield, the half-heaven oft I have writ of the beach detritus, the shells, the sun burnt ***** a recycled funeral rectory where no one utters prayers for the no longer alive historical artifacts what has this to do with that human construct, artifice of memory, a string on the finger of the mind, a pausation, a man-made creation to momentarily recall another of nature's cycle - your children Have children. Am a father. Had a father in my youthful days. this is a boy scout qualification medal, marker of me as Expert, permitting me to commentary with gravitas, now that I’ve graduated to grandfather status, I enjoy superstar freedom to opine inanely on such matters of my father have I writ, of my sons, those remain unseen, likely neither will mark these day with a telephone call or an all-I-got-was-this-lousy-t shirt gift of gall I say that's ok for what else is there, certainly not an unthinking, dismissive whatever it saddens me some for sure, but it makes judge myself as human being on a gradation of one to none but more than this internal reflection, I ponder this hallmark'd day, as life cycle point notarized, in verse and rhyme, for that is what I do best for before, many father's day in the priory passed, most unrecallable, just another ceremonial checkmark, habitually acquitted, but somewhere in a drawer of shirts, in a home I store stuff in, I do believe, there are some cards from decades past, that prove nothing, other than life goes on, and we best capture what we can, as best we can... with small, objet d'art of sorts Perhaps one will call after all... in any event, to honor the dead, to mark the existing, the bannered ship's bell rung, its sonorous sound, notable and onerous, fades as well but man and animal, plant and tree, a living fraternal sorority, who all look over my shoulder as I compose on that Adirondack chair you by now, we’ll acquainted they know, for whom the bell tolls this day, and why as well, as we all pause and contemplate where we are on this day, on our own overlapping cycles
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Though I know I’m just Pleading with my palms - I say a prayer anyway
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May 1, 2019
May 1, 2019 at 4:57 PM UTC
on reciting the kaddish
You weren't the poetic one, but I just read Kaddish and thought of you;            of 1998 beach photo, Sussex somewhere - as I remember you, perhaps a bit younger;            of sweet peroxide blonde, hiding brunette. I was naive to the dye 'til I saw 'the Hepburn shot' - that 1950 something print, you in Rembrandt light,            or the black beehive wig in family portrait— 1970ish— dicky bows and cocktail dresses - Dad, aged seven, in a shirt and trousers;            of youthful snapshots: Portobello Beach, Edinburgh (4), with parents in Kent (8), your gang of girls some snowy place (14), painting the house with Raymond in Croydon (20);            of latter digital images, 2012, more gaunt and wrinkled, but ever-beautiful - seemingly ageless, as you wished;            of care and trust and overdone vegetables, thin gravy, brussel sprout production lines - beautiful, mundane memories at Cowfold breakfast bar or Langley Green kitchen tops;            of seaside trips to Shoreham, Portsmouth, Brighton, dogs homes and holding my hand past the loud ones;            of picking roses from the garden for 'perfume' - sticky hands, wet floors and beautiful smells;            of early morning rude awakenings, met only with cheer and offers of tea and toast - I still have your butter tray (hospitable even in death);            of my brother's wedding, taking time to jive and seem alive whilst everyone else was dying inside, despite the fact that it was you, and you only, who should care the most (and thus, if you didn't, why should we have);            and of that very temperament, infamous tempers never shown—at least to us—just pure, kind acceptance and forgiveness.            You weren't the poetic one.            You were; the ninth child of a ****** and his wife                               the girl with the Scottish accent                               the wife of an engineer from Mitcham                               the mother of three, the loser of one                               the stern face of discipline                               the BT telephone operator, the masseuse                               the grandmother of three boys                               the ageless face of beauty                               the one I remember best            You told me you couldn't recall your siblings' names - I've looked into it. Ada, Jack, Edie, Emmie, Mabel, Joyce, Raymond, Terence.
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Jul 11, 2018
Jul 11, 2018 at 11:19 AM UTC
Margaret Rose
You weren't the poetic one, but I just read Kaddish and thought of you;            of 1998 beach photo, Sussex somewhere - as I remember you, perhaps a bit younger;            of sweet peroxide blonde, hiding brunette. I was naive to the dye 'til I saw 'the Hepburn shot' - that 1950 something print, you in Rembrandt light,            or the black beehive wig in family portrait— 1970ish— dicky bows and cocktail dresses - Dad, aged seven, in a shirt and trousers;            of youthful snapshots: Portobello Beach, Edinburgh (4), with parents in Kent (8), your gang of girls some snowy place (14), painting the house with Raymond in Croydon (20);            of latter digital images, 2012, more gaunt and wrinkled, but ever-beautiful - seemingly ageless, as you wished;            of care and trust and overdone vegetables, thin gravy, brussel sprout production lines - beautiful, mundane memories at Cowfold breakfast bar or Langley Green kitchen tops;            of seaside trips to Shoreham, Portsmouth, Brighton, dogs homes and holding my hand past the loud ones;            of picking roses from the garden for 'perfume' - sticky hands, wet floors and beautiful smells;            of early morning rude awakenings, met only with cheer and offers of tea and toast - I still have your butter tray (hospitable even in death);            of my brother's wedding, taking time to jive and seem alive whilst everyone else was dying inside, despite the fact that it was you, and you only, who should care the most (and thus, if you didn't, why should we have);            and of that very temperament, infamous tempers never shown—at least to us—just pure, kind acceptance and forgiveness.            You weren't the poetic one.            You were; the ninth child of a ****** and his wife                               the girl with the Scottish accent                               the wife of an engineer from Mitcham                               the mother of three, the loser of one                               the stern face of discipline                               the BT telephone operator, the masseuse                               the grandmother of three boys                               the ageless face of beauty                               the one I remember best            You told me you couldn't recall your siblings' names - I've looked into it. Ada, Jack, Edie, Emmie, Mabel, Joyce, Raymond, Terence.
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