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She only wanted to walk freely, or gallop through a valley and feel the wind in her hair. To camp by a stream and eat lembas and wild roots.  Wander here and there with Feanor’s sons, hunt wild boar, and drink and laugh. She would cast away the distaff. But freedom for a woman can be a fragile thing, beautiful and brief as a moth’s wing. Eol, the Dark Elf, dwelt in shadow, in Nan Elmoth. He saw Aredhel, alone and lost, and desired her, to betroth. She had no choice but to seek help at a stranger’s door. And then she had choice no more. Captivity breaks weaker hearts. But Aredhel was Elven, and of Finwe’s line. She bided time. She worked her womanly arts. She raised a son, and loved him, and told him stories of fair Gondolin. When chance arrived, they broke free and fled West, to the fair city. Eol, enraged, pursued them, and the words of Curufin stung him. He would have killed his only son for his defiance, but fate denied him this pyrrhic victory. Maeglin lived, and watched his father die, as he stood by, free. Maeglin—his father’s son—desired one who loved him not. In reckless despair, he traveled too far, and Morgoth preyed on his shame and desire. It was not hard to turn Maeglin traitor and liar. But no reward had Maeglin in this life-- never did he take fair Idril to wife. Aredhel died to save her son, not knowing he would be the one to bring ruin on the Elven city. Maeglin (his father’s son) had no kindness nor pity.   He revealed the secret path to Morgoth (his likeness in envy and in wrath). And in the end, all fell: Gondolin, Nargothrond and Doriath.
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May 3, 2020
May 3, 2020 at 2:01 PM UTC
Aredhel the White
She only wanted to walk freely, or gallop through a valley and feel the wind in her hair. To camp by a stream and eat lembas and wild roots.  Wander here and there with Feanor’s sons, hunt wild boar, and drink and laugh. She would cast away the distaff. But freedom for a woman can be a fragile thing, beautiful and brief as a moth’s wing. Eol, the Dark Elf, dwelt in shadow, in Nan Elmoth. He saw Aredhel, alone and lost, and desired her, to betroth. She had no choice but to seek help at a stranger’s door. And then she had choice no more. Captivity breaks weaker hearts. But Aredhel was Elven, and of Finwe’s line. She bided time. She worked her womanly arts. She raised a son, and loved him, and told him stories of fair Gondolin. When chance arrived, they broke free and fled West, to the fair city. Eol, enraged, pursued them, and the words of Curufin stung him. He would have killed his only son for his defiance, but fate denied him this pyrrhic victory. Maeglin lived, and watched his father die, as he stood by, free. Maeglin—his father’s son—desired one who loved him not. In reckless despair, he traveled too far, and Morgoth preyed on his shame and desire. It was not hard to turn Maeglin traitor and liar. But no reward had Maeglin in this life-- never did he take fair Idril to wife. Aredhel died to save her son, not knowing he would be the one to bring ruin on the Elven city. Maeglin (his father’s son) had no kindness nor pity.   He revealed the secret path to Morgoth (his likeness in envy and in wrath). And in the end, all fell: Gondolin, Nargothrond and Doriath.
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...in more ways than you realize. (sonnet #MMMMMMDCCCLIII) Come, wherefore dredge up Tolkien's silly tale, With that girabbit hard in tow, as hence The Scriptures count off Ehud and how thence He judged ya, Isr'el, killing in betrayl That fat, fat king ole Eglon to avail, Me seeing lost visions of the shire for sense, And Mister Bliss' adventures rising whence I canna say why, to trip 'long as bail?! From movies of far distant climes in tour, With savage ninjas, or the sixties too And student riots, loss, *** as it were Their capping triumph of that mixt-up view, Have I a minute to drift off, all's poor-- Yet why see fables when I half hear You? 01Jan18b
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Jan 15, 2018
Jan 15, 2018 at 11:35 PM UTC
Tis "...Yet A Little Sleep, Yet A Little Slumber--"
When my journey comes to its end All my thought and time spent There will be one last journey In secret the sea leads to eternity I disembark upon a land hidden from sight I see a barricade of mountains on guard A place where all the fair creatures delight Beyond these huge walls lies that land of heart Opened are my eyes and my mind Sanctuary of light and green entwined The sun forever dwells in the airs No more touch of foul and all is fair The lands and the waters are undying Birds in the airs of peace stay flying The home to the Powers of the World Absolute beauty to me was first unfurled
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Mar 1, 2016
Mar 1, 2016 at 3:36 AM UTC
Breathe Forever In Valinor
here's a tale I will tell of the supreme Master of Rivendell elfin Lord, just and wise knowledge deep as elvish skies darkly handsome, unearthly fair silver circlet, midnight hair greatest Power for him alone eyes as deep as river stones grey and lustrous, holding grace broad of shoulder, fair of face aquiline nose, chiseled jaw Master of the Elves. Their law. of his mercy his people sing possessor of the elvish Ring one of three, such Power possessed he's the Lord, and thusly blessed he's seen grief and was forsaken his beloved wife was taken to Mordor and was in suffering bound with the Orcs deep underground father of the maid Arwen who's in love with the human King deep pain of mind, Elrond's aware that he must leave this daughter there in human kingdom Middle Earth for her love has lifetime worth but Strider will soon pass away while Arwen has immortal days though her love's surpassing fine she will one day weep and pine without her husband, all alone for her people will be gone they will one day sail far following an elvish star and of Frodo he's aware the Hobbit will go to Sauron's lair generous, gentle, yet supremely strong he will help Frodo along elvish war-mail and provision he directs with great vision noble King of Rivendell at once gracious yet mighty, fell his word, ever, is his bond Hobbit friend the great ELROND SoulSurvivor (C) 2/5/2016
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Feb 5, 2016
Feb 5, 2016 at 10:54 AM UTC
Elrond
~~~°°♡°°~~~ before a golden bowl she stands crystal sceptre in her hands ~ exquisite form bone china face possessed of perfect poise and grace ~ hair so fine lustrous, rich like cornsilk platinum to bewitch ~ eyes of wisdom seas untold revealing naught but deepest SOUL ~ encrusted sheath shows hips that flare diaphemous sleeves lift with the air ~ oval jaw cheekbones strong her lips move in elvish song ~ what does she know that lights her eyes violet profoundly wise ~ but sadness fills her as she sings she can't possess The one great RING ~ mistress of the wooded lands monarch noble ethereal GRAND ~ before a bowl she casts her spell immortal queen GALADRIEL ~~~°°♡°°~~~ SoulSurvivor (C) 12/30/2015 all rights protected
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Dec 30, 2015
Dec 30, 2015 at 2:51 PM UTC
Galadriel
legends             of the dragon             the gorgon and the roc              the griffin \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/               and the wily sphinx sitting on her rock tales of the ogre         the banshee                 and the      troll, of these                 I don't get         weary, they do         not grow old • the harpy and the     pegasus, the fairy and the elf, I would sit for hours pulling books down from the shelf • I'd imagine places no one'd ever seen, for they were within my head, especially my dream • I still love these    images & sometimes I go to     where the evil Smaug lies waiting   in his gold and glitt'ring lair • won't    you please come with me? together       we can go to where the river wanders     \/\/\/\/\/\/         where the pace is slow                             or fight for maiden's                               virtue, or defeat                             the lothesome       foe • or be a           faire princess           or like a dwarf who's bold • in the mountain of     the moon, mining       precious gold, where        you are never hungry & you never grow old     {{{{{}}}}}{{{{{}}}}}           {{{{}}}}{{{{}}}}             {{{}}}{{{}}}          {{}}{{}}                {{}}{{}}           {}{}{} {}{} {}     {}        {}       ○ ○ ○
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Dec 1, 2015
Dec 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM UTC
fantasy
legends             of the dragon             the gorgon and the roc              the griffin \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/               and the wily sphinx sitting on her rock tales of the ogre         the banshee                 and the      troll, of these                 I don't get         weary, they do         not grow old • the harpy and the     pegasus, the fairy and the elf, I would sit for hours pulling books down from the shelf • I'd imagine places no one'd ever seen, for they were within my head, especially my dream • I still love these    images & sometimes I go to     where the evil Smaug lies waiting   in his gold and glitt'ring lair • won't    you please come with me? together       we can go to where the river wanders     \/\/\/\/\/\/         where the pace is slow                             or fight for maiden's                               virtue, or defeat                             the lothesome       foe • or be a           faire princess           or like a dwarf who's bold • in the mountain of     the moon, mining       precious gold, where        you are never hungry & you never grow old     {{{{{}}}}}{{{{{}}}}}           {{{{}}}}{{{{}}}}             {{{}}}{{{}}}          {{}}{{}}                {{}}{{}}           {}{}{} {}{} {}     {}        {}       ○ ○ ○
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Finally this day has come. To get another go with the sun, A year has it been since the daylight shun. The shadows of Mordor were almost to get me done. What a fine day to have an adventure. Having to save a princess as a departure. The signs are being obvious Birds are flying back to the Mountain, There is no time to be in bore, I need to hurry and reclaim back my Erebor. I’m in wonder of what she is doing. Probably she made plans already by now. Or maybe she didn’t decide on going. Thought that she might be Lonely under the Mountain. I have to get going to save her plain, Must get her out quickly of that fiery chain. But wait, What’s this? My legs are unable to move. Why is my heart trembling with fear? I’ve been waiting for this my entire time, I don’t get it. I don’t get it at all. I’m shaking pathetically, This is getting ridiculously annoying. Move it! Why is my body not responding? I can’t control my body no more It’s totally stuck! Is the sun causing this? But I’m no troll to be affected by this. I’m the Bilbo on this journey, I’m the appointed burglar To steal the precious Arkenstone So what’s happening now really? Am I scared that much That my own body is doing what I should be doing? If this fear is about the journey I’ll take, The dangers I’ll encounter, The perils I’ll meet. That wouldn’t be a serious problem for me not to go. But it’s different. This doesn’t make sense. I need to get rid of this fence. But It’s no use, I’m stuck in this hole in fuse. Stuck in this Shire, While that desolator Smaug is causing fire. I’ve forgotten the time. The shadows are back. Here I am underneath the moon’s refine, Standing still in charcoal leather black Not resisting anymore. I completely stood in my own accord. Tears are spilling down my face. I can feel in my veins the sorrow, And thinking about it made me wonder If I can make it til tomorrow. Then, So sudden it came to me in a flash The reason why I did not move Why I did not meet her. It’s because a year ago I was there. In front of her. My precious Arkenstone Under the Mountains The kings jewel. The jewel that rejected my tiny hands, That reached beyond the Middle of Earth Just for her. The same jewel that replaced me with a greed of a dragon. That burned the glow of what’s inside me. And now I remember it all. Clear as the sky above me. I am no Bilbo Baggins. There is no treasure waiting for me. No adventure as destination. Because this, This is just the Anniversary of my Rejection.
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Feb 13, 2015
Feb 13, 2015 at 10:06 AM UTC
Anniversary of Rejection
Finally this day has come. To get another go with the sun, A year has it been since the daylight shun. The shadows of Mordor were almost to get me done. What a fine day to have an adventure. Having to save a princess as a departure. The signs are being obvious Birds are flying back to the Mountain, There is no time to be in bore, I need to hurry and reclaim back my Erebor. I’m in wonder of what she is doing. Probably she made plans already by now. Or maybe she didn’t decide on going. Thought that she might be Lonely under the Mountain. I have to get going to save her plain, Must get her out quickly of that fiery chain. But wait, What’s this? My legs are unable to move. Why is my heart trembling with fear? I’ve been waiting for this my entire time, I don’t get it. I don’t get it at all. I’m shaking pathetically, This is getting ridiculously annoying. Move it! Why is my body not responding? I can’t control my body no more It’s totally stuck! Is the sun causing this? But I’m no troll to be affected by this. I’m the Bilbo on this journey, I’m the appointed burglar To steal the precious Arkenstone So what’s happening now really? Am I scared that much That my own body is doing what I should be doing? If this fear is about the journey I’ll take, The dangers I’ll encounter, The perils I’ll meet. That wouldn’t be a serious problem for me not to go. But it’s different. This doesn’t make sense. I need to get rid of this fence. But It’s no use, I’m stuck in this hole in fuse. Stuck in this Shire, While that desolator Smaug is causing fire. I’ve forgotten the time. The shadows are back. Here I am underneath the moon’s refine, Standing still in charcoal leather black Not resisting anymore. I completely stood in my own accord. Tears are spilling down my face. I can feel in my veins the sorrow, And thinking about it made me wonder If I can make it til tomorrow. Then, So sudden it came to me in a flash The reason why I did not move Why I did not meet her. It’s because a year ago I was there. In front of her. My precious Arkenstone Under the Mountains The kings jewel. The jewel that rejected my tiny hands, That reached beyond the Middle of Earth Just for her. The same jewel that replaced me with a greed of a dragon. That burned the glow of what’s inside me. And now I remember it all. Clear as the sky above me. I am no Bilbo Baggins. There is no treasure waiting for me. No adventure as destination. Because this, This is just the Anniversary of my Rejection.
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