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there's an awful emptiness in relatable content when hundreds of people all experience the same loneliness and pain but no one can do anything about it, so instead they just laugh, a fake laugh, and say "yeah, I know how you feel!" as if commiserating will somehow ease the pain when someone dies or something in your heart goes askew but if every awful experience is common then the norm is misery which is not a norm I'm willing to accept or maybe relatable is an adjective for anything relevant to the human experience in which case, every moment, every feeling, every instance is relatable and therefore dreadfully unoriginal so-- I propose we change the meaning of the word itself allow it to become more, a warning to break free a protest to rise up against the normative and to seek the original to become inspired and to connect with others in unique and meaningful ways join me in reclaiming what is relatable and instead seeking what is new
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Sep 25, 2018
Sep 25, 2018 at 12:27 AM UTC
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It starts sprinkling, Then raining, And eventually, It turns into pouring, Sometimes storming. Well, With you, It started sprinkling when we began to talk, Then skipped the pouring, You came in full on as a storm. Blowing me away with each word you say. And now, What are we coming to? What are we going to do? Is this rain going to stop? Or are we going to live our life in a boat, Saving each other from drowning? I don’t want this to be another I Love You. I want this to be something more.
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May 13, 2014
May 13, 2014 at 9:56 AM UTC
rain rolling in