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Even a humble society’s nod Feels heavier than empty praise elsewhere. Validation is no vanity, But a mirror showing Our efforts have touched real lives. Through 7 Seconds, I foresaw my own triumph, After surviving the coma’s shadow. Yes, I'm worldly successful. I've a fine second job, Previously, a Probationary Officer With the State Bank of India, Now I'm a Group-B Gazetted Officer Working as an Assistant Audit Officer, With the Office of Director General of Audit, North Eastern Railway HQ, Gorakhpur Assigned by the Comptroller & Auditor General Of India. All that professional success, And a fine equity portfolio too At a time when most expected me To fail, to become a liability on My aging parents' drooping shoulders. In my 2021-novel Swansong, I predicted hostilities That would shake the world in 2025. And in the many novels since, Each line, each story, Holds a fragment of truth waiting For the acknowledgment it deserves. A simple village cheer, A neighbor’s quiet respect— These small affirmations Anchor the heart more surely Than gold or lofty accolades ever could. External validation matters. Even from the humblest of societies, Their acknowledgment is a compass, Guiding us to see That what we create carries meaning beyond ourselves. External validation matters not If I were to go live in the Himalayas Like an ascetic, a hermit, Cursing the narcissistic human society, Extracting pleasure at every falling pillar, Their sufferings have become mine— My happiness, I mean, the Schadenfreude.
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Oct 11, 2025
Oct 11, 2025 at 11:51 AM UTC
Schadenfreude
Even a humble society’s nod Feels heavier than empty praise elsewhere. Validation is no vanity, But a mirror showing Our efforts have touched real lives. Through 7 Seconds, I foresaw my own triumph, After surviving the coma’s shadow. Yes, I'm worldly successful. I've a fine second job, Previously, a Probationary Officer With the State Bank of India, Now I'm a Group-B Gazetted Officer Working as an Assistant Audit Officer, With the Office of Director General of Audit, North Eastern Railway HQ, Gorakhpur Assigned by the Comptroller & Auditor General Of India. All that professional success, And a fine equity portfolio too At a time when most expected me To fail, to become a liability on My aging parents' drooping shoulders. In my 2021-novel Swansong, I predicted hostilities That would shake the world in 2025. And in the many novels since, Each line, each story, Holds a fragment of truth waiting For the acknowledgment it deserves. A simple village cheer, A neighbor’s quiet respect— These small affirmations Anchor the heart more surely Than gold or lofty accolades ever could. External validation matters. Even from the humblest of societies, Their acknowledgment is a compass, Guiding us to see That what we create carries meaning beyond ourselves. External validation matters not If I were to go live in the Himalayas Like an ascetic, a hermit, Cursing the narcissistic human society, Extracting pleasure at every falling pillar, Their sufferings have become mine— My happiness, I mean, the Schadenfreude.
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They say She says He says Some say “it“ but are do not mean well. You say “whatever“ And call yourself a bread A sandwich. You joke, you giggle. I make it real. Taking things serious, Taking things literal, Is a talent of mine. But the idea of identity It is a story of yours These pronouns Fresh like bread Wholesome like wheat Savory like heat They are just like you When nothing works When all feels wrong Sandwich will put a smile on you And you Might give a sandwich to sandwir A sandwich is sandwirs It is meant to be Sandwich Sandwir Sandwir Sandwirs And sandwichself The mania of grain and wheats Will never be gone
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Apr 11, 2021
Apr 11, 2021 at 5:07 AM UTC
A Sandwich
I'm not greedy I'm not indecisive I'm not a **** I'm not loose with my heart and my mind and my body Denial is a wooden box I locked myself into at night to quiet the voices that cut me down and let me pretend I wasn't what I thought I was the wooden box that kept my heart from feeling for more than one face who are you to tell me who I am and what I love and who are you to tell me my heart is wrong I'm not unlovable but **** am I so tired of feeling like I will never be good enough for you who loves one face and not another I am so tired of being too straight for a girl but too gay for a man and anything outside that box I am enough and I have nothing more to prove.
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Mar 19, 2019
Mar 19, 2019 at 11:17 PM UTC
BISEXUAL
We have incentive to collect our fears, replace them with hope in the incoming years. But we tie them off and leave them alone; stash them away in the deepest parts of our bones. Stamp them in blood, or tears we forgot, switch off the trauma and train of our thoughts. The tracks mail letters, to the backs of our minds; a land unknown from the depth of our blinds. I promise you, this ill way of thinking, doesn't solve the problem, nor help it sink in. Someone will find them, somehow deny them, for the points you could've made; and the pain you couldn't take-
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Oct 31, 2018
Oct 31, 2018 at 11:02 AM UTC
Train Tracks
Here I am Again Mumbling excuses For my misuses Of any likeness to rhyme
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 12:22 AM UTC
Again