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You thought I was falling apart before But at that point I still had my feet on the floor Now, I don't even see the ground anymore No clues on what I'm in store for For now or for forever more Did I drift or swim out far to far from the shore? I'm far further than a metaphor can illustrate, further than ever before Memories so distant they've been redesignated as basic lore What more can you do when you've lost your core And it was you who held open the door... ...once more ©2024
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Feb 8, 2024
Feb 8, 2024 at 5:00 PM UTC
~•§•~ Worse than Before or Just More of the Same? ~•§•~
a ************* story does no good "illustrate the pangs of loss" why don't you illustrate my pangs of knowing you stories only serve to accentuate my failures I resent it I resent you my father, he was good but not exceptionally great poetry was his forte and even the poems were not that interesting. instead of being a genius-freak he was a freak-freak & with a beer in his hand, he would deny that he drank because he was afraid of life and said he was disgusted with people like you he was a walking catastrophe rather like me actually as I grow older I'm turning into him I wish to vanish he will never there is nothing more that I can do but wait I can wait if hell is this chair what is heaven I wish to be free but i have no idea what freedom is a shadow of an idea that our fathers fought for mistakenly sitting down is much easier than standing though it does not allow movement I wish to burn the books of my panic see me reach for the stars but come back empty handed my hands are stained with the blood of my consciousness but so are yours and so, so much more than mine
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May 23, 2019
May 23, 2019 at 8:47 AM UTC
Therapy Session #3
i use poetry to describe a vast array of things but it has occurred to me there are no individual words i could possibly string together to illustrate you.
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Jul 29, 2018
Jul 29, 2018 at 2:30 PM UTC
.you
It's hard to illustrate this essence in frames some love is easily lost but some love, it stays. You draw outlines With precision and care And still gets smudged in pain and despair. You try to illustrate take every right step still, leave enough room for silly mistakes. Some love, it just stays. You try to erase those sloppy details. nevertheless, can't escape but some love, it just stays.
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Jul 13, 2017
Jul 13, 2017 at 12:31 PM UTC
Sketch of love
If I could find the words to speak and say them without getting weak, it's all right there inside my head thoughts just jumbled up instead. Give me a chance to write them down and I'll describe my world without a sound.
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Nov 2, 2016
Nov 2, 2016 at 11:04 AM UTC
Illustrative Words
Without an authority, you are your own authority. But yet what do you perceive? Right and wrong? Truth and false?  So can you observe within yourself? Did you observe anything before ever observing what is inside of yourself, or was it afterwards? what floats inside of you is only what floats outside of you: is this not how you come to being? Are you truly finding yourself? Or what are you finding about yourself? (Your opinion is only a reflection of the exterior from yourself; But that is beyond the point.) If there truly is not an authority, and if you are the authority; how can anything exist from you alone? know that what you perceive isn’t from you. It is only within your consciousness. Truly you only know that you exist because of what exists outside of your existence; although you are not proven to exist without the absence of your existence. Whatever you trust in isn’t from you; and only faith can be what you believe in. So whatever you put your faith in it can only be of your own knowings, but you cannot have faith in yourself alone.
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Nov 4, 2014
Nov 4, 2014 at 2:44 AM UTC
find yourself
Inspiration sparks It flows and bursts into flame I am overcome.
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Apr 30, 2014
Apr 30, 2014 at 12:35 AM UTC
Inspirator