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#hopefullness
this song is for you the one i wait for i dont need you i know thats what they all say and logic reminds me to push you away but hearts have a funny way of running amuck once cherished and loved it now lay untouched i hope you enjoy it this tune i derived from chaos inside me that once may subside; three chords in progression from major and flat each one a reminder for the weeks that have passed three strings plucked in fashion each one louder than last a riff of goodbye notes in minor key for effect i sing all but once so the silence reflects the moment of quiet i felt when you left the life was drawn out of me and silence began my heart tore in pieces like guitar strings when snapped i finish each verse with a simple refrain a cry of the memories that will always remain the chorus is steady it flows quick like champagne that we poured one dark evening we shared in the spring the bridge is unending it connects the past to the new it starts with open chords like the whole in my chest and ends with a cadence that drips with regret the bass line is deep like the sound of your voice the beat is persistent like the smell of your skin the tune is repeated like breathing out breathing in the song ends with hopefulness despite all the grit still the silence afterwords will not comfortably sit there will be no more teardrops upon any fret my guitar cannot weep though i haven't stopped yet
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Jun 29, 2018
Jun 29, 2018 at 12:26 AM UTC
Your Song
I’m not sure I believe that one day the void will close, the glass will be filled and all will smell of roses with the sky lightened by another new morning better to have loved and lost, easier said than done, adrift in the tide with our memories washing against me The inevitability of the kiss of sea and sand seems less romantic and more a nuisance now an endless cycle all too familiar never entering my mind that the day would come when I’d be drained of all hope for the rekindling of what was and god, we really were something
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Dec 24, 2014
Dec 24, 2014 at 1:23 PM UTC
What was