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I can be obsessive. For instance, last night I needed a command hook. My mind couldn’t focus on “Principles of Biostatistics,” as fascinating as that book is, because I needed this $3 command hook to hang my keys by the door. There’s a table by the door, I could easily put my keys there, but no. That’s where books go (am I too picky?). What’s funny is, I’d just been reading about ‘bias mitigation,' ya know, science is everywhere. Still, I searched the boxes that I hadn’t unpacked I looked around them too, did one fall in a crack? Did I have one to begin with? I couldn’t keep track. I texted Charles (across the hall), “do you have a command hook?” “A what?” he replied. So I texted his wife, who went to look. When she didn’t have one, I went back to my book. The chapter was about ‘probability distributions as tools for managing uncertainty.’ How topical, here I was, uncertain about when I’d get that command hook. Never mind an indifferent God, science is obviously listening. It was nearly midnight. I wondered, how late Door-Dash delivered? Would they bring my hook or were there other services I should consider? What about Amazon, Target or WalMart—could one of those be a winner? In the end I had to do without—I gave up at 1am. The miracle of capitalism had failed me—damn. I could study with the hook off my mind. So, I set an Alexa reminder, an alarm on my watch and alerts on my iPhone and MacBook finder, then I wrote a pink post-it note, and put that on my epidemiology binder. I have a standing, pre-dawn jog with Charles, and an idea forming. If we passed an open convenience store, I could buy one in the morning! . . Songs for this: I Want You by Bob Dylan I need you by Jon Batiste
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Jun 13, 2025
Jun 13, 2025 at 1:39 PM UTC
obsessions
I can be obsessive. For instance, last night I needed a command hook. My mind couldn’t focus on “Principles of Biostatistics,” as fascinating as that book is, because I needed this $3 command hook to hang my keys by the door. There’s a table by the door, I could easily put my keys there, but no. That’s where books go (am I too picky?). What’s funny is, I’d just been reading about ‘bias mitigation,' ya know, science is everywhere. Still, I searched the boxes that I hadn’t unpacked I looked around them too, did one fall in a crack? Did I have one to begin with? I couldn’t keep track. I texted Charles (across the hall), “do you have a command hook?” “A what?” he replied. So I texted his wife, who went to look. When she didn’t have one, I went back to my book. The chapter was about ‘probability distributions as tools for managing uncertainty.’ How topical, here I was, uncertain about when I’d get that command hook. Never mind an indifferent God, science is obviously listening. It was nearly midnight. I wondered, how late Door-Dash delivered? Would they bring my hook or were there other services I should consider? What about Amazon, Target or WalMart—could one of those be a winner? In the end I had to do without—I gave up at 1am. The miracle of capitalism had failed me—damn. I could study with the hook off my mind. So, I set an Alexa reminder, an alarm on my watch and alerts on my iPhone and MacBook finder, then I wrote a pink post-it note, and put that on my epidemiology binder. I have a standing, pre-dawn jog with Charles, and an idea forming. If we passed an open convenience store, I could buy one in the morning! . . Songs for this: I Want You by Bob Dylan I need you by Jon Batiste
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I knew it! I knew it wasn't real, I knew the echoes of this place, Were just misleading hooks in my face. Look at all these people, real, I swear they aren't simple clones, Or were they all along?
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Mar 18, 2025
Mar 18, 2025 at 2:36 PM UTC
I Knew It!
I used bait my hooks with juicy bits,   morsels sweet and tender And throw my line out then, into the   deep dark depths Some human voice/heart to capture Some wild Sea horse, some Mermaid   sweet Neptune King or marauding Queen of   the Deep Some words from some other, some   nuggets of comfort That might help light up my drear   and wintry life Bring some warmth into this intense   cold I felt And remind me that I too, was still   human; Like a big black spider I'd mope   about And scan my nets impatiently Waiting for that telltale tug, that   lovely sign That someone at last, had bit upon a   bait of mine, Then like a mischievous elf I'd dance   about And clap my hands in glee Marvelling at my cleverness, at my   great ingenuity I'd quickly gather in my nets - my line Anxious to know what strange fish   my handiwork did deliver I'd haul them back to my dark cave -   my cavern There to ruminate over and further -   further examine. Then one day there came from out of   the depths, From out of that dark pool so   mysterious A voice so pure and sweet, like that of   an Angel A young girl's voice, she liked   something I wrote And desired very much to tell me so She spoke at length about her own life She talked not of pain or of Life's cruel   game But of hopes she had and dreams, and   pretty flowery things, I pitied her and the words she wrote For I knew this world and knew what  it was likely to do to her & her dreams As it had once done to me and mine (I bared my teeth at this world, it's lies   and deceit), But there was something about her, That girl and those words she wrote They stayed with me long and I'd   come back to view them often To read them was almost to enter into   another world A world of innocence and light   undimmed by darker things, (To walk again in Eden's fields) She touched something in me,   something old...something deep She reminded me... yes, she reminded   me of my own young self all those      years ago A darling child with sparkling eyes, a   hearty laugh and an impish smile "Wherever did you go Little One ?" I   asked myself, "How cold and empty have been my   days...Why did you leave me ?" She haunted me, this girl and those   words she wrote I wondered what she must look like,   with flowing hair & flowing dresses So I went down to the dark pool and I   looked right in But nothing could I see, only my own   reflection staring back at me How old and gnarled I had become,   like a wizened old tree, "I couldn't protect you Little One, this world it overwhelmed, it engulfed me I didn't know which way to turn How alone and how afraid I was.... You deserved better, so much better A world of love and magic and beauty Not this cold, grim and forbidding   place Any child would recoil in horror at   such a sight as this", I resolved there and then..I resolved to Try and find him again if find him I   could Buried beneath that morass of years, Many of which had been bad or ill.                             2 Revisiting my old home place, little   village by the sea I wandered again those olden streets   of my youth, But things they had changed, it was   not as it had been And every change was like a pain   inside, eating into me My old home, it had been torn down,   only a pile of rubble remained, Other old landmarks I had known had   now vanished and were gone The faces too, were all different now They looked at me as you would a   stranger Their suspicious curious eyes following me wherever I went, I felt like a man strangely out of sync   with Time A fool I felt walking that ghostly shore Searching for a Summertime long ago, In truth I couldn't wait to get out of   there, to get back home. I took to painting pictures instead, pictures of the memories that were in    my head On sheets of blank paper I built again   my old homestead Every room, every item, every colour   lovingly restored Just as I remembered them And outside, the garden too and the   sea shore, The rocks, the beach & the tide And the village, my village! as I had   known it as a boy. And I'd close my eyes then, and using my imagination, put myself back there Walking again those same lonely   rooms, Walking the sea shore & village streets Haunting them like a ghost; And I'd call out your name, call out   like a banshee in the wind That you might come back to me... one   more time... Old memories would return, things I'd long forgotten, some good, others not   so good Bits of old feelings too, would return,   but only for fleeting moments The flotsam & jetsam of the past, The ruins of who I used to be, Sometimes, with eyes closed, my head   would drop And I'd slip off and lose myself in   these strange dreamlike reveries As I'd come to call them And for a moment I'd find myself back   there, back in my old village or so it     seemed Old faces from the past would reappear again, Their fresh & youthful faces talking excitedly with childhood wonder and   abandonment I didn't know if they could see me or   not Even so, I'd cover my face not wanting   them to see what I had become. They didn't seem to know I was there.                              3 And so it went on, each day I'd walk   and do my rounds Walking around my ghostly Kingdom Trying to keep it alive, Like a miner digging, seeking new memories, old feelings, little slivers of   gold, Sometimes I'd feel disconsolate & feel   like giving up But I kept on.... I kept on Till one day, while slumped in my   chair, with eyes closed Lost again in one of those strange   dreamlike reveries I dreamt that I was returning home   after another fruitless search Weary and dejected But then, going inside, much to my   great surprise There! Seated on the sitting room   carpet A child! A little child!! A little child at   play Immersed in some game of his Gently rocking backwards and   forwards Humming to himself some tune, With eyes so bright and a strange   radiance about his face All under a big mop of black hair; As I watched him from the doorway, I   wondered to myself "Was this... was this I... was this me" And in all the time I watched him Never once did he look up, so engrossed did he seem in his game: And in my own mind, the only thoughts I had were of a much darker kind "Now that we had the little wretch, we should grab him, put him to work for   us Use him, control him for our own   ends, He must have a treasure hidden some place......" In those moments I knew... I knew   somehow I knew there was no way back for me, I turned away and left him there, I went outside, out the back into the   garden The garden where once as children we   had played and dreamt of being     heroes one day - And suddenly - suddenly all these   memories came flooding back to me Memories of the few kindnesses I'd   ever known in this life A Mother's sweet soft words of love   and reassurance An old girlfriend's fond kiss and   smiling face A friend's encouraging words, And suddenly these great big tears   welled up in my eyes And these great sobs came from   within me I was overcome, I crumpled and fell to   my knees And buried my head in my hands, and   wept, But then suddenly, in the midst of all   this grief and pain A hand touched me, a little, a tiny   hand I looked up, it was the little child from   the room But he wasn't alone this time, he had   two others with him They stood a little way back behind   him, One, another boy, had his finger to his   mouth Looking at me as if in profound   puzzlement at my predicament The other, a young girl, was looking   over at him giggling She had her hair cut into a little black   bob at the front, like a little pixie, Such a delicious sound I thought, the   carefree laughter of a child I'd forgotten what it sounded like It'd been so long since I heard   someone laugh that way, It was as if the world she came from was a place that inspired only great    mirth and joy As if that was all that existed there- And then the child, he spoke to me (in   a little voice and with some concern) "Why do you cry ? Come and see   where we live Come and play with us awhile". He held out his hand and smiled, a   kindly smile Looking down at my hand, I wasn't   sure But he reached forward and took mine   anyway He led me away, the others following   too, I felt strangely moved, forgot my tears   and my sorrow I felt a strange freedom, like a great   weight had been lifted Like all before that moment had been   erased As if my own life had been nothing   more than a dream, I felt as if I'd been accepted, and that I   belonged again I felt almost like...like I'd come home.
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Dec 29, 2019
Dec 29, 2019 at 11:46 AM UTC
Angel from the Depths
I used bait my hooks with juicy bits,   morsels sweet and tender And throw my line out then, into the   deep dark depths Some human voice/heart to capture Some wild Sea horse, some Mermaid   sweet Neptune King or marauding Queen of   the Deep Some words from some other, some   nuggets of comfort That might help light up my drear   and wintry life Bring some warmth into this intense   cold I felt And remind me that I too, was still   human; Like a big black spider I'd mope   about And scan my nets impatiently Waiting for that telltale tug, that   lovely sign That someone at last, had bit upon a   bait of mine, Then like a mischievous elf I'd dance   about And clap my hands in glee Marvelling at my cleverness, at my   great ingenuity I'd quickly gather in my nets - my line Anxious to know what strange fish   my handiwork did deliver I'd haul them back to my dark cave -   my cavern There to ruminate over and further -   further examine. Then one day there came from out of   the depths, From out of that dark pool so   mysterious A voice so pure and sweet, like that of   an Angel A young girl's voice, she liked   something I wrote And desired very much to tell me so She spoke at length about her own life She talked not of pain or of Life's cruel   game But of hopes she had and dreams, and   pretty flowery things, I pitied her and the words she wrote For I knew this world and knew what  it was likely to do to her & her dreams As it had once done to me and mine (I bared my teeth at this world, it's lies   and deceit), But there was something about her, That girl and those words she wrote They stayed with me long and I'd   come back to view them often To read them was almost to enter into   another world A world of innocence and light   undimmed by darker things, (To walk again in Eden's fields) She touched something in me,   something old...something deep She reminded me... yes, she reminded   me of my own young self all those      years ago A darling child with sparkling eyes, a   hearty laugh and an impish smile "Wherever did you go Little One ?" I   asked myself, "How cold and empty have been my   days...Why did you leave me ?" She haunted me, this girl and those   words she wrote I wondered what she must look like,   with flowing hair & flowing dresses So I went down to the dark pool and I   looked right in But nothing could I see, only my own   reflection staring back at me How old and gnarled I had become,   like a wizened old tree, "I couldn't protect you Little One, this world it overwhelmed, it engulfed me I didn't know which way to turn How alone and how afraid I was.... You deserved better, so much better A world of love and magic and beauty Not this cold, grim and forbidding   place Any child would recoil in horror at   such a sight as this", I resolved there and then..I resolved to Try and find him again if find him I   could Buried beneath that morass of years, Many of which had been bad or ill.                             2 Revisiting my old home place, little   village by the sea I wandered again those olden streets   of my youth, But things they had changed, it was   not as it had been And every change was like a pain   inside, eating into me My old home, it had been torn down,   only a pile of rubble remained, Other old landmarks I had known had   now vanished and were gone The faces too, were all different now They looked at me as you would a   stranger Their suspicious curious eyes following me wherever I went, I felt like a man strangely out of sync   with Time A fool I felt walking that ghostly shore Searching for a Summertime long ago, In truth I couldn't wait to get out of   there, to get back home. I took to painting pictures instead, pictures of the memories that were in    my head On sheets of blank paper I built again   my old homestead Every room, every item, every colour   lovingly restored Just as I remembered them And outside, the garden too and the   sea shore, The rocks, the beach & the tide And the village, my village! as I had   known it as a boy. And I'd close my eyes then, and using my imagination, put myself back there Walking again those same lonely   rooms, Walking the sea shore & village streets Haunting them like a ghost; And I'd call out your name, call out   like a banshee in the wind That you might come back to me... one   more time... Old memories would return, things I'd long forgotten, some good, others not   so good Bits of old feelings too, would return,   but only for fleeting moments The flotsam & jetsam of the past, The ruins of who I used to be, Sometimes, with eyes closed, my head   would drop And I'd slip off and lose myself in   these strange dreamlike reveries As I'd come to call them And for a moment I'd find myself back   there, back in my old village or so it     seemed Old faces from the past would reappear again, Their fresh & youthful faces talking excitedly with childhood wonder and   abandonment I didn't know if they could see me or   not Even so, I'd cover my face not wanting   them to see what I had become. They didn't seem to know I was there.                              3 And so it went on, each day I'd walk   and do my rounds Walking around my ghostly Kingdom Trying to keep it alive, Like a miner digging, seeking new memories, old feelings, little slivers of   gold, Sometimes I'd feel disconsolate & feel   like giving up But I kept on.... I kept on Till one day, while slumped in my   chair, with eyes closed Lost again in one of those strange   dreamlike reveries I dreamt that I was returning home   after another fruitless search Weary and dejected But then, going inside, much to my   great surprise There! Seated on the sitting room   carpet A child! A little child!! A little child at   play Immersed in some game of his Gently rocking backwards and   forwards Humming to himself some tune, With eyes so bright and a strange   radiance about his face All under a big mop of black hair; As I watched him from the doorway, I   wondered to myself "Was this... was this I... was this me" And in all the time I watched him Never once did he look up, so engrossed did he seem in his game: And in my own mind, the only thoughts I had were of a much darker kind "Now that we had the little wretch, we should grab him, put him to work for   us Use him, control him for our own   ends, He must have a treasure hidden some place......" In those moments I knew... I knew   somehow I knew there was no way back for me, I turned away and left him there, I went outside, out the back into the   garden The garden where once as children we   had played and dreamt of being     heroes one day - And suddenly - suddenly all these   memories came flooding back to me Memories of the few kindnesses I'd   ever known in this life A Mother's sweet soft words of love   and reassurance An old girlfriend's fond kiss and   smiling face A friend's encouraging words, And suddenly these great big tears   welled up in my eyes And these great sobs came from   within me I was overcome, I crumpled and fell to   my knees And buried my head in my hands, and   wept, But then suddenly, in the midst of all   this grief and pain A hand touched me, a little, a tiny   hand I looked up, it was the little child from   the room But he wasn't alone this time, he had   two others with him They stood a little way back behind   him, One, another boy, had his finger to his   mouth Looking at me as if in profound   puzzlement at my predicament The other, a young girl, was looking   over at him giggling She had her hair cut into a little black   bob at the front, like a little pixie, Such a delicious sound I thought, the   carefree laughter of a child I'd forgotten what it sounded like It'd been so long since I heard   someone laugh that way, It was as if the world she came from was a place that inspired only great    mirth and joy As if that was all that existed there- And then the child, he spoke to me (in   a little voice and with some concern) "Why do you cry ? Come and see   where we live Come and play with us awhile". He held out his hand and smiled, a   kindly smile Looking down at my hand, I wasn't   sure But he reached forward and took mine   anyway He led me away, the others following   too, I felt strangely moved, forgot my tears   and my sorrow I felt a strange freedom, like a great   weight had been lifted Like all before that moment had been   erased As if my own life had been nothing   more than a dream, I felt as if I'd been accepted, and that I   belonged again I felt almost like...like I'd come home.
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Like flies in tackle box, Hardware bolted to their lobes, The ladies earrings.
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Dec 22, 2017
Dec 22, 2017 at 3:48 AM UTC
For The Ears Only /Haiku
Existential views Church bell blues Christian old news Messiah complex Respectful specs Saviour syndrome old tech Love in the heart of the wild A sky cannot be outsourced or out styled It has millions of vistas and views I will never be old news We are the sky We will never die Or sink into religious why's Who is Daniel Hooks? Neither a robber or a crook Just a man who looks Into the depths like the mind who crept into a unfinished novel I keep your secrets in my hovel.
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Sep 2, 2017
Sep 2, 2017 at 6:09 PM UTC
Who is Daniel Hooks?
Our ovoid showers copper on the fourth of july Slips fists until bliss razed the grass with red dye Empty sieve lead hooks to spank through the nights Our mare’s nest by-passing sparkled like a firefly Birds & trees vastly sprout young waves of light Lugged for incredible misbehavior Until glass rolls & lights up with majestic flavors
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Nov 30, 2016
Nov 30, 2016 at 6:55 AM UTC
We Are The Trees Up That Hill