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(Original Version) Sweet taste of blossoms They catch my tongue as I walk Chery blossoms sway Within the small park Couples with marriage in mind Scar atop a bridge The sweet taste fades That young girl always in mind A silhouette of fear Vibrant colors fade The sun recedes to stars No one notices No one notices The black mark atop the bridge The silhouette descend No one cares to look Sweetest tastes never last long Chery blossoms sway No one notices Another day finds its end Sweet taste of nothing ___________________________________________________________ Remastered Version No Home, Sweet Child Blossom A Modern Renga by Bellie-Boo (me) Sweet taste of blossoms— they brush my tongue as I walk. Cherry branches sway. In the small park’s hush, couples dream of wedding rings; a scar marks the bridge. The sweetness dissolves. That young girl returns in thought— a shadow of fear. Colors bleed to dusk. The sun folds into the stars. No one turns to see. No one turns to see— the black mark upon the bridge, the shadow descend. No one stops to look. Sweetest things never last long. Cherry branches sway. No one turns again. Another day disappears— taste of nothing sweet.
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Jan 9, 2022
Jan 9, 2022 at 8:58 PM UTC
No Home, Sweet Child Blossom
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Feb 18, 2025
Feb 18, 2025 at 9:54 PM UTC
Sleep Well
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Jun 16, 2021
Jun 16, 2021 at 7:23 PM UTC
Backpedal
every line and curve a new road to somewhere else love them all the same        -the only hiaku i’ll ever write
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Feb 12, 2019
Feb 12, 2019 at 12:04 PM UTC
untitled #1
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Jul 18, 2018
Jul 18, 2018 at 7:32 PM UTC
Zeus Watches Us
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Jul 3, 2018
Jul 3, 2018 at 8:32 PM UTC
War
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Jun 23, 2018
Jun 23, 2018 at 3:49 PM UTC
Pavlov’s Experiment
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Mar 13, 2017
Mar 13, 2017 at 11:03 PM UTC
Traveling Alone (Hiaku)
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Nov 25, 2016
Nov 25, 2016 at 7:12 PM UTC
Better
it is you it really was if I had no doubt and pause my eyes could have linger a little while longer
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Mar 13, 2016
Mar 13, 2016 at 5:09 PM UTC
The Regret
*I'll swallow my pride to keep a ***** as a friend for awhile*
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Sep 8, 2014
Sep 8, 2014 at 4:50 PM UTC
Hiaku about a *****