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There is a morning that refuses to end. Something I’ve been trying to understand, Something that doesn’t quite make sense until it does. I was happy with you. Not in a fleeting way, Not something I could easily replace, But something that settled into me quietly. You felt like home. And in that home, I found a version of myself that knew how to be happy. Not loudly. Not temporarily. You settled into me slowly, like warmth returning to frozen hands, like finding home after wandering too long through rooms where the sound of your heart only matters But then I saw you with them. And I tried to deny it at first. I tried to believe that what we had was enough. But the truth was there, clear and undeniable. You were happier. Not just a little, not just in passing, but in a way that lit you up completely. The kind of happiness I had never been able to give you. You looked lighter beside them. Like laughter came easier. Like the universe had finally placed you where you were always supposed to be. And I understood something terrible, Love does not always ask to be chosen. Sometimes it only asks to witness. And that was the moment everything changed. Because in choosing your happiness, I had to let go of mine. I didn’t just lose you. I lost the only place where my happiness knew how to exist. The days after felt unfamiliar. Quiet in the wrong ways. Heavy in places that used to feel full. It was like learning how to live without something I had already built my world around. Like carrying a life that no longer carried me back. And yet, even in that emptiness, something remains. A loophole. Because as much as I have lost my own happiness, As much as I am still trying to find where I belong without you, I cannot separate myself from the way I love you. And the way I love you has always meant this--- That your happiness matters more than mine ever did. So when I see you now, When I see you smiling the way you do with them, When I see you living in the kind of joy I could never give, Something in me still responds. It hurts. It really does. Like reopening a wound that healed incorrectly. But it is also the only proof that some part of me remains alive. And maybe that is the punishment. Not that I lost you, But that every new day forces me to survive you again, While still loving you enough to be grateful that you found the happiness I could not become. But at the same time, it gives me something to hold onto. Because if I can no longer be happy for myself, I can still be happy for you. The quiet, unbearable comfort of knowing that as long as you are happy, a fragment of me is too. And maybe that is the cruelest, most beautiful part of all. That even after losing you, even after losing the happiness I once had, I am not left with nothing. I am left with that loophole. The quiet, aching truth that as long as you are happy, a part of me still is too. Not whole. Not the way it used to be. Not enough to escape this loop. Not enough to call it healing. But enough to wake up again. Enough to keep going.
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May 10
May 10, 2026 at 12:29 PM UTC
Groundhog day
There is a morning that refuses to end. Something I’ve been trying to understand, Something that doesn’t quite make sense until it does. I was happy with you. Not in a fleeting way, Not something I could easily replace, But something that settled into me quietly. You felt like home. And in that home, I found a version of myself that knew how to be happy. Not loudly. Not temporarily. You settled into me slowly, like warmth returning to frozen hands, like finding home after wandering too long through rooms where the sound of your heart only matters But then I saw you with them. And I tried to deny it at first. I tried to believe that what we had was enough. But the truth was there, clear and undeniable. You were happier. Not just a little, not just in passing, but in a way that lit you up completely. The kind of happiness I had never been able to give you. You looked lighter beside them. Like laughter came easier. Like the universe had finally placed you where you were always supposed to be. And I understood something terrible, Love does not always ask to be chosen. Sometimes it only asks to witness. And that was the moment everything changed. Because in choosing your happiness, I had to let go of mine. I didn’t just lose you. I lost the only place where my happiness knew how to exist. The days after felt unfamiliar. Quiet in the wrong ways. Heavy in places that used to feel full. It was like learning how to live without something I had already built my world around. Like carrying a life that no longer carried me back. And yet, even in that emptiness, something remains. A loophole. Because as much as I have lost my own happiness, As much as I am still trying to find where I belong without you, I cannot separate myself from the way I love you. And the way I love you has always meant this--- That your happiness matters more than mine ever did. So when I see you now, When I see you smiling the way you do with them, When I see you living in the kind of joy I could never give, Something in me still responds. It hurts. It really does. Like reopening a wound that healed incorrectly. But it is also the only proof that some part of me remains alive. And maybe that is the punishment. Not that I lost you, But that every new day forces me to survive you again, While still loving you enough to be grateful that you found the happiness I could not become. But at the same time, it gives me something to hold onto. Because if I can no longer be happy for myself, I can still be happy for you. The quiet, unbearable comfort of knowing that as long as you are happy, a fragment of me is too. And maybe that is the cruelest, most beautiful part of all. That even after losing you, even after losing the happiness I once had, I am not left with nothing. I am left with that loophole. The quiet, aching truth that as long as you are happy, a part of me still is too. Not whole. Not the way it used to be. Not enough to escape this loop. Not enough to call it healing. But enough to wake up again. Enough to keep going.
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The past does not fade, it waits, silent, like a shadow clinging to the edges of my skin, a ghost that never stops whispering. I open my eyes in the present, and there it is again, the same ache, the same weight, wearing a different face, but cutting me with the same sharp edges. It is not the same, I tell myself, but my heart cannot be convinced. This hurt feels heavier, as though today’s sorrow has reached backward with cruel fingers, digging into scars I thought had healed, peeling them open until the past and present bleed together. It becomes a two-headed monster, yesterday and today fused, one clawed hand clutching my memories, the other raking at my chest, leaving me gasping, unsure where one wound ends and the next begins. My sadness is no longer a passing storm, it is a tide that never recedes. It drags me into its undertow, pulling me farther and farther from the shore of myself. I sink into the silence, my lungs burning, my body heavy, my heart weighted with stones I never chose to carry. I cannot tell if this is punishment, or simply the cruelty of time, to circle me back again and again to the very place I broke. Every cycle cuts deeper, like the clock’s hand is a blade spinning over my skin, reopening what never had a chance to close. There are no words vast enough to contain this grief. It is an ocean without horizon, a cavern without floor. It echoes through me until even my bones ache with its sound. I fall into the silence of it, a silence too loud, a silence that devours every attempt to speak. And still, each morning, I open my eyes to the same repetition, a loop I never asked to live inside, a cruel reminder that sometimes the deepest pain is not in the past at all, but in the way the present reaches back and ties me to everything I could not escape.
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Oct 8, 2025
Oct 8, 2025 at 8:41 PM UTC
Groundhog Day
The past does not fade, it waits, silent, like a shadow clinging to the edges of my skin, a ghost that never stops whispering. I open my eyes in the present, and there it is again, the same ache, the same weight, wearing a different face, but cutting me with the same sharp edges. It is not the same, I tell myself, but my heart cannot be convinced. This hurt feels heavier, as though today’s sorrow has reached backward with cruel fingers, digging into scars I thought had healed, peeling them open until the past and present bleed together. It becomes a two-headed monster, yesterday and today fused, one clawed hand clutching my memories, the other raking at my chest, leaving me gasping, unsure where one wound ends and the next begins. My sadness is no longer a passing storm, it is a tide that never recedes. It drags me into its undertow, pulling me farther and farther from the shore of myself. I sink into the silence, my lungs burning, my body heavy, my heart weighted with stones I never chose to carry. I cannot tell if this is punishment, or simply the cruelty of time, to circle me back again and again to the very place I broke. Every cycle cuts deeper, like the clock’s hand is a blade spinning over my skin, reopening what never had a chance to close. There are no words vast enough to contain this grief. It is an ocean without horizon, a cavern without floor. It echoes through me until even my bones ache with its sound. I fall into the silence of it, a silence too loud, a silence that devours every attempt to speak. And still, each morning, I open my eyes to the same repetition, a loop I never asked to live inside, a cruel reminder that sometimes the deepest pain is not in the past at all, but in the way the present reaches back and ties me to everything I could not escape.
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This was meant to be a haibun. After the first sentence, I folded the list of rules into a sparrow.                   I go for a walk, pass by the place where people write haiku and roll juxtaposition into irony as they eat their meals with the wrong ends of their chopsticks. he lifts gari with his left hand— a slot machine jangles A patron’s nearly full dish of wasabi sits amongst sushi platters that, except for the left behind rice-explosions, have been emptied. Around the corner, a shaman stands near the clocktower where the grass has died from a winter’s salting. The shadow of a ginkgo leaf flutters on his face like the wings of Buson’s moth. I want to turn off all the lights so that it can see. The systems are broken. **** The systems are failing. Further up Beverly St., an autistic boy plays with Lego on a front porch. I try to remember his true name, and hope that he can help break down the foundations, raindance his mind around the blocks’ angles and lines to solve an equation with a variable that is the shaman understanding why the boy pretends to not see us. Turn off the lights so that we can see.
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Nov 12, 2021
Nov 12, 2021 at 11:19 PM UTC
Haibun 004: Break down
Every night, I lie in bed and think of her, her lost eyes My heart cries as I see her sitting alone Staring vacantly out the window at the bird feeder The bitter truth is The things she forgets are the banal moments Her days have become groundhog, so is it so bad to not realise that she is in that cycle? The things that matter she still remembers The time when she was 8 and had laughter with passing soldiers Playing pranks on those same soldiers with the cheeky grin that’s never left her When she nearly ended up in Canada to stay safe Sharing sweets with the best friend she loved and lost She remembers mum when she was just a foot tall She remembers me when I could only utter the odd word She remembers my brother when he had the cheekiest grin, and the brightest laugh She may even remember better than we all do Its funny how that works Laughter is the best medicine she tells me This is something I now believe wholeheartedly As every time I see her I see it in action She makes me laugh She helps me understand life She respects me She builds me up Strength, endless strength Smile, the smile it never leaves her Leaving her breaks me, But seeing her break, hurts me. Reality, she isn’t broken Just stuck on the rewind button She’s still here She’s still with me She’s one of the lucky ones I’m one of the lucky ones We’re one of the lucky ones People ask how is she doing? I simply answer she is in a battle against groundhog day, And get this she is winning.
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Apr 25, 2021
Apr 25, 2021 at 8:15 AM UTC
Defying Groundhog Day
Every night, I lie in bed and think of her, her lost eyes My heart cries as I see her sitting alone Staring vacantly out the window at the bird feeder The bitter truth is The things she forgets are the banal moments Her days have become groundhog, so is it so bad to not realise that she is in that cycle? The things that matter she still remembers The time when she was 8 and had laughter with passing soldiers Playing pranks on those same soldiers with the cheeky grin that’s never left her When she nearly ended up in Canada to stay safe Sharing sweets with the best friend she loved and lost She remembers mum when she was just a foot tall She remembers me when I could only utter the odd word She remembers my brother when he had the cheekiest grin, and the brightest laugh She may even remember better than we all do Its funny how that works Laughter is the best medicine she tells me This is something I now believe wholeheartedly As every time I see her I see it in action She makes me laugh She helps me understand life She respects me She builds me up Strength, endless strength Smile, the smile it never leaves her Leaving her breaks me, But seeing her break, hurts me. Reality, she isn’t broken Just stuck on the rewind button She’s still here She’s still with me She’s one of the lucky ones I’m one of the lucky ones We’re one of the lucky ones People ask how is she doing? I simply answer she is in a battle against groundhog day, And get this she is winning.
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Lawrence Hall [email protected] https://hellopoetry.com/lawrence-hall/ poeticdrivel.blogspot.com The Presentation of the Rodent “The Feast of Candlemas…is perhaps the most ancient festival of Our Lady.” -Missale Romanum The Catholic funeral home calendar Prints “GROUNDHOG DAY (USA)” in generous type “The Presentation of the Lord,” well, not so much And “                                 ” 1 not at all Perhaps one day we faithful will look out From our dark-tunneled burrows of lost time And gaze upon the morning shadows to ask If there will be 2,000 more years of civilization Because in the Temple Our Lady presents unto our Lord the Child But we present unto ourselves - a rat 1 The Purification of Our Lady
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Feb 1, 2021
Feb 1, 2021 at 10:57 PM UTC
The Presentation of the Rodent
yet i stand again alone and cold watching an onslaught of angry wet bullets pummel my peanut-shaped torso if every midnight a new ghost was born to loop again through my day all my naked peanut-shaped torsos would be standing here too all my red veiny feet burning a hole through the white ceramic floor and thousands of the same absent brown eyes watching – only a few seeing all my fingertips work in sync rubbing face cream into millions of layers of sticky skin as our gurgling stomachs tie themselves into knots and we record in our dejected minds like abused children shivering in the corner of our skulls the sickening feeling of being both perpetrator and victim
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Sep 5, 2020
Sep 5, 2020 at 1:39 AM UTC
my ghosts
the alarm clock in my childhood bedroom has always been fast by a minute or 2 every month or so i realign the last digit with Apple's universal truth and every month it slips out of sync again it must be off by such a small fraction of a second i tried to calculate it once 0.00001 some-odd something one brick so minimally out of place causing the gradual collapse of a skyscraper i havent found the energy lately to practice this ritual and today my old clock is fast by 3 minutes neon green bars flickering silently marching on announcing fates to the unwilling and making rash judgements there was nothing i planned to do with those 3 minutes and i knew it was justified in its conviction but i realigned the last digit and watched for 3 minutes the green flickering rhythmically against the black screen climbing minute by minute finalizing again my execution
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Aug 26, 2020
Aug 26, 2020 at 3:29 PM UTC
3 minutes fast
A lot has been written about monotony Here I’m only trying it from my vision It won’t differ much from yours But even monotony comes in different flavors Mine is bland. Unimaginably bland. So much, that I fear the day I spit it out, it will leave me bitter I make feeble attempts to break it A lot like a fifty year old couple argue & fight They are not trying to spice things up Just sorting the disagreements and inconveniences that crop up, further strengthening their bond Each one is a proven pain in the other's *** But it is familiar, comforting pain Losing track of the days that I lost The days they come and go so fast I’m preparing myself better for the days to come ‘Every new day is an opportunity lost. So you’ve got to seize every opportunity.' I was advised.. It was 00 hours when I woke up from my untimely slumber to start this new day on this new note Although I’m skeptical of the meaning of new day I don't think they meant it in the technical sense The day they were referring to probably begins when the sun shines so bright that it is hard to keep your eyes closed and pretend to be asleep In a semi awakened state, you clasp your genitals, then scratch them, stroke your stiffness, wipe the drooling mouth or partake in other preferred activities in any order you deem fit and thereby amass the requisite energy to seize the day by the ***** Me,? I’m not really a morning person It takes a couple of hours for nausea to subdue After I spat all the toothpaste residue So I take this to be the start of yet another day which has begun, and will roll, with reasonable certainty, just the same way as did yesterday Or the day before Or a day the week before But I wasn’t here since the beginning of time I grew from a microbe to a maniac So I know this is just a phase that will pass But I can’t seem to place the beginning or end of it Shedding hairs, bloating with worries and fat I came to the sudden realization that this will soon end Whether I like it or not Whether I force it or not It will come to an end Like every other thing that started Here I am, waiting for it to unfold Like the spectator I’ve always been, passive with fear and with justifiable cowardice
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Dec 6, 2017
Dec 6, 2017 at 12:24 AM UTC
Monotonicity
A lot has been written about monotony Here I’m only trying it from my vision It won’t differ much from yours But even monotony comes in different flavors Mine is bland. Unimaginably bland. So much, that I fear the day I spit it out, it will leave me bitter I make feeble attempts to break it A lot like a fifty year old couple argue & fight They are not trying to spice things up Just sorting the disagreements and inconveniences that crop up, further strengthening their bond Each one is a proven pain in the other's *** But it is familiar, comforting pain Losing track of the days that I lost The days they come and go so fast I’m preparing myself better for the days to come ‘Every new day is an opportunity lost. So you’ve got to seize every opportunity.' I was advised.. It was 00 hours when I woke up from my untimely slumber to start this new day on this new note Although I’m skeptical of the meaning of new day I don't think they meant it in the technical sense The day they were referring to probably begins when the sun shines so bright that it is hard to keep your eyes closed and pretend to be asleep In a semi awakened state, you clasp your genitals, then scratch them, stroke your stiffness, wipe the drooling mouth or partake in other preferred activities in any order you deem fit and thereby amass the requisite energy to seize the day by the ***** Me,? I’m not really a morning person It takes a couple of hours for nausea to subdue After I spat all the toothpaste residue So I take this to be the start of yet another day which has begun, and will roll, with reasonable certainty, just the same way as did yesterday Or the day before Or a day the week before But I wasn’t here since the beginning of time I grew from a microbe to a maniac So I know this is just a phase that will pass But I can’t seem to place the beginning or end of it Shedding hairs, bloating with worries and fat I came to the sudden realization that this will soon end Whether I like it or not Whether I force it or not It will come to an end Like every other thing that started Here I am, waiting for it to unfold Like the spectator I’ve always been, passive with fear and with justifiable cowardice
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In deep winter’s chill a brief nudge gets groundhogs, with barely a grudge, to predict the season, but I ask, with good reason, if they differ, who will be the judge?
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Feb 2, 2017
Feb 2, 2017 at 10:15 PM UTC
Groundhog Limerick
opening my chakra feeling a little less darker a couple of drinks is my marker but its always just the starter at the brink and then I'm past it it was fun while it lasted now I hand over to my master from the poodle to the mastiff screaming who wants war blocked from the liquor store my mind wants more but my liver isn't sure back to waking up at noon soaked in bile like some cartoon know that by the time I see the moon I'll be singing the same tune
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Sep 18, 2015
Sep 18, 2015 at 1:21 AM UTC
Meditating
Next Sunday When he leaves The tomb, And it's sunny, Before noon, Should his shadow Fall on a sinner, We've six more weeks Of a Canadian winter.
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Mar 29, 2015
Mar 29, 2015 at 2:33 PM UTC
Groundhog Day
depression set in like the priest to sin trying to hide it when it all begins the snow falls down barring you underground hell bent and heaven sent who the **** knows were my mind went no way to win put on a grin hide it again your souls caves in exploding imploding like the shore life eroding this should not be how time is spent
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 6:24 AM UTC
The Curse of Groundhog Day