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“leave ‘em laughing when you go”^ it appears that Ogden Poet and Joni Songster have ganged up on poor Pitch Black to remind that he who laughs best, is he who laugh hardest at himself, and their vanity fair the bathroom mirror chips in with a chiding chortle, spasming him so hard, mirror cracks! right about where the smiling mouth and laughing rolling tears intersect, under the nose, landing in an open braying mouth “Laughter is the corrective force which prevents us from becoming cranks” just a most excellent reminder that gods come and go, taste in deities is just another fashion item*
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Jul 7, 2020
Jul 7, 2020 at 8:19 AM UTC
leave ‘em laughing when you go” (especially yourself)
I.      the smell of sad odorless colorless like ***** similar familiar sidewinder effects, musty invasive, it has no specificity, no locale centrale, well closeted, saddling sadding, in place, plain sighted better to toy our lives, pervades persists, worse lingers, impervious to sprays and even everyone’s good literature (even Will S’s), good wishes good intentions and mood prayers to the nearest lay god on duty at the spiritual emergency room on weekends, still stink don’t think that this poem is for you; solely for the writer, your doppelgänger ****** your mirror’s inside hiding out place, I, who has your sadness smell into my skin cells creepily crept waft woof and warp wet weft-woven into the sad receptacles hidden in my head’s cubbies and the palms of my tree hands-covering face there are cures so wonderful and inexpensive but unavailable at the local Rite Aid, though they are the right aid recoverable, so closer than close, so close that the internist cannot prescribe them because he must inject himself first because the live bacteria in the antidote can **** all this odor lays down bamboo-strong roots; to eradicate you must dig down deep, six feet perhaps more, with heavy earth moving equipment, uproot at the source, follow sad always all-the-way down and the root great god gone, but the saddest truth stench odor yet present***
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Dec 1, 2018
Dec 1, 2018 at 10:54 AM UTC
I. the smell of sad
while the debate goes on and on, as to which country has the longest, continuous democratic parliament, have it on on good authority that the subject above, is it better to love your kids too much than not enough? was the first among all temporal discussions ever held, despite periodic tabling, the debate remains unresolved, the question unsettled even after 1000 years+ of argumentation when over time, Universal Adult Suffrage finally came to be, the debate became renewable, enflamed, divisive most contentiously, various coming down on each side of a point of view topically since mother, father and child, i.e. pretty much everyone, definitionally, claimed total expertise, and sparing the rod was deemed by most to be illegally, no plebiscite, amendment or ballot initiative was resolved resolutely, the beat goes on continuously as new children reach voting age, sagaciously repeating their view, personally my view? I’ve tried both and failed equally so I’ve little to contribute, so let it be stated in manner unequivocally, the sweet sensibility says too well, but helicopters crash and monied snowplows run over other both their own and others better deserving, leaving all of them buried in snow piles street side, while those who blame their faults on insufficient love, are later most demanding more attention than any, having becoming painfully hardy, by being treated hard about, hard on themselves and worse to others everyone knows the answer to this question for themselves but I’ll leave you with this, permitting a child to fail is a winning strategy, as long as there is no legal limit regarding the amount or frequency on lifetime hugging
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Mar 28, 2019
Mar 28, 2019 at 2:14 AM UTC
is it better to love your kids too much than not enough?
while the debate goes on and on, as to which country has the longest, continuous democratic parliament, have it on on good authority that the subject above, is it better to love your kids too much than not enough? was the first among all temporal discussions ever held, despite periodic tabling, the debate remains unresolved, the question unsettled even after 1000 years+ of argumentation when over time, Universal Adult Suffrage finally came to be, the debate became renewable, enflamed, divisive most contentiously, various coming down on each side of a point of view topically since mother, father and child, i.e. pretty much everyone, definitionally, claimed total expertise, and sparing the rod was deemed by most to be illegally, no plebiscite, amendment or ballot initiative was resolved resolutely, the beat goes on continuously as new children reach voting age, sagaciously repeating their view, personally my view? I’ve tried both and failed equally so I’ve little to contribute, so let it be stated in manner unequivocally, the sweet sensibility says too well, but helicopters crash and monied snowplows run over other both their own and others better deserving, leaving all of them buried in snow piles street side, while those who blame their faults on insufficient love, are later most demanding more attention than any, having becoming painfully hardy, by being treated hard about, hard on themselves and worse to others everyone knows the answer to this question for themselves but I’ll leave you with this, permitting a child to fail is a winning strategy, as long as there is no legal limit regarding the amount or frequency on lifetime hugging
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”good night, good travels, pitch black” depending on how one counts, cause size matters, do have I one small blessing though little do I get, more-less, in each twenty four measuring cup, when the sleep gas has come-for-inhaling, lidded heavy with greatful/tearful anticipation, it’s less than sixty seconds till dispatched to where all poems plead like unborn angels for good parentage the spoken good night ritual signaled and completed with a perfect half turn skating axel onto ones side, preceded by, a single solid smacking of an innocent but flaccid, equally tired pillow, then lost in pitch black galaxy travels with other sleep-drunk little princes instead of the wavering, singular word, a traditional goodnight, a parting and a haling simultaneous mumbling issuing, undebated and a wish shot to all within dream-shot, a title, “good travels” to places where ferment the aging words under the winemakers watchful caring eyes opening, names or titles, same difference, for the newborn babes
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Apr 29, 2018
Apr 29, 2018 at 11:31 AM UTC
good night, good travels, pitch black
this peculiar notion transmigrates into a startling potion, one that creates, not slakes human thirst, a consequential first position for those who are in possess of a direct line to gods who hide in the pitch black, perforce one must make discrete deferential inquiries avec une politesse indirecte just in case we are wrong (honest aside: as composition proceeds, ear buds fill me with Music of Transmigration, notably Op. 11, of S. Barber making contradicting souls passing through me tenable and malleable) naturellment, loud radio silence, was I naive to expect otherwise? perhaps god is not the subject of this poem but perhaps the author(!)  who's just  keeping his "hand" in the poem game, spoofing human memes, with a spot of fun even in New Z--l-and-other domiciles after all who has more nominalistic titles, is cursed and blessed, by almost everyone at least once a day, and in a thousand different names with an impishly cruel sense of what this human gig it created. is about tonight I am a composer, tomorrow’s decomposer, or just a funny named follower ah, the answer is in the data
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Apr 9, 2018
Apr 9, 2018 at 4:55 PM UTC
god is a follower says the data
are you generally happy? a semi-innocuous query now actualized as a two sided bladed poker, hot stabbing me smack dab in the chests hollow crown bullseye, continuously,  as in all life long, and eternal longing for a “yes” it fits inside a pubescent aged wound that refreshes with every breath; a life long struggle for an accurate definition, be a general of genuine happy, that alone would deliver, bringing on bright day satisfaction as a human, one operates on parallel continuums; slide slipping on well oiled poles that over the years, their lengths, increasing with add-on extender poles formed by twisty turny slips and falls of sundered hearts and sad loves, marriages nicknamed Titanic, children found and lost, complications responsibilities that are denied meeting the words     “The End” a life that many would envy, questioning what’s wrong with you dude, are you blinded to the riches yours, reality is shoulders permanently bent, a spine that’s held together by spit and solder and curved by wearying wearing longing for a straightness that is also called crooked unobtainable and a piece of a peace that comes and goes like a highway billboard that you pass too fast to be fully read the body is corroding and worser yet to come and that’s a hand you selected - luck of the self-selecting-drawing - the opioids of the mind offers are rejected the clarity of painful self exploration valued overall - the place where the poems come from, and go to die, a landscape of a scene repeatedly visualized but never been and never left, the crazy contradictions come in two flavors; vanilla smiles and chocolate weeping of tears that have etched pathways cheek-chiseled the city is a struggling strife for most, the next red line on the side of the measuring cup  and everyone has a cell, a credit card, and a measuring cup <•> here I stop can’t finish   someone missing alerts me to their real worlds troubles making my complaints super superficial but the silent running of the stilleto cuts shallow repeated hourly the cut color, pitch black
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May 26, 2018
May 26, 2018 at 2:05 PM UTC
are you generally happy?
are you generally happy? a semi-innocuous query now actualized as a two sided bladed poker, hot stabbing me smack dab in the chests hollow crown bullseye, continuously,  as in all life long, and eternal longing for a “yes” it fits inside a pubescent aged wound that refreshes with every breath; a life long struggle for an accurate definition, be a general of genuine happy, that alone would deliver, bringing on bright day satisfaction as a human, one operates on parallel continuums; slide slipping on well oiled poles that over the years, their lengths, increasing with add-on extender poles formed by twisty turny slips and falls of sundered hearts and sad loves, marriages nicknamed Titanic, children found and lost, complications responsibilities that are denied meeting the words     “The End” a life that many would envy, questioning what’s wrong with you dude, are you blinded to the riches yours, reality is shoulders permanently bent, a spine that’s held together by spit and solder and curved by wearying wearing longing for a straightness that is also called crooked unobtainable and a piece of a peace that comes and goes like a highway billboard that you pass too fast to be fully read the body is corroding and worser yet to come and that’s a hand you selected - luck of the self-selecting-drawing - the opioids of the mind offers are rejected the clarity of painful self exploration valued overall - the place where the poems come from, and go to die, a landscape of a scene repeatedly visualized but never been and never left, the crazy contradictions come in two flavors; vanilla smiles and chocolate weeping of tears that have etched pathways cheek-chiseled the city is a struggling strife for most, the next red line on the side of the measuring cup  and everyone has a cell, a credit card, and a measuring cup <•> here I stop can’t finish   someone missing alerts me to their real worlds troubles making my complaints super superficial but the silent running of the stilleto cuts shallow repeated hourly the cut color, pitch black
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