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#firstimpressions
She says, "Open up your eyes to me," while we were on a blind date. Some opinions come a bit late; early remarks are great — And there’s a fearful much of men, of that phrase, "oh, I'm late." But I fear when she's running late for our date, And secretly isn't coming anyway. So my eyes remain shut; as from first interactions, It looks for us, this thing isn’t going anywhere!
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Apr 4, 2025
Apr 4, 2025 at 4:43 AM UTC
First date
I lay on my back, a forced, tight smile, Counting moments, each one a slow, dread mile, My legs in stirrups, exposed to their gaze, Their questions probe, unmasking my ways. Comparing me to perfection, their prized fair, My soul they seek, a treasure to share, Each judgmental glance, a painful, cold stare, Exposed and judged, yet still, their feeling's rare, A final goodbye, leaving me in the air.
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Nov 30, 2024
Nov 30, 2024 at 3:03 PM UTC
Meeting Her Parents, Like a GYN Exam
On the surface, love and hate May seem black and white. But that's not quite right. They're feelings. And feelings can change. They're also like humans. On the surface, people may seem Scary or really nice. But give them time, And they may make you think twice. First impressions are important. But take them with a grain of salt. And if you get fooled, Just know it's not your fault.
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Mar 6, 2021
Mar 6, 2021 at 7:46 PM UTC
On the surface
Those eyes are canyons Two captivating chasms I've lost myself in
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Jun 15, 2020
Jun 15, 2020 at 3:29 AM UTC
First dates
A girl stood before me at the supermarket a few random items littered her basket pink socks poked out from her sneakers they were covered with little creatures an inch of flesh stood between those ankle high socks and her jeans. Nice socks I exclaimed! she turned around inflamed looked at me and said I have a boyfriend her face now red. Are they his I asked? her face broke into a laugh *sorry I got so defensive guys make me apprehensive I don't really have a boyfriend sometimes I just like to pretend.* *I know how you feel I replied in embarrassment I've often lied and whenever I'm struck by beauty of someone new I meet I can't look directly at them I look towards their feet.*
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Oct 27, 2016
Oct 27, 2016 at 8:31 PM UTC
Nice Socks
I stared out the window And saw nothing but a light, Though it tried to show me things that were mere fancy's flight: The imaginary asphalt covering the nonexistent street; The set of snow-lined sidewalks where passersby might meet; The steely spine of a stop-sign; The spindly barren trees; All these visions I thought I saw were light-driven fantasies
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Mar 21, 2017
Mar 21, 2017 at 11:51 PM UTC
I Saw the Light
Look at my face not my knees, not my rolls on my stomach, not my cellulite covered thighs, Look at my face... because its the only way you'll know me.
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May 28, 2016
May 28, 2016 at 11:59 PM UTC
First Impressions
the way you looked. at me soft brown eyes the doors to your soul beckoning me to walk in i didn't break. it the seemingly soft gaze and as i began to look around me i realized i remember it wasn't for me it was for her and first impressions are the lasting ones -he was trying to flirt with my best friend
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Feb 22, 2016
Feb 22, 2016 at 11:17 AM UTC
first impressions
Grace as a necessity Beauty that rivals nature Quaint modesty of a lady Perfect appeal to the masses How can I ever live up to that? A mere imperfect girl With less grace and poise Appearance to ordinary for words With less modesty than a lady So, I will never be wanted Always forgotten Left behind in the background Waiting to be seen To be wanted by anyone And yet, it's a dream far off For love knows first impressions Its shallowness rendering us unavailable Wanted by the perverse and lonely Lusted for there is no one else A vision of love that's lost Lost to the guys who broke our hearts To those who use us like toys Whose love changes by the pound Whose so called "love" made us cold.
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May 7, 2013
May 7, 2013 at 7:23 AM UTC
Shallow Love