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Hey stupid. I'm smiling while I write this. Kinda wanting to type this. So, here goes nothing? My forever. That's a long time huh? I know.. It's strong, huh? Longer then infinity. Your eyes. Most people might say "They're just a regular color." Most people might say, "It's nothing special" I say, "but if those yes were to tell a thousand words... 3 of them would be 'I love You'." I say, "If i could count every ripple in your iris, I would" Your heart. It's like our favorite color, vibrant Our favorite song, anything. Our favorite word, darling Our favorite thing, your love Your soul. Every time you speak, I laugh or smile Every time you look at me, I loudly love Kindness isn't the only thing that draws me to you. The way you hold on to my heart makes me think I'm saved. You. Sun Moon Sky City Northern lights Do you know what they have in common? You. Each and every place that's as beautiful as my eyes can witness, makes me think of you. Space. The stars. The manipulation of galaxies. How they twist and turn mix and light up. It's like us. I could only imagine how you make my little star heart feel. The journey. The lessons. The connection? It all makes me want to feel every part of you.
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Sep 1, 2025
Sep 1, 2025 at 6:27 AM UTC
Forever my Galaxy.
Can you guess my second line... ……………………………………….. Even though you worded it with out seeing it, you missed the fundamentals that you were not meant to change what wasn't there. Creativity of a singular sentence, we may want to change others verbal wording. But this was there moment. and if you'd wanted to spell it out differently. I wouldn't have had to write this explanation out.
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May 11, 2019
May 11, 2019 at 5:28 PM UTC
Writing An Explination
It's using the post / instead of sending an email / or loving to sleep / instead of loving a female Don't mistake it for lazy / I want to be active / it's harder in life than / it seems to be in practice It takes your energy / and it uses it as shots / to shoot your motivation / believe me it's hard It's waking up early / to go back to sleep / so you can work up the nerve / to get up onto your feet Imagine you slept for / an hour every day of / the week all you'd want / to be doing is sleep You'd be emotionally / unstable and very / unsociable / with stress feeling uncontrolable You're number one struggle/ would be the simplest of tasks/ what you do in a day / would be cut right in half You want to be able  / to do that witch you should / at work or at school / or where ever you stood But all you could think about / would be ending the pain / wishing someone understood / what flowed through your veins You can't control your lack of love / or low energy / all you want is nothing to do / for all of today When just waking up is giving / your very best n' / nobody understands / that's clinical depression
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Nov 1, 2016
Nov 1, 2016 at 9:41 PM UTC
What it's like