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#exclamation
I am alive and I am terrified. Why does the future have to be this question mark, this puddle of murkiness wagging its finger to beg you to come closer, closer closer. Darkness lurches above me in halos circling brightly, making no sense I can see you, Future I can see everything I want to see but the waters won’t clear, the question mark won’t turn into an exclamation point, and you make me travel down the path farther farther farther into the unknown.
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Nov 3, 2016
Nov 3, 2016 at 7:41 PM UTC
An Existential Crisis
. **if exclamation marks  put emphasis on   the word or phrase before what about inside it ?**
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May 24, 2016
May 24, 2016 at 1:07 PM UTC
Exclamation
pain is too many exclamation points - some kind of overcompensation for the sober realization that we need to be happy, but aren't pain is burnt toast, but not in the good way; like the way that it sits on your tongue Makes your mouth taste like metal, makes your words feel like crumbs waiting to be swept away today, I laughed too much, so by 3 o' clock I had no smiles left in me They have gone like I have gone to sleep waiting for some alarm to sing to ring with something like hope something to cut the rope, the knots my stomach ties when I don't notice Pain is knowing that you know this will hurt and knowing is half the battle. But knowing is...half the battle The rest of the war is dealing with more exclamation points than you wanted more mornings without alarms more meals of only crumbs.
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Nov 4, 2015
Nov 4, 2015 at 11:54 AM UTC
too many (!!)
Sleep depravation leads to many fun things, Like commas, And sea dragons, And low self esteem, Being happy leads to several exciting things! Like exclamation marks! And dolphins! And a sexually transmitted disease! Anger leads to lots of frustrating things. Like periods. And humans. And bullets handed out for free. So with all these great feelings, creating such magic! How in the world could life be so tragic.
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May 17, 2014
May 17, 2014 at 1:29 AM UTC
,!.