#eludes - Hello Poetry

eludes time slips away as if a snake were like a piano like stars outside the window like lonely oak time slips away from me and what is time and what is a day what does it mean to slip away what does it mean a snake and piano what does such a star mean and what is true solitude eludes time eludes disappears disappears like a spider's thread as its core as its web As his house is abandoned and new built in february onward 28.07.18

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Jul 28, 2018

Jul 28, 2018 at 3:32 PM UTC

maximkeyfman

Eludes Time Slips Away.

eludes time slips away as if a snake were like a piano like stars outside the window like lonely oak time slips away from me and what is time and what is a day what does it mean to slip away what does it mean a snake and piano what does such a star mean and what is true solitude eludes time eludes disappears disappears like a spider's thread as its core as its web As his house is abandoned and new built in february onward 28.07.18

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Time hides from me anymore-- I tried to invite it to stay I've double locked the door so it won't get away-- but still, it eludes me and I keep wishing it would just come and set me free... I'm beginning to feel that time has no time for the likes of me.

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Aug 20, 2017

Aug 20, 2017 at 11:28 PM UTC

ami-shae

Elusive Time

Time hides from me anymore-- I tried to invite it to stay I've double locked the door so it won't get away-- but still, it eludes me and I keep wishing it would just come and set me free... I'm beginning to feel that time has no time for the likes of me.

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same sketch cloned day sundown station schema office workers signed off shuffle numb curbed chaos train clatter shifting gears clashing sound noise assaults savaged senses lulls into stupor's rhythm cardboard sentinels stare blind frames fixed on blanched orbits disjointed huddle inciting life's vapid echo

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May 11, 2018

May 11, 2018 at 2:32 PM UTC

eleanor-prince

what's it all about... ?

same sketch cloned day sundown station schema office workers signed off shuffle numb curbed chaos train clatter shifting gears clashing sound noise assaults savaged senses lulls into stupor's rhythm cardboard sentinels stare blind frames fixed on blanched orbits disjointed huddle inciting life's vapid echo

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I breath but it is not life, Its just an echo of before I do not breath, I do not walk, I do not see, Like the way others do surrounding me I am transparent I am gone, They may miss me, But I am here, but gone, Am I figment of an imagination, "Gone to far" Could this be a dream, I wish To wake this is gone to far, I wish to weep, to cry a tear But my hands are translucent Fading in & out I can see, I can hear, But touch the feeling I wish so dear Eludes me, "What have I become" Am I really here?? "Am I who I was" Past tense, I speak as if past, Then I look upon the ground A shadow of a man now laying Still on the ground "He looks familiar" But cold upon his features, Then I look closer "Like a mirror I see a reflection" Then I see it is me, Still, Lifeless, Cold, For it is me that is motionless Then light engulfs me, I am free, I am home.

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Oct 25, 2014

Oct 25, 2014 at 5:49 PM UTC

poetic-t

I Look Upon Myself

I breath but it is not life, Its just an echo of before I do not breath, I do not walk, I do not see, Like the way others do surrounding me I am transparent I am gone, They may miss me, But I am here, but gone, Am I figment of an imagination, "Gone to far" Could this be a dream, I wish To wake this is gone to far, I wish to weep, to cry a tear But my hands are translucent Fading in & out I can see, I can hear, But touch the feeling I wish so dear Eludes me, "What have I become" Am I really here?? "Am I who I was" Past tense, I speak as if past, Then I look upon the ground A shadow of a man now laying Still on the ground "He looks familiar" But cold upon his features, Then I look closer "Like a mirror I see a reflection" Then I see it is me, Still, Lifeless, Cold, For it is me that is motionless Then light engulfs me, I am free, I am home.

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