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#eloquence
8:30am many several poems w~righted into extant existence, after rising with opened eyes, many hours ours prior, the outside, a wall of fog go to wake my beloved with cofee and treats she rises and embraces me with tender firmness, eyes clos-ed, she- window facing 17th floor the towers of manhattan have been seized from existence and I say look outside the hair of the world turned wise~white overnight!* she opens here eyes and says with quiet surprise; Oh yeah…wow and I smile for who can advise, whose eloquence is the greater? end. 8:46am nyc
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Apr 5
Apr 5, 2026 at 8:48 AM UTC
white world
Really every lie does need a decent wardrobe -- of nice eloquence.
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May 20, 2025
May 20, 2025 at 2:17 AM UTC
[ Really every lie ]
No words shall please my soul, if not from deep within. In life we laugh and weep, as moods with time do spin. Even a poet does need a flare, to devise his ringy rhymes. To sculpt a verse from solid words, is a masters work, sublime. When fine words mingle and mix, with sweet lovely emotions, a lady’s heart will surely yield, without showing a notion. Delightful words do cast a spell, on people where they stand. Being a charmer may pay your rent, to the lady of the land. No torrent is strong or tough, to sweep a poets will. And no drought is harsh enough, to dry a poets well. Eloquent words, soft and smooth, too far from being absurd. When spoken loud, they steal the show, on every stage and stand.
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Aug 22, 2024
Aug 22, 2024 at 6:29 AM UTC
Poets & Words
I praise the wise and respect the wisdom of every old and young, for when they speak they pave the way to every poem or song. There is a charm in all their words and phrases short or long. In what they say you should believe until you prove them wrong. When wisdom speaks I always listen to thoughts of brilliant minds, just like a gem or precious stone or gold in haunted mines. I feel the words and see them spark in corners everywhere, sometimes I even smell their scent floating in the air. A set of words in form of art could take your breath away, for classy words will make you feel in heaven you want to stay. I wish I was a famous scholar or a poet who plays a part, I like to think I have a say in themes that steal the heart. Even the blind wisdom they see gleaming in the dark, but ignorant words from a stupid fool could tear your life apart.
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Aug 21, 2024
Aug 21, 2024 at 7:33 AM UTC
I feel words
I am robbed of eloquence Measly words that doesn't seem sincere enough To prove my affections My thoughts and emotions Hidden behind closed windows Neither light nor spark can shed some clarity Of grief and pain The unbidden hurt I have inflicted on me A thirst for sympathy and wordless understanding
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Oct 4, 2020
Oct 4, 2020 at 10:16 AM UTC
Wordless understanding
Caveat by Michael R. Burch If only we were not so eloquent, we might sing, and only sing, not to impress, but only to enjoy, to be enjoyed. We might inundate the earth with thankfulness for light, although it dies, and make a song of night descending on the earth like bliss, with other lights beyond—not to be known— but only to be welcomed and enjoyed, before all worlds and stars are overthrown ... as a lover’s hands embrace a sleeping face and find it beautiful for emptiness of all but joy. There is no thought to love but love itself. How senseless to redress, in darkness, such becoming nakedness . . . Originally published by Clementine Unbound Keywords/Tags: caveat, eloquent, eloquence, sing, enjoy, enjoyment, inundate, earth, thankfulness, praise, song, light, welcomed, enjoyed, enjoyment, bliss, joy, love Caveat Spender by Michael R. Burch It’s better not to speculate "continually" on who is great. Though relentless awe’s a Célèbre Cause, please reserve some time for the contemplation of the perils of EXAGGERATION. Stephen Spender in his best-known poem wrote: "I think continually of those who were truly great." This near-limerick suggests that Spender may have exaggerated the time he devoted to hero worship. Keywords/Tags: caveat, spender, truly, great, think, continually, hero, worship, exaggeration, contemplation, awe, fawn, fawning
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Apr 2, 2020
Apr 2, 2020 at 5:08 AM UTC
Caveat
Night is the poet, Of eloquent silences, In darkness and light!
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Jan 14, 2019
Jan 14, 2019 at 8:09 AM UTC
Night, the inimitable poet
~~~ for our children and their children ~~~ the reason we say so oft, in whispers emboldened, I love you to our children is not the utility of its summarizing brevity no, no. it is because the eloquence of simplicity supersedes any other poem we could ever write... ~~~ July 26 2015
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Jul 26, 2015
Jul 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM UTC
The Eloquence of Simplicity
Eloquence doe(s) not always conve(y) what (M)ostly (pa)rts my mouth remember (t)he (h)eart is reall(y) the most articulate of all
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Aug 9, 2018
Aug 9, 2018 at 2:37 AM UTC
Eli
I am sorry that I am unable to speak
 with the eloquence that can paint pictures and move mountains 
 but instead my words trip over one another or get lost once they leave my lips 
 so I’ve chosen to stay silent 
 because it is easier to bear than fumbled words and mumbled apologies.
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Jun 20, 2018
Jun 20, 2018 at 5:19 PM UTC
Eloquence
such eloquent eyes, her luminous spirit's dance; love, to him gifts two wings!
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Feb 21, 2018
Feb 21, 2018 at 10:52 AM UTC
in the rarefied air of love
Dances in the shower, Oh so late at night. Blasting the music loud, swimming in the soft light mouthing the words eloquence thrown out the door no need to wear a mask. When you just don't care anymore.
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Feb 16, 2018
Feb 16, 2018 at 6:10 PM UTC
The Shower
It's stories above where the butterflies rustled, Whirring between the lights in aeolian bustle. I'm smiling spritely at a neon halo, While my organs writhe in jacqueminot El Niño. Wading the nightscape  with a glitched simper, I could not change nor attempt to tinker, Just breaching the moments passing to linger. Fingers, then palms, then lips, then black, Then for a few seconds the world collapsed. A breath, a sip, some wit, I'm back. Shed the murky vision of captive cataracts. And now, The sylph saunters in epitomized elegance, And I've buckled on the inside to the resonant reverence. I follow the fragrance in her wake as paralyzed sedatives, And anything I might say could only lack eloquence. Then magnanimous mantras attract exact, It seems way down the rabbit hole I've finally met my match. There's a mesh of flesh, a smooth caress, Then I wake and realize these were not visions yonder death. Particles of my brain erupt, I can't explain away the unfading elation of touch. Every pose palatial down to the pixels, I'd gaze deep in the sheen of her mind gleaming as crystals. Her eyes open like daybreak in flashes, Sunstreaks glint over the horizon of her lashes. There's morning songbirds behind the taste of coffee, I think she's figured I'm just a well decorated softy. Unveiling my most human of contentions stripped to the eclipse of logic, My former self laughs in tones pitched sardonic. Euphorically strumming at gossamer heartstrings, Etched in the fabric as sakura carvings.
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Oct 31, 2017
Oct 31, 2017 at 8:48 PM UTC
Beautiful Creature
It's stories above where the butterflies rustled, Whirring between the lights in aeolian bustle. I'm smiling spritely at a neon halo, While my organs writhe in jacqueminot El Niño. Wading the nightscape  with a glitched simper, I could not change nor attempt to tinker, Just breaching the moments passing to linger. Fingers, then palms, then lips, then black, Then for a few seconds the world collapsed. A breath, a sip, some wit, I'm back. Shed the murky vision of captive cataracts. And now, The sylph saunters in epitomized elegance, And I've buckled on the inside to the resonant reverence. I follow the fragrance in her wake as paralyzed sedatives, And anything I might say could only lack eloquence. Then magnanimous mantras attract exact, It seems way down the rabbit hole I've finally met my match. There's a mesh of flesh, a smooth caress, Then I wake and realize these were not visions yonder death. Particles of my brain erupt, I can't explain away the unfading elation of touch. Every pose palatial down to the pixels, I'd gaze deep in the sheen of her mind gleaming as crystals. Her eyes open like daybreak in flashes, Sunstreaks glint over the horizon of her lashes. There's morning songbirds behind the taste of coffee, I think she's figured I'm just a well decorated softy. Unveiling my most human of contentions stripped to the eclipse of logic, My former self laughs in tones pitched sardonic. Euphorically strumming at gossamer heartstrings, Etched in the fabric as sakura carvings.
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Like so many of us, surrounded by binaries and cold concrete, he finds it hard to say what he feels, and I found it hard to understand, for a while, that he loved me just as I did him, when he never vocalised his feelings completely, and I did. It took me some time to realise he shows them instead, and maybe that is all the more eloquent than anything I could ever materialise on a piece of paper filled with smeared ink. His love manifests itself in lingering gazes and the lightest touch, in private smiles and the softening of his eyes when I laugh. Like a child resorts to pointing at things they cannot name, he ends up holding close what he cannot verbalise he needs. - “You make me happy,” I tell him. He looks vulnerable and smiles. c.s.
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Apr 7, 2017
Apr 7, 2017 at 9:17 AM UTC
“You make me happy,” I tell him. He looks vulnerable and smiles.
I can write wonderful words of eloquence Describing in detailed elegance  the pictures in my mind. But when it comes to speaking aloud, Especially in front of the smallest crowd There are no words to find. That's why I pick up my pen to write, To let all of my dreams take flight  And go explore the worlds. Then perhaps while they explore  They'll listen to my heart as it implores, "Find me that perfect girl." Off soar my dreams with the stroke of the pen To search for the girl that my heart seeks within To find only a broken blue heart. So they search for and gather some of the pieces, For the ones they can't find, their sorrow increases Their eloquence falling apart. With what small courage I had, my heart tries to speak But it fumbles and falls, and feels like a freak Our weakness fully revealed Yet touching my heart, she helps it to stand My own broken pieces enclosed in her hand And nothing left to conceal. The rest, you could say, will be history But 'til then it will stay a mystery I can't wait to be told For now my dreams are straining more, While I just sit here waiting for My story to unfold. 1/30/16 12:01am
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Jan 30, 2016
Jan 30, 2016 at 12:02 AM UTC
Dreams of Eloquence
They say there are two sides to every story, Try putting yourself in my hat! It's irrelevant, You wouldn't know how it feels, No clue. I put away my eloquence, But because I'll be simple! You wouldn't understand it either, It's incomprehensible.
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Nov 18, 2015
Nov 18, 2015 at 4:06 AM UTC
Its Incomprehensible
Eloquence is comprehensive beauty. Brevity shows a command and respect of time. Wisdom breeds their concurrent existence
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Jul 8, 2015
Jul 8, 2015 at 4:27 PM UTC
Eloquent Brevity
wizards of words relish silence. blazing stars cry out light. butterfly thinks immortality can wait. Lord of silence oozes confidence. sweet nothings are most eloquent.
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Mar 11, 2015
Mar 11, 2015 at 9:36 PM UTC
Five
With an azure drinking cup studded with lapis, wait for her In the evening at the spring, among perfumed roses, wait for her With the patience of a horse trained for mountains, wait for her With the distinctive, aesthetic taste of a prince, wait for her With seven pillows stuffed with light clouds, wait for her With strands of womanly incense wafting, wait for her With the manly scent of sandalwood on horseback, wait for her Wait for her and do not rush. If she arrives late, wait for her. If she arrives early, wait for her. Do not frighten the birds in her braided hair. Wait for her to sit in a garden at the peak of its flowering. Wait for her so that she may breathe this air, so strange to her heart. Wait for her to lift her garment from her calf, cloud by cloud. And wait for her. Take her to the balcony to watch the moon drowning in milk. Wait for her and offer her water before wine. Do not glance at the twin partridges sleeping on her chest. Wait and gently touch her hand as she sets a cup on marble. As if you are carrying the dew for her, wait. Speak to her as a flute would to a frightened violin string, as if you knew what tomorrow would bring. Wait, and polish the night for her ring by ring. Wait for her until Night speaks to you thus: There is no one alive but the two of you. So take her gently to the death you so desire, and wait.
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Feb 4, 2015
Feb 4, 2015 at 4:32 PM UTC
Wait For Her (A Lesson From The Karma Sutra)
You asked if I loved you so here is my answer: You see I didn't buy you, but here you are. Some might say I won you at a game station at a county fair. Maybe I did, or maybe I won you in a birthday party ticket raffle. Either way I'm stuck here trying to keep this gold fish alive kind of like how I try to love things, but we both know it will die soon anyway.
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Dec 26, 2014
Dec 26, 2014 at 3:07 AM UTC
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the     way        he tilted    his    head was mesmerizing the      fact      that he  actually cared was      surprising the    manner    of his        eloquence was     tantalizing
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Nov 7, 2014
Nov 7, 2014 at 2:52 AM UTC
mesmerise