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(a tribute to richard walters) under the soft stage light richard walters performed a song called awards night he’d written about elliott smith. my heart ached quietly for the ghost his voice carried. sofar fairy – as i call her in my head – said i looked like i was in the clouds, living in the memory of someone else. his energy followed me into the next morning at work. half-stunned, half-joking, they’d insinuate my joy must have come from someone’s warm embrace. how could i explain to them, that music and words can whisper through your ribs, settle in your chest, and lift you higher than any touch permits? richard’s voice just lingered like the aftertaste of honey, like rain caught in leaves. i carried him home in my pulse, where elliott still lives, softly whispering between the notes of his guitar strings.
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Aug 3, 2025
Aug 3, 2025 at 7:42 AM UTC
the softest ovation.
soft and whispering your words like a stab in the chest make me feel alone
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Feb 14, 2018
Feb 14, 2018 at 10:30 AM UTC
Elliott
Lying on my back and needing a few hours to myself, Elliott Smith was singing that familiar line in my ear as he did so often when I reached this same threshold of sadness: "Dreadful sorry, Clementine" , And you seemed to know just how dreadful all of it was to me, Slipping out of my comfort, which is shaky at best in the eyes of the public, But the tempo did change, Elliott... And I confess that I don't think I'm killing her, She won't let me give her life, She thinks she's glowing right now... Does it mean she can't comprehend? Someone should be ashamed, Elliott. I'd love to sing into her some life she's yet to discover, Replace her doubt for continued existence with nothing more but yearning for foreign lands, hand in hand with me, Yet I digress and can only sigh.
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Jul 19, 2016
Jul 19, 2016 at 11:52 PM UTC
Elliott Smith Therapy Session.
Drink up baby, stay up all night with the things you could do you won't, but you might the potential you'll be, that you'll never see the promises you'll only make Drink up with me now and forget all about the pressures of days do what I say and I'll make you okay, drive them away the image is stuck in your head The people you've been before that you don't want around anymore that push, and shove and won't bend to your will I'll keep them still Drink up baby look at the stars I'll kiss you again between the bars where I'm seeing you there with your hands in the air waiting to finally be caught Drink up one more time and I'll make you mine keep you apart deep in my heart separate from the rest but I like you the best keep the things you forgot The people you've been before that you don't want around anymore that push, and shove and won't bend to your will I'll keep them still
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Aug 27, 2015
Aug 27, 2015 at 8:12 AM UTC
Between the bars (A song by Elliott Smith)