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Aug 2, 2025
Aug 2, 2025 at 1:47 AM UTC
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Come Down by Michael R. Burch for Harold Bloom and the Ivory Towerists Come down, O, come down from your high mountain tower. How coldly the wind blows, how late this chill hour ... and I cannot wait for a meteor shower to show you the time must be now, or not ever. Come down, O, come down from the high mountain heather blown to the lees as fierce northern gales sever. Come down, or your heart will grow cold as the weather when winter devours and spring returns never. NOTE: I dedicated this poem to Harold Bloom after reading his introduction to the Best American Poetry anthology he edited. Bloom seemed intent on claiming poetry as the province of the uber-reader (i.e., himself), but I remember reading poems by Blake, Burns, cummings, Dickinson, Frost, Housman, Eliot, Pound, Shakespeare, Whitman, Yeats, et al, and grokking them as a boy, without any “advanced” instruction from anyone. Keywords/Tags: Harold Bloom, literary, critic, criticism, elitist, elitism, ivory, tower, heights, mountain, winter, cold, frigid Rant: The Elite by Michael R. Burch When I heard Harold Bloom unsurprisingly say: Poetry is necessarily difficult. It is our elitist art ... I felt a small suspicious thrill. After all, sweetheart, isn’t this who we are? Aren’t we obviously better, and certainly fairer and taller, than they are? Though once I found Ezra Pound perhaps a smidgen too profound, perhaps a bit over-fond of Benito and the advantages of fascism to be taken ad finem, like high tea with a pure white spot of intellectualism and an artificial sweetener, calorie-free. I know! I know! Politics has nothing to do with art And it tempts us so to be elite, to stand apart ... but somehow the word just doesn’t ring true, echoing effetely away—the distance from me to you. Of course, politics has nothing to do with art, but sometimes art has everything to do with becoming elite, with climbing the cultural ladder, with being able to meet someone more Exalted than you, who can demonstrate how to **** so that everyone below claims one’s odor is sweet. You had to be there! We were falling apart with gratitude! We saw him! We wept at his feet! Though someone will always be far, far above you, clouding your air, gazing down at you with a look of wondering despair.
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Mar 30, 2020
Mar 30, 2020 at 12:44 AM UTC
Come Down
Come Down by Michael R. Burch for Harold Bloom and the Ivory Towerists Come down, O, come down from your high mountain tower. How coldly the wind blows, how late this chill hour ... and I cannot wait for a meteor shower to show you the time must be now, or not ever. Come down, O, come down from the high mountain heather blown to the lees as fierce northern gales sever. Come down, or your heart will grow cold as the weather when winter devours and spring returns never. NOTE: I dedicated this poem to Harold Bloom after reading his introduction to the Best American Poetry anthology he edited. Bloom seemed intent on claiming poetry as the province of the uber-reader (i.e., himself), but I remember reading poems by Blake, Burns, cummings, Dickinson, Frost, Housman, Eliot, Pound, Shakespeare, Whitman, Yeats, et al, and grokking them as a boy, without any “advanced” instruction from anyone. Keywords/Tags: Harold Bloom, literary, critic, criticism, elitist, elitism, ivory, tower, heights, mountain, winter, cold, frigid Rant: The Elite by Michael R. Burch When I heard Harold Bloom unsurprisingly say: Poetry is necessarily difficult. It is our elitist art ... I felt a small suspicious thrill. After all, sweetheart, isn’t this who we are? Aren’t we obviously better, and certainly fairer and taller, than they are? Though once I found Ezra Pound perhaps a smidgen too profound, perhaps a bit over-fond of Benito and the advantages of fascism to be taken ad finem, like high tea with a pure white spot of intellectualism and an artificial sweetener, calorie-free. I know! I know! Politics has nothing to do with art And it tempts us so to be elite, to stand apart ... but somehow the word just doesn’t ring true, echoing effetely away—the distance from me to you. Of course, politics has nothing to do with art, but sometimes art has everything to do with becoming elite, with climbing the cultural ladder, with being able to meet someone more Exalted than you, who can demonstrate how to **** so that everyone below claims one’s odor is sweet. You had to be there! We were falling apart with gratitude! We saw him! We wept at his feet! Though someone will always be far, far above you, clouding your air, gazing down at you with a look of wondering despair.
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Many are hamster-wheel humans So punch-drunk from assuming They know the way things work. The wealthy urged them to elect jerks To run this country into the ground And turn it into the worst place around. It’s a sad tale, a ***** of a story Where those with guts, don’t get glory. It’s a horror story, like in scary flicks Where when men in suits get their kicks Imprisoning brown people and kids And laughing about the bad they did. Afterward, they say others are to blame But make no attempt to hide their game. They put thousands in jail and charge them And sing out loud their lying anthems. They say fake news is the real McCoy But, the real news they say is a ploy Honest people want to stop the plunder That, up ’til now, they kept hidden under. But now it’s in the open meant to appease Ignorant white people that are hard to please. They want whites in power, think that’s nifty, No wonder they elect only those who are shifty. Too many quit learning in school, after ABC, And they have no use for the land of the free. They liked how it was in eighteen hundreds With slaves, inhumanity to those they plundered. They got up in arms when a black man won And the class war was once again begun. The very rich told lies to change the rules People began to act openly like rapacious fools. This is the country of which we were once proud. It’s right now being destroyed by the elite crowd.
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Oct 1, 2018
Oct 1, 2018 at 12:38 AM UTC
HAMSTER-WHEEL HUMANS
Forget pre-Madonnas We want to get away from all the self-proposed Shakespeares that think their opinions matter more here Humanity should rid itself from elitism and stop being insincere It would put our contributions in the clear.
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Sep 1, 2018
Sep 1, 2018 at 10:30 PM UTC
Insincere
In vacant masks We hide the veins Where the sickly blood Flows within us Like a raging, hidden Flame divided Beneath a blanket Of expectations Of lacerations Of blocked Shocked Methods of filth Where we can act As though we are better When someone leaves Or mistreats Or walks away Or makes them pay We sit with our hands Together like some morbid Altar boy drunk on Some misconceived Notion that we are Better.
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Aug 20, 2018
Aug 20, 2018 at 11:30 PM UTC
Greater or Equal To
Hut, two, three, four What do you think you are fighting for? Four, five, six, seven Invasion is the path to heaven. Seven, eight, nine, ten If it doesn’t work, do it again. Six, seven, eight, nine If innocents die too, never mind. We need to clean things Wipe lessers out of the place. They’re a total threat and Weaken our beloved race. We don’t have time For anyone sick or poor We must go somewhere And fight unreasonable war. Helping the weak and sick Costs too much money to allow. Besides, there are among us Suffering rich people right now. This land owes it all to the rich So, we must do all we can To support them with each pitch. So, hut, two, three, four, Now you know what we’re fighting for. Three, four, five, six Now, none of your liberal tricks. Five, six, seven, eight. Don’t question your betters, that’d be great. Hut, two, three, four We are who you are fighting for!
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Jul 12, 2018
Jul 12, 2018 at 5:41 PM UTC
HUT, TWO, THREE, FOUR
Southerners said “You’re white!” They’re black, and that’s not all right, But you’re okay because you’re white.” But that’s not right because I’m not white. I’m sort of a pasty pinkish beige So, why is it the rage to say white? And black? That is usually the wrong tack. I know people that say they are black And others yak about black folk In hateful, racist jokes, but they too Are not black. They’re color runs from As light as a cup of milky tea To the color of a kukui nut. So what is this black and white crap? It’s a trap for some who don’t know What to call other people because They’re trained to call other people Some name besides just people. It has to be what color people Trained under school bell and steeple To talk this way and veer away From the point they are making, The risk they are taking by seeing Something else besides a human being. Instead they focus on something unreal And therefore manage not to feel. It’s really so sad, and so demeaning To zap so much meaning from someone Who has a life, loves, joys and pain; Let's remain aloof from giving names And incorrectly worded colors to them. Don't pretend that you are being kind When you teach yourself to be blind To the beauty and the joy of boys And girls who are not from your race And to replace love and opportunity With fear, suspicion and enmity. It is quite simply a common tragedy.
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Jul 10, 2018
Jul 10, 2018 at 2:54 PM UTC
COLORFUL COMMENT
They chose to call it The Freedom Tree Because in their ultimate wisdom They felt it represented all of mankind And their famous bid for freedom. But all the while they didn’t really intend For all the people to enjoy it. They meant the right people in their laws And selectively chose to employ it. It stood in the center where battles were And where some patriots had died And from the beginning they ignored many And abused them far and wide. They argued that they were not really people These of color or unaccepted belief Then subjected them to the very horror they Themselves had come here for relief. So this was The Freedom Tree so named By some kind of patriotism that chooses Who gets to live, and love and prosper And in the end, decide who loses. Maybe they should have chosen a name That said what they thought was right; Maybe the name should have been The Tree of Freedom For Everyone White.
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Jul 1, 2018
Jul 1, 2018 at 2:32 PM UTC
THE FREEDOM TREE
(The Suspicious Oracle shifts in their booth, then stands from the table to sway into the light. They sweep the dust from their clothes and flash a smile.) It's been noted. Oh, my observation is go. Perceptive circuits caught the web where it stretches overhead. Words, words, words, beautiful pontifications Words, words, words eloquent romanticisms of the empathy empty.         n.            devoid (The Suspicious Oracle removes a bill from their coat and presents it to the audience.) In blood these names list the elite who seem to herd together, and at the gate keep the risen.                           .                                                        .                                                         .                                                                                      .clean The searing ray of justice past due will melt the chains save freedom for the few
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Jun 9, 2018
Jun 9, 2018 at 2:56 PM UTC
Dissent: The Poets
Even when you express your thoughts in a respectful way, you'll find more often than not, you'll be told assuredly, you're wrong. This is a tactic of those hidden behind status and clout. They'll silence your little voice as they keep right in your face and shout. You're entitled to yours as they're entitled to theirs. I want you to know, though, those who refuse to let you speak, have already decided inside that you don't deserve autonomy. Don't argue with the ill intended, kids. It's not your job to teach.
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Jun 9, 2018
Jun 9, 2018 at 11:23 AM UTC
Dissent: Importance For the Young
There are many of you that seem To wish the rest of us were dead; That they never had to listen To a single word we have said. They are not bright enough Within themselves to understand That we are the working people; We are the backbone of the land. Who do you think worked so hard? Who do you think saved you? Who was it backed civil rights? Yes, us, but few of you do. Who will pay folks to bellow And shout to sell their junk? Who will offer them the money They use for food and bunk? Who will bribe them with gifts And tickets to the best shows? Who will kiss their lazy ***** Who cares? Not them, we know. Who do you think worked so hard? Who do you think saved you? Who was it backed civil rights? Yes, us, but few of you do. Who was it that lost all sight Of the big picture and what it means. Who was it you sent to wars While you and clerks counted beans? Who was it that paid for bailouts Of banks you gave free rides? Who is it pays all the taxes For the mansions you cower inside? Who do you think worked so hard? Who do you think saved you? Who was it backed civil rights? Yes, us, but few of you do.
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Mar 7, 2018
Mar 7, 2018 at 6:02 PM UTC
WHO DO?
We've been betraying our children for generation after generation, government turned state education into indoctrination, media no longer speak the truth; experts in fabrication. How the **** am I supposed to show allegiance to my nation? Fascists masquerade as liberals to silence anyone who disagrees with their agenda, will the day never come when people wake up and realise this **** just can't go on? There can no longer be Right and Left, there's only right and wrong. Immigration, regulation, European legislation; fighting over **** while they indulge in self-congratulation, laughing in our faces while we're running the rat race. Working fifty hours a week to put food on our children's plates. Do you really think they give a **** about democracy? Do you think they care about the suffering of you and me? Do you really think that anything is what it claims to be? All you have to do is open up your eyes, it's plain to see. It's an illusion. It's all collusion. Make no mistake. Let there be no confusion. There's only one solution. This is my conclusion: We need a revolution! # When the tide begins to turn will you flee to higher ground? When the sky begins to burn will you lay your weapons down? Incarcerated in our own land yet we keep them on their thrones. Emancipation only comes by our own hand then together we'll atone. # Don't want to do this by the bullet, the blade or the bomb. If we use violence then we're giving them what they want. Any excuse for the use of firepower. Send in the troops whilst they regroup up in their high towers. They won't hesitate to slaughter us like animals, and so it's evident that we need a new kind of war. But if necessary we will still take it by force. This is a New World Order we're fighting for. Our greatest weapons are our minds and our eyes now. We need to read between the lines, see through the lies now. Draw the digital battle lines. We can rise now! Are you with me? Had enough? Do you despise how we're being asked to select our own dictators? But if we refuse to elect you, you ******* **** takers, and we can keep our resolve, with you repudiated, you shall not be absolved. No adjudicators! We're disillusioned with this intrusion. This is your fate. This will be your occlusion. Our world's reperfusion. Inevitable conclusion. Hail the Revolution! # When the tide begins to turn will you flee to higher ground? When the sky begins to burn will you lay your weapons down? Incarcerated in our own land. Yet we keep them on their thrones. Emancipation only comes by our own hand then together we'll atone. #
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Jan 8, 2018
Jan 8, 2018 at 8:33 PM UTC
Illusions
We've been betraying our children for generation after generation, government turned state education into indoctrination, media no longer speak the truth; experts in fabrication. How the **** am I supposed to show allegiance to my nation? Fascists masquerade as liberals to silence anyone who disagrees with their agenda, will the day never come when people wake up and realise this **** just can't go on? There can no longer be Right and Left, there's only right and wrong. Immigration, regulation, European legislation; fighting over **** while they indulge in self-congratulation, laughing in our faces while we're running the rat race. Working fifty hours a week to put food on our children's plates. Do you really think they give a **** about democracy? Do you think they care about the suffering of you and me? Do you really think that anything is what it claims to be? All you have to do is open up your eyes, it's plain to see. It's an illusion. It's all collusion. Make no mistake. Let there be no confusion. There's only one solution. This is my conclusion: We need a revolution! # When the tide begins to turn will you flee to higher ground? When the sky begins to burn will you lay your weapons down? Incarcerated in our own land yet we keep them on their thrones. Emancipation only comes by our own hand then together we'll atone. # Don't want to do this by the bullet, the blade or the bomb. If we use violence then we're giving them what they want. Any excuse for the use of firepower. Send in the troops whilst they regroup up in their high towers. They won't hesitate to slaughter us like animals, and so it's evident that we need a new kind of war. But if necessary we will still take it by force. This is a New World Order we're fighting for. Our greatest weapons are our minds and our eyes now. We need to read between the lines, see through the lies now. Draw the digital battle lines. We can rise now! Are you with me? Had enough? Do you despise how we're being asked to select our own dictators? But if we refuse to elect you, you ******* **** takers, and we can keep our resolve, with you repudiated, you shall not be absolved. No adjudicators! We're disillusioned with this intrusion. This is your fate. This will be your occlusion. Our world's reperfusion. Inevitable conclusion. Hail the Revolution! # When the tide begins to turn will you flee to higher ground? When the sky begins to burn will you lay your weapons down? Incarcerated in our own land. Yet we keep them on their thrones. Emancipation only comes by our own hand then together we'll atone. #
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How could I want the art of poetry to be dominantly white and male? There's way too female poets of color and white female poets that ate much better than I I couldn't live peacefully in the old days with that being apparent My intentions are transparent I think women are better with their words I'm just an intimidator I feel But it only takes one for these lines to congeal Art is a three course meal And it should not be overlooked She fills up my stadiums and gets them overbooked How could I want poetry to be white and male? The elitist mindset is ******* There's far too many female poets who deserve a trophy of gold And their hearts to heal. And there's also too many male poets who don't deserve the image of elitism.
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Nov 30, 2017
Nov 30, 2017 at 1:55 AM UTC
Trophy Of Gold
Put a poem here ******** Even if you don't know what that **** is (it's a collection of words, organized and broken into lines and stanzas like this!) Put a poem here ******** Even if you don't know how to type! (you take your finger, assuming you have one and if not that's ok use whatever you prefer, and press down on one of those little squares you know, the ones with the letters on em) Put a poem here ******** Even if you don't know any white man poets, dead or alive! (You don't need em, you could read em on the account of background and cultural appreciation, but you, you're enough) Put a poem here ******** Even if you don't think you're good enough! (You are, ****** and I am the president of poetry saying it is true, but ultimately you will, grow to be your own champion, maybe not now, but I can tell you how) Put a poem here ******** Even if you don't know how to be your own champion! (You'll become one by putting a poem here ******** So, put a poem here ******** Go! Go! Go!
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Nov 22, 2017
Nov 22, 2017 at 11:26 AM UTC
Put a Poem Here ********
The rich never starve So they don’t understand When others do. They have no earthly idea What the starving folks Are going through. They are being taught By those that have cash That poor are lazy trash And it’s fine to ignore When they suffer. 
If the poor were wise They would choose another Better way of living. They’d surely not starve But would rather carve Out some way of life That brought wealth to Their kids and their wife. It’s got to be something That the poor has done To make them into The neediest ones. They should even work For some fast food place Because being poor is A huge, social disgrace. And the women should stay At home with their kids The same way our mothers Of yesterday all did. It’s shameful the way The poor make their spouses Work at jobs all the time Outside of their houses. The rich never starve So they don’t understand When others suffer. They fail to accept that We are their sisters And their brothers.
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Sep 13, 2017
Sep 13, 2017 at 12:20 PM UTC
THE RICH NEVER STARVE
Around the table, Literacy discussion turned elitist... Bemoaning some poor Johnny, Son of a plumber who does not read Beyond the practical need, And has no desire to. I stopped to check my sense of what I had just heard... Was transported to a prairie farm; Thought of my Father, then in his eighties Who felt no need and no sense of loss For not having read Shakespeare nor Kant For missing Milton's Paradises and Hemingway, For by-passing Black Elk Speaks and C.S. Lewis. Every morning, he read his Bible; Some nights he read the mail's Motley collection of literature: Ads and politicians and fanatics, Demanding money and his time, But mostly money. "I don't have time to read!" He'd shout when I suggested a novel. What literature he had was in his head, Poems memorized when he was a boy In a two room school, or His own lines, written as a young man, Describing work and friends Long distant now, but still alive In memory. Dad taught me how to read In different literacies and different texts: Nuances of sky to read the weather - What chill or storm or drought was on its way ("Storm's coming, boys! Let's get that hay!"); Cows and calves and bulls, (Which one was sick or well, dry or bred); Ways to diagnose mechanical ailments ("Start with the easiest options first"); Metals, to know which welding rod applied ("Aluminum sags, and cast iron cracks"); Grain, rolled crisp between hard hands, (a test of ripeness); Cement, to blend the perfect mix, ("Clean gravel/sand, no dirt, not too much water!); Conservation, ("Always keep some grain on hand" &   "Keep your fuel above half-tank"). So many literacies... Dad, the Master Reader of them all... No wonder he'd no time for books.
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Dec 20, 2011
Dec 20, 2011 at 9:26 PM UTC
RR No Time For Books
Around the table, Literacy discussion turned elitist... Bemoaning some poor Johnny, Son of a plumber who does not read Beyond the practical need, And has no desire to. I stopped to check my sense of what I had just heard... Was transported to a prairie farm; Thought of my Father, then in his eighties Who felt no need and no sense of loss For not having read Shakespeare nor Kant For missing Milton's Paradises and Hemingway, For by-passing Black Elk Speaks and C.S. Lewis. Every morning, he read his Bible; Some nights he read the mail's Motley collection of literature: Ads and politicians and fanatics, Demanding money and his time, But mostly money. "I don't have time to read!" He'd shout when I suggested a novel. What literature he had was in his head, Poems memorized when he was a boy In a two room school, or His own lines, written as a young man, Describing work and friends Long distant now, but still alive In memory. Dad taught me how to read In different literacies and different texts: Nuances of sky to read the weather - What chill or storm or drought was on its way ("Storm's coming, boys! Let's get that hay!"); Cows and calves and bulls, (Which one was sick or well, dry or bred); Ways to diagnose mechanical ailments ("Start with the easiest options first"); Metals, to know which welding rod applied ("Aluminum sags, and cast iron cracks"); Grain, rolled crisp between hard hands, (a test of ripeness); Cement, to blend the perfect mix, ("Clean gravel/sand, no dirt, not too much water!); Conservation, ("Always keep some grain on hand" &   "Keep your fuel above half-tank"). So many literacies... Dad, the Master Reader of them all... No wonder he'd no time for books.
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Middle-school adulthood Picking on people is cool. Nothing important is going on That has anything to do with school. Glasses make people four-eyed Not being thin means they’re fat. Stutters and stammers are funny And being snotty is where it’s at. Ding **** bell, being rich is swell Don’t  be wimpy, not a smidge Tree-hugging liberals can go to hell. Revel in your white privilege. You want to vote for a Democrat? Have you lost your silly head? Just check all the GOP boxes With Daddy’s choice instead. Now you’re all grow up today And have a lot of political power Which grows and grows  stronger Each hour by Republican hour. So don’t weaken now, baby Do what you know is right. Stick to your supremacist guns. Because you know white makes might. So use your sarcasm as a tool Secretly whisper against the weak. And those weak-kneed pacifists, Those flag burning, long haired creeps; Ignore them all; give their nose a tweak. Just like the women you dated and married They need to follow your lead in life. After all, they don’t count the same as you. The important thing is they’re just a wife. Ding **** bell, power is swell You never suffer, not a smidge Don’t worry if you can’t spell. Revel in your white privilege. Never vote for a Democrat, Don’t be that kind of stupid head. Just check every the GOP boxes Faithfully keep your state red.
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Dec 8, 2016
Dec 8, 2016 at 3:59 PM UTC
MIDDLE SCHOOL ADULTHOOD
She sprays her hair a lot Doesn’t care about the climate She says it keeps her looking hot And she doesn’t even need to diet. She drives to school driving Her daddy’s fancy gift car. She goes happily because That’s where cute boys are. She’s the Great American Co-ed And intelligence is not important. Someone saying ‘no’ to her are Words she finds most discordant. She only likes to hear ‘yes dear’ For her life to being going fine. Everyone just has to understand And then they must toe the line. She’s a grade C student Because she doesn’t like books. But, she has no trouble With boys because of her looks. She is a willing target as well; She likes any guy in pants. Maybe even a rich guy who Will buy her expensive implants. She knows she will be The most popular girl around If she can just get her blog Going strong and off the ground. She has lots of cool photos Of her in her bikini bathing suit. She also has her phone number And her measurements to boot. She’s the Great American Co-ed And daddy has paid for University. She is afraid she might not get in Due to the law about racial diversity But she is sure her daddy will Call in some markers owed by friends. He’s done it before and she bets He’ll gladly do it one more time again.
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Nov 3, 2016
Nov 3, 2016 at 4:16 PM UTC
ALL AMERICAN CO-ED
You go to church on Sunday And then you've done your part. Instead of saying “I hate that ***** You just say “Bless her heart.” Monday starts the week anew With dog-eat-dog intention. Live and let live and the like Seldom rates a mention. Help the poor and needy Doesn't pull too much weight When measuring by dollar signs To decide what is truly great. The Bible verses get changed: “Do unto others” is rewritten To “Do what we can get by with.” Thus is the common man smitten. So you allow the Congress To do whatever they want: Outlaw our rights and rob us, Laugh at us and then flaunt That nobody can touch them As they bleed the land dry. We're just to bless their hearts While the watch us slowly die. We can keep on pretending That everything is just, Then go to church on Sunday And brag about “In God we trust”, Or we could wake the hell up And start to participate In what used to be our country Right now before it's too late. But that would mean standing up And not just going along And not following on party lines Not singing the downtrodden song. It means questioning our leaders, But, you see, right there is the rub. If we stop ourselves from being robbed We can't belong to the Hypocrite Club.
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Sep 25, 2016
Sep 25, 2016 at 12:11 AM UTC
HYPOCRITE CLUB