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#eldestdaughter
the alarm blares but she’s already awake, halfway dressed for the day, ahead as she always is, fully draped in fawnery, self-silvered mirrors, long-tarnished her smiled baubles concealing the first lie she ever told when the alarm blared
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May 5
May 5, 2026 at 3:26 AM UTC
fawnery
I learn to float in Grandma’s pool which my gone Aunt Shawna left for me Trust eddies under my flailing hands as tiny turbulents teach my liquid body I don’t always have to hold myself up I learn to swim in Grandma’s pool as soon as my toes can kiss the ground Each year grows arm’s reach until each length becomes proof that held breaths aren’t meant just for bracing I learn to dive in Grandma’s pool while my big proud splashes spatter her feet No skill, no grace, no fear—no matter With all due respect to the water, I know Grandma’s pool is the safest place not to drown
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May 5
May 5, 2026 at 3:22 AM UTC
grandma's pool
When I was born, a seed they brought me home then tucked me in, planted deep in the feeling soil where I would bloom
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May 5
May 5, 2026 at 3:21 AM UTC
feeling soil
there lies behind my cage of ribs, a core shaped by iron; mantle bearing delicate magma disguised as blood—mighty fierce, soft; crust wearing tender skin curved as lips in bloom there lies behind my eagle eyes, an earth tempered by you
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May 5
May 5, 2026 at 3:19 AM UTC
delicate magma
every time i begged for mercy, i was whipped with already bloodied chains. every time i begged for grace, my cries were only met with scorn and hate i could never contemplate. i was never wanted. i was never planned. and yet, here i unwaveringly and unwillingly stand. martyred, tortured, used, bruised. for what is my life if not to be used as the first lamb to the slaughter.
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Feb 26
Feb 26, 2026 at 11:13 PM UTC
unloved.
i could fix carefully curate the shoreline on the beach of Morecambe Bay sow each grain of sand with hopeful and precise positioning i could run circles around grass dunes etch every shape so they fit a whole family of sea creatures i could be kind - unassuming, shrink softly like sand, fill myself in the gaps of cockles buried beneath but no vessel could i fit the rage in which i sit no ocean could i shape - bend - or fix without the safety to be held just once by the arms of predictable tides
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Jan 21
Jan 21, 2026 at 9:02 PM UTC
the eldest daughter looks out to sea
i can’t recall when i began keeping count– birthday, dishes, the hours i owe everyone. perhaps it’s an eldest daughter thing, this arithmetic of living, the way we measure love in exhaustion and flinch when the days move too fast. i was twelve when i first felt the floor tilt, when i understood that eldest daughters do not grow up— they evaporate, slowly, gracefully, until all that’s left is the scent of wax and unfinished prayers. i thought i’d be somewhere else by now. doing something that made my chest feel wide, like when you’re running downhill and laughing. but the world kept turning, and i kept staying, like someone left behind in her own story. the candle hisses— a sound so small it almost sounds like breathing. i stare at it, wonder if the wax ever resents the wick for making it disappear just to keep burning. maybe that’s what this is. me, disappearing in small ways. learning to call it love.
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Oct 26, 2025
Oct 26, 2025 at 11:23 AM UTC
kindling
I breathe, but it burns— like lungs weren’t made for sorrow this thick. Tears come easier than air these days. I wasn't anyone's center, just orbiting lives that never noticed my pull. An add-on. An afterthought. A ghost in a lit room. I sit in circles and feel like a stranger, a silhouette in family photos, laughter echoing through me, never into me. I don’t fit in this world, not in the noise of my friends, not in the silence of my home, not even in the mirror. They say I’m here for a reason. But I search for it like a lost key in a locked room. I think I’m a failure, as a daughter with a voice unheard, a sister who forgot how to smile, a lover whose heart never made it back whole. And now even my books feel heavier than grief. Every page whispers, not enough. I’m failing in every ******* thing, and yet, I wake up again. I hope death comes slowly, not because I chase it, but because I’m tired of running from it. And if it ever finds me, I hope that for once, I don’t have to fail at that too.
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Apr 11, 2025
Apr 11, 2025 at 12:24 PM UTC
A Failure
Only worth what I can give, never allowed to be seen, I tend their wounds and clean their rooms, but no one's concerned about me. Money to borrow, chores to be done, tears to be wiped, words to be sung. And I like to do it, but I'm all worn out I can't keep on giving when I'm left out. But I'm talked over, my words not worth your ears, And my hands are unseen, unless alleviating others fears. I've asked for help, and patience, and time, but I'm told that's life and I should step back in line.
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Oct 28, 2024
Oct 28, 2024 at 6:57 PM UTC
Caregiver
Six children and a suburban home Don't it hurt you to see me like this? One of yours, and still so alone? First daughter assigned third wife I've done it all wrong again, Haven't I? Sprawled all across this spiky green turf Drinking up the merciless sunshine Trying to keep it down Weeping about my friend's father Watching for a hint of remorse in your stern frown I wait for you to ask for my forgiveness Go on, ask Let me for once be the one to deny
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Feb 17, 2024
Feb 17, 2024 at 9:11 PM UTC
Jimmy Dover I Hope U Choke