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I’m seventeen and already exhausted in ways adults don’t seem to notice. I wake up tired, go to bed tired, carry the day in my shoulders like it’s something I forgot how to set down. I’m trying. In quiet ways. In showing up when I don’t want to. In holding myself together at school. In doing homework with a brain that won’t slow down. In learning how to breathe through stuff no one sees. And then you say, “Try harder.” Like I haven’t been giving everything I have. Like effort has a volume **** I just forgot to turn up. Like I’m choosing to struggle. You don’t see the nights I stare at the ceiling replaying mistakes. You don’t see how much courage it takes just to keep going some days. You don’t hear the way my heart talks to itself when I feel like I’m falling behind. I want to scream, This is me trying. This is me learning how to grow without breaking apart. This is me doing my best with what I have right now. I don’t need pressure. I don’t need comparisons. I need patience. I need someone to notice that I haven’t given up. So when you tell me to try harder, please understand— I already am. And sometimes surviving the day is the hardest part.
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Feb 5
Feb 5, 2026 at 12:32 PM UTC
Surviving The Day Is The Hardest Part
i wonder what you ever did with all of the friendship bracelets we had i still wear them it hurts too much to take them off i wonder if you still remember our secret handshake that we made up in the 2nd grade and kept using for years i still practice it with my tear-stained reflection in the broken mirror i wonder if you still think about me as often as i think about you i keep going back to our old, happy memories the ones that you (probably) forgot i sure hope not because those are the memories i can't get myself to throw away i wonder what you did with all the pictures of me on your phone did you delete them or do you just keep them there leaving them alone, just like you did with the real me i can't believe that i managed to cut your face out of a photo a hole of emptiness- resembling the one in my soul i really miss you but friends grow apart, i guess
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Dec 6, 2024
Dec 6, 2024 at 12:13 AM UTC
i wonder
independent all alone in this country we call home alone but not lonely peaceful ... if only through true struggles and true strife the awful people take our lives from rocky peaks to desert sands a trustworthy hope; a nation's plan we will make it
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Dec 5, 2024
Dec 5, 2024 at 5:48 PM UTC
Israel III
a six day war fight for our lives form our hives pray for our wives a six day war get our land let our boots sink in sand and reach for that savior of a hand a six day war lose our hope try to cope we will win the war
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Dec 5, 2024
Dec 5, 2024 at 11:27 AM UTC
Israel II
i want to c r y but i am in a crowded room i hold back t e a r s but they fall anyway now i am a l l a l o n e but i cant get the tears to come out i want to c r y but i cant not at all
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Dec 3, 2024
Dec 3, 2024 at 8:59 PM UTC
cry