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My dorm room was bright this morning. It was disorienting. The sky outside was a cloudless, striking neon blue. The air was so crisp and clean, I could hardly feel it going in and out. It all sparked to create a diffused sense of well-being. Gone, it seems, were the concrete bunker feels of winter. There's been some loose talk of ‘spring’ lately—I thought it was fake news—but from my third floor lattice windows I could see what looked like people outside. They were walking in the sunshine, riding bikes, throwing frisbees, kicking ​​hacky sacks, a couple was making out in the grass—it was a riot of activity. Sunny skiffed out of her room (which looks like a hotel room trashed by some rock star), she seemed lighter than air. Three days ago, she announced there was someone of “particular personal significance,” in her life (translate: girlfriend). Start the schmaltzy, string-drenched soundtrack—love is in the air. Our challenge now is to carve out a poised and measured final act to our undergraduate years. There’s a scurrying, cynosure, beehive, hyperfocus to labs and classes, a heightened, almost cinematic quality, as if, up to now, we’ve only been practicing for some undefined ‘real thing.’ . . Songs for this: Daylight by Harry Styles Ain't Nothing Like the Real Thing by Michael McDonald Dizzy (feat. Alfie Templeman & Thomas Headon) by chloe moriondo . .our cast: A reader once asked, “Who are these people?” (a solid question) So now I do a cast list. Sunny, (suitemate) 21, a (pre-med) molecular, cellular, and developmental biology major, is a cowgirl from Nebraska (seriously, she has a quarter horse and barrel races). She’s an outspoken fem-facing ladies-lady. Your author, a simple, multinational, upper-crust, trust-fund baby from Athens, Georgia who's also a molecular biophysics and biochemistry major (pre-med).
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Apr 4, 2025
Apr 4, 2025 at 9:22 AM UTC
springing
My dorm room was bright this morning. It was disorienting. The sky outside was a cloudless, striking neon blue. The air was so crisp and clean, I could hardly feel it going in and out. It all sparked to create a diffused sense of well-being. Gone, it seems, were the concrete bunker feels of winter. There's been some loose talk of ‘spring’ lately—I thought it was fake news—but from my third floor lattice windows I could see what looked like people outside. They were walking in the sunshine, riding bikes, throwing frisbees, kicking ​​hacky sacks, a couple was making out in the grass—it was a riot of activity. Sunny skiffed out of her room (which looks like a hotel room trashed by some rock star), she seemed lighter than air. Three days ago, she announced there was someone of “particular personal significance,” in her life (translate: girlfriend). Start the schmaltzy, string-drenched soundtrack—love is in the air. Our challenge now is to carve out a poised and measured final act to our undergraduate years. There’s a scurrying, cynosure, beehive, hyperfocus to labs and classes, a heightened, almost cinematic quality, as if, up to now, we’ve only been practicing for some undefined ‘real thing.’ . . Songs for this: Daylight by Harry Styles Ain't Nothing Like the Real Thing by Michael McDonald Dizzy (feat. Alfie Templeman & Thomas Headon) by chloe moriondo . .our cast: A reader once asked, “Who are these people?” (a solid question) So now I do a cast list. Sunny, (suitemate) 21, a (pre-med) molecular, cellular, and developmental biology major, is a cowgirl from Nebraska (seriously, she has a quarter horse and barrel races). She’s an outspoken fem-facing ladies-lady. Your author, a simple, multinational, upper-crust, trust-fund baby from Athens, Georgia who's also a molecular biophysics and biochemistry major (pre-med).
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Falling, falling, falling,                                   forever or is this                                      G                                    N                                   I                                 T                               A                              O                             L                           F towards a shimmer in the distance like a wind that carries a dead leaf whispering through the chimes that fall upon deaf ears as if the message was sent and it just wasn't heard No, this is f                      a                        l off                    l     the                  i precipice             n                                g as I watch the sky march round in a funeral procession of our history F L O A T I N G in this disorienting gravity S E D U C I N G in this magnetic propinquity T E A R I N G in this psychosomatic schism every storm proceeds an epoch                                               of pleasure as if pleasure                     is an Grecian artifact                         in the backdrop of Ovid The caterpillar                        of Like                        of Love                        of Hate cocoons into insouciant                                       vicissitudes                                        Y.                                     A                                  W                                 but refuses to fly A
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Oct 22, 2019
Oct 22, 2019 at 11:48 AM UTC
Disorienting Gravity
Falling, falling, falling,                                   forever or is this                                      G                                    N                                   I                                 T                               A                              O                             L                           F towards a shimmer in the distance like a wind that carries a dead leaf whispering through the chimes that fall upon deaf ears as if the message was sent and it just wasn't heard No, this is f                      a                        l off                    l     the                  i precipice             n                                g as I watch the sky march round in a funeral procession of our history F L O A T I N G in this disorienting gravity S E D U C I N G in this magnetic propinquity T E A R I N G in this psychosomatic schism every storm proceeds an epoch                                               of pleasure as if pleasure                     is an Grecian artifact                         in the backdrop of Ovid The caterpillar                        of Like                        of Love                        of Hate cocoons into insouciant                                       vicissitudes                                        Y.                                     A                                  W                                 but refuses to fly A
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Jinx Not it The game my heart plays With your disorienting love
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Apr 2, 2019
Apr 2, 2019 at 11:26 PM UTC
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This is you, you is I In a way we never saw before He is she, and so are we Her thought on the basement floor They're you and she too You've never seen his go I'm coming back to save you boy, Tis the only 'he' she knows. You're leading us to them The strangest place they've ever known His she is theirs as well... Maybe I'll understand when we're full grown.
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Apr 15, 2014
Apr 15, 2014 at 11:31 PM UTC
This is you is I