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#disoriented
You Got me running around like I'm in a CARNIVAL MAZE, Looking all DISORIENTED, DISTRACTED and DAZED, I Don't know where to go, I'm not sure what to do, Keep running into these DEAD ENDS, I don't have the SLIGHTEST CLUE. I'm stuck in this MAD HOUSE, I need to find the WAY OUT, but If I stay on the RIGHT PATH, I'll find the CORRECT ROUTE!!! B.R. Date: 03/24/2023
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Jul 31, 2025
Jul 31, 2025 at 11:18 AM UTC
Maze
I am uncertain can I really do this go to college live on my own make my own money be an adult get my license I'm not ready everything is happening so fast I feel disoriented will I ever feel capable I can't do this it's too much just breathe you can do this anxiety captures me again I don't know if I can do this
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Mar 14, 2025
Mar 14, 2025 at 8:06 AM UTC
Uncertainty
I dreamt I awoke...in Woking...in England "Woking", I thought, "you gotta be joking! What was I doing, doin' here in Woking" I felt like Dr. Who stepping out of the TARDIS And all the people there they were all looking, they were all staring at me It was like the whole world was gaping As if...as if there was something to see I wondered 'Had my mask fallen and was what they were now seeing, was it something appalling Could they see the real me ?' So I started running...runnin' 'cos I thought they were all gunning Gunnin' out to get me And I met this policeman, this burly constable And I said to him "I didn't want to awaken in Woking at all I just wanted to get back home" He replied "The last train out of Woking had just gone" So I ran on And it started raining... raining and I was soaking... soakin' Soakin' in Woking Then I met this sweet little London gal She said "Cor Blimey where you goin'" I told her I didn't know... I told her "Here in Woking I felt like I was choking, that all the walls they were closing in" I said I'd just been dreaming...dreamin' But what was the meaning... the meaning And why had they put me here in Woking What... what was the reason ?" "Have you been drinking Love?" she said "No!" I replied indignantly, "I haven't been drinking, I was just sleeping...sleepin' But hadn't expected to awaken, to awaken here in Woking I opened up to her a bit then,  I said "Though I was getting older I was... I was always still hoping But then suddenly I woke up and found myself here, here in Woking What was it all about ?" "You poor darling " she said (For a moment Woking didn't seem so bad after all) Then she reached into her purse and brought forth some coppers and offered them to me I said "No! No! You don't understand... you don't understand... I awakened from Woking a little after the morning had broken Still in one piece and still with all my secrets  intact But sadly Without any meaning nor any reason.
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Jul 9, 2024
Jul 9, 2024 at 9:16 AM UTC
Woking
I dreamt I awoke...in Woking...in England "Woking", I thought, "you gotta be joking! What was I doing, doin' here in Woking" I felt like Dr. Who stepping out of the TARDIS And all the people there they were all looking, they were all staring at me It was like the whole world was gaping As if...as if there was something to see I wondered 'Had my mask fallen and was what they were now seeing, was it something appalling Could they see the real me ?' So I started running...runnin' 'cos I thought they were all gunning Gunnin' out to get me And I met this policeman, this burly constable And I said to him "I didn't want to awaken in Woking at all I just wanted to get back home" He replied "The last train out of Woking had just gone" So I ran on And it started raining... raining and I was soaking... soakin' Soakin' in Woking Then I met this sweet little London gal She said "Cor Blimey where you goin'" I told her I didn't know... I told her "Here in Woking I felt like I was choking, that all the walls they were closing in" I said I'd just been dreaming...dreamin' But what was the meaning... the meaning And why had they put me here in Woking What... what was the reason ?" "Have you been drinking Love?" she said "No!" I replied indignantly, "I haven't been drinking, I was just sleeping...sleepin' But hadn't expected to awaken, to awaken here in Woking I opened up to her a bit then,  I said "Though I was getting older I was... I was always still hoping But then suddenly I woke up and found myself here, here in Woking What was it all about ?" "You poor darling " she said (For a moment Woking didn't seem so bad after all) Then she reached into her purse and brought forth some coppers and offered them to me I said "No! No! You don't understand... you don't understand... I awakened from Woking a little after the morning had broken Still in one piece and still with all my secrets  intact But sadly Without any meaning nor any reason.
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I am soft and mandible:             fresh clay,         the inside of an oyster,        the belly of an armadillo.             vulnerable.                      tender.                               the anti-sharp. everything is blurred.  dulled.  hidden behind a gossamer haze and ambient noise.   a photo out of focus.            one eye closed and ten feet back.   dizzy.            so dizzy.            disoriented.   there is no logic here.             no rules.             no laws.   and that’s what makes it horrible and incomprehensible.   the transplant recipient still dies.  the man in perfect health                                                                 suddenly has cancer. the proned patient flipped back to supine for intubation                                                 codes and dies immediately.   nonsense.  it’s all nonsense.   it's easier to take a breath and                                                         compartmentalize.
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Aug 15, 2021
Aug 15, 2021 at 8:37 PM UTC
enter: freeze response. enter: disassociation. enter: brain fog
My heart, a sinking ship Bereft of balanced beams Descends deeper towards its doom; Depth creating elusive dreams My hope, a shifting plate Converged with reality Shifts, shatters, shakes its foundation A quake leaving heavy debris My body, a tattered shoe Weary from the long trek Desperately pleading for its restoration Left a disheveled wreck
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Apr 11, 2020
Apr 11, 2020 at 11:31 AM UTC
Waves
Everything seems gray Like tasteless Zero motivation To move or to do anything Why do I feel this? Why so tired and disoriented?
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Mar 3, 2020
Mar 3, 2020 at 11:27 AM UTC
Tired
one and another played a game in the forest where the dark trunks rose tall and the creatures were a chorus. the delicate blue air in the midnight’s gloom left one disoriented: are the sounds one’s voice too? one wondered and wandered, but after some time, another’s voice and one’s thoughts intertwined in one’s mind. one cried and one protested, one just didn’t know; was one even moving? for one lost feeling in one’s feet below. the cold wind blurred one’s sight, and nothing seemed clear so one closed one’s eyes overtaken by fear. one was without feeling, legs to chest, and even one’s face. now all one wanted was another’s kind, warm embrace.
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Aug 31, 2019
Aug 31, 2019 at 6:27 PM UTC
one and another
My dear when I tell you, "I'm a late bloomer." I need you to know, that I meant to say is, "I have lost my petals and my stem is bare." Own ****** hands, The only criminal is I, I have taken shears and torn ungracefully. There the petals lay underneath. A gentle breeze then came by and swept them away, Never to reach my clutches again. My dear I made myself bloom far to early, Letting the petals of myself vanish. Leaving me astray within my own vessel.
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Mar 29, 2018
Mar 29, 2018 at 10:41 PM UTC
Disoriented; I am
A line of vases the wind blows against knocking them over, but only a few left broken Some picked back up, others left with just a scratch but i'm part of the batch that shattered. Built back up, glued together, you can't erase the damage done by this weather, leaving me unwanted forever Left there all alone to be knocked over or thrown until i've shattered once more so you just leave me on the floor because i'm too far gone, yes, you made me too far gone and now no one will piece me back together.
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Mar 1, 2018
Mar 1, 2018 at 4:00 PM UTC
Disoriented Damage
Feeling numb saying words from the tip of my tongue.
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Dec 7, 2014
Dec 7, 2014 at 10:36 PM UTC
At sea... [10w]
i might have become h o l l o w as the bottles i drank numb as my cold fingers e m p t y as the inbox on my phone disoriented as how this poem is typewritten how much more naiveté do i have to go through in order to realize because i know im hurting yet i dont know how to explain the pain
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Oct 23, 2014
Oct 23, 2014 at 10:18 AM UTC
what pain
broken fingers, broken hearts and lost loves who will stay forever hidden in manhattan.
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Sep 19, 2014
Sep 19, 2014 at 6:21 PM UTC
manhattan
she was correcting one        by          one all the mistakes of her past, with an eraser and a pencil in a bleak room painted clinical white.
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 10:24 AM UTC
when last seen