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#disceipt
That costume you were given I am not sure suits yourself and that acting of yours well, it comes across as rather coarse, the lines could do with a bit more polishing and quite honestly at times I am not often sure of what I am watching. It hurts me most to say, but unfortunately you left me all the way and my dear this performance of yours is as much as your formal love, insincere. I am no expert on the science but lend me the booklet and i'm sure I could perform thrice the better than I have seen. Then, perhaps, you may summon the courage again, to say I've none the value great enough to court your self proclaimed mastery Tah!
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Apr 1
Apr 1, 2026 at 12:39 PM UTC
A bitter critique