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Peter and I will be apart this holiday. So instead of writing a story, I thought I’d interview him. It’s 8:30 am, Wednesday morning 12.21.22 and we’re having coffee at the Atticus Bookstore Cafe in New Haven, CT. We’ll go our separate, holiday ways after our coffee. I’m going to New York City and Peter’s going to Malibu, California. I have a few questions on my phone and I’m recording the interview. Anais: “Ready?” Peter: “Ready.” Anais: “How are we alike?” Peter: “Oh, we’re both planners who know what we want. You’ve got a blueprint of your future and I have my plans - you know, stacked carefully, like dinner plates - but they’ve been a little wobbly since I met you.” He smiles suavely. Anais: “Nice. How are we different?” Peter: “Oh, lots of ways. Biologically,” Peter begins, putting his hands over his ******* “my ***** might be bigger.” Anais: “Ha, I don’t THINK so.” I snarled, but I couldn’t help chuckling. “Seriously!” Peter: “Well, I think you have more emotions than I do.” I look at him quizzically, “I’ll suddenly realize you’re crying and wonder if I did something wrong, or you’ll burst out laughing at nothing at all.” Anais: “You make me sound like a NUT,” I said, “and I don’t cry that much,” I say defensively. Peter: “No, not if we eliminate TV shows, movies, FaceTime calls or when you’re tired and overworked.” Anais: “Maybe you’re just emotionally blocked,” I said, irritated. Peter: “Maybe, but I do love it when you jump off the couch for an impromptu dance, like you can’t contain yourself anymore - and your silliness - I LOVE that.” He smiled, “When we’re studying quietly and you sneak up and jump on me, playing like you’re trying to pin me,” he chuckles. Anais: “I AM trying to pin you,” I said. Peter: laughs out loud Peter shifts toward me. Anais: “I see you moving in on me,” I said, pointing my pencil at him accusingly, “get back in your seat mister, I’m not THAT kind of interviewer.” I gasped, “What if I were poor, old, near-sighted Barabra Walters? She’d have never seen you coming. Would you have put the move on HER?” Peter: “I like my women younger” Me: “Barbara’s about 100 - 99% of the female population is younger - when did you get so picky?” Peter: “I’ll have you know I’m VERY picky. Is this one of those hit-piece interviews? Do I need my lawyer?” Me: “You got me off track.” I admit, checking my notes, “other differences?” Peter: “Well, I’m kind of easy going, in general - lazy faire - but you, you watch everything - it must be exhausting.” Anais: “I’m sentient,” I admit. “You let people walk all over you - like when they brought you a cold steak at the Plaza?” Peter: “I didn’t want them taking it back and spitting on it.” Anais: “If they did that, we’d own the Plaza - besides, that’s why we got you a new steak.” Peter: “I’ll admit, you make me aware of things I hadn’t noticed, and when you complain, you’re usually right.” Anais: “Thanks. Any other differences?” Peter: “The obvious one, you’re a rich girl - we come from different worlds.” He said, touching his lips absentmindedly.” (I’ve been taking psychology classes - that might be a self-soothing gesture). Anais: “Have you seen that new James Cameron, water-world movie? I come from there.” Peter: “A world where parents buy their daughters six thousand-dollar prom dresses.” Anais: “I bought that on SALE,” I said emphatically, “it regularly costs twelve (thousand).” Peter: “Hazah! You like saving money.” Anais: “And I didn’t get a FITTING,” I added defensively (because it was on sale). Peter: “And - you’re a little Sinatra,” he said, wincing and wig-wagging his hand in a so-so way. Anais: I gasp, “Well THAT’s good to KNOW,” I say, narrowing my eyes at him. Peter: “I’m not calling you spoiled,” he shrugged, “you secretly paid your roommate's tuition,” he said soothingly, “THAT’s who you are - generous.” Anais: “She was working two jobs - for peanuts,” I said softly. After a quiet moment I began again. Anais: “What about us?” I ask hesitantly. Peter: “We’ve become a couple,” He said, smiling, “against all odds and I’ve become comfortable with us being a couple.” He pauses for thought. “Relationships have so many stipulations and rules, and everyone has opinions, but your smiles make me smile, and your sighs and even your yawns make life better.” Anais: “Do you want a closing statement?” Peter: “I’m supposed to become a physicist, now that I’ll have my doctoral degree.” He pauses again and puts his hand on my knee. “I’m not sure exactly what that’ll mean - for us - that remains to be seen, but my aunt has a saying, “The universe has so many tricks up its sleeve - love whatever happens.”
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Dec 22, 2022
Dec 22, 2022 at 10:33 PM UTC
an interview
Peter and I will be apart this holiday. So instead of writing a story, I thought I’d interview him. It’s 8:30 am, Wednesday morning 12.21.22 and we’re having coffee at the Atticus Bookstore Cafe in New Haven, CT. We’ll go our separate, holiday ways after our coffee. I’m going to New York City and Peter’s going to Malibu, California. I have a few questions on my phone and I’m recording the interview. Anais: “Ready?” Peter: “Ready.” Anais: “How are we alike?” Peter: “Oh, we’re both planners who know what we want. You’ve got a blueprint of your future and I have my plans - you know, stacked carefully, like dinner plates - but they’ve been a little wobbly since I met you.” He smiles suavely. Anais: “Nice. How are we different?” Peter: “Oh, lots of ways. Biologically,” Peter begins, putting his hands over his ******* “my ***** might be bigger.” Anais: “Ha, I don’t THINK so.” I snarled, but I couldn’t help chuckling. “Seriously!” Peter: “Well, I think you have more emotions than I do.” I look at him quizzically, “I’ll suddenly realize you’re crying and wonder if I did something wrong, or you’ll burst out laughing at nothing at all.” Anais: “You make me sound like a NUT,” I said, “and I don’t cry that much,” I say defensively. Peter: “No, not if we eliminate TV shows, movies, FaceTime calls or when you’re tired and overworked.” Anais: “Maybe you’re just emotionally blocked,” I said, irritated. Peter: “Maybe, but I do love it when you jump off the couch for an impromptu dance, like you can’t contain yourself anymore - and your silliness - I LOVE that.” He smiled, “When we’re studying quietly and you sneak up and jump on me, playing like you’re trying to pin me,” he chuckles. Anais: “I AM trying to pin you,” I said. Peter: laughs out loud Peter shifts toward me. Anais: “I see you moving in on me,” I said, pointing my pencil at him accusingly, “get back in your seat mister, I’m not THAT kind of interviewer.” I gasped, “What if I were poor, old, near-sighted Barabra Walters? She’d have never seen you coming. Would you have put the move on HER?” Peter: “I like my women younger” Me: “Barbara’s about 100 - 99% of the female population is younger - when did you get so picky?” Peter: “I’ll have you know I’m VERY picky. Is this one of those hit-piece interviews? Do I need my lawyer?” Me: “You got me off track.” I admit, checking my notes, “other differences?” Peter: “Well, I’m kind of easy going, in general - lazy faire - but you, you watch everything - it must be exhausting.” Anais: “I’m sentient,” I admit. “You let people walk all over you - like when they brought you a cold steak at the Plaza?” Peter: “I didn’t want them taking it back and spitting on it.” Anais: “If they did that, we’d own the Plaza - besides, that’s why we got you a new steak.” Peter: “I’ll admit, you make me aware of things I hadn’t noticed, and when you complain, you’re usually right.” Anais: “Thanks. Any other differences?” Peter: “The obvious one, you’re a rich girl - we come from different worlds.” He said, touching his lips absentmindedly.” (I’ve been taking psychology classes - that might be a self-soothing gesture). Anais: “Have you seen that new James Cameron, water-world movie? I come from there.” Peter: “A world where parents buy their daughters six thousand-dollar prom dresses.” Anais: “I bought that on SALE,” I said emphatically, “it regularly costs twelve (thousand).” Peter: “Hazah! You like saving money.” Anais: “And I didn’t get a FITTING,” I added defensively (because it was on sale). Peter: “And - you’re a little Sinatra,” he said, wincing and wig-wagging his hand in a so-so way. Anais: I gasp, “Well THAT’s good to KNOW,” I say, narrowing my eyes at him. Peter: “I’m not calling you spoiled,” he shrugged, “you secretly paid your roommate's tuition,” he said soothingly, “THAT’s who you are - generous.” Anais: “She was working two jobs - for peanuts,” I said softly. After a quiet moment I began again. Anais: “What about us?” I ask hesitantly. Peter: “We’ve become a couple,” He said, smiling, “against all odds and I’ve become comfortable with us being a couple.” He pauses for thought. “Relationships have so many stipulations and rules, and everyone has opinions, but your smiles make me smile, and your sighs and even your yawns make life better.” Anais: “Do you want a closing statement?” Peter: “I’m supposed to become a physicist, now that I’ll have my doctoral degree.” He pauses again and puts his hand on my knee. “I’m not sure exactly what that’ll mean - for us - that remains to be seen, but my aunt has a saying, “The universe has so many tricks up its sleeve - love whatever happens.”
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I always hate it when someone I count on gets promoted out of my everyday life. Nothing bathes one in neoteny like being left behind by someone off to college. One morning they’re with you, the next, they’ve departed - dropping away, like Icarus, into those freer, more exciting, college seas. Callie did that - it wasn’t her fault, exactly, that she was two years older. I’m a vampire for her tales of sordid doings and it was fun telling her my everything so she could laugh at my mistakes. I’ve really missed her coaching - between my every romantic play. Sometimes I’d pause in my studies or practice - those seemingly slow motion choreographies that'll lead to MY future - to glance across our joined yards where I can see her window. I’d hope to see a light - like she broke camp, escaped her quarantine and somehow made it home - like the moon stepping out from behind the clouds.
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Jul 23, 2021
Jul 23, 2021 at 3:35 PM UTC
neoteny
i hate layovers, the long stops the nothingness of the in betweens suffocating of boredom surrounded by strangers all anxiously waiting there is a universal oneness here regardless of race, religion or age something which everyone endures a temporary pause in time where reflection is forced upon us reminiscing of what we bid farewell to and the hope, love, fear or excitement awaiting us at our next stop
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Jul 17, 2017
Jul 17, 2017 at 8:10 PM UTC
international departures
"Look into the camera," and bring your eyes nowhere else, not behind to where the lady stands, holding an eight-year-old's hand. "Place your forefinger on the sensor," and don't dare move it closer to your wet eyes, for the man with the ten-year-old might see you shudder. The arrow always points forward, so take your steps fast and sure. Ignore the shouts, shove away the feels, smile and wave your way to DEPARTURE.
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May 15, 2017
May 15, 2017 at 4:48 PM UTC
The Back Window-Wall at the Passport Checkpoint
Salient pools swarmed upon Seas Of blackened Amber, Reflected Neon gazes, And The love that could never be. She knew it. I knew it. Hell, Even my luggage knew it. All that remained were the footsteps And in opposite directions.
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Oct 21, 2016
Oct 21, 2016 at 9:42 PM UTC
Salience
Our sun-kissed smiles From the summer time Wave goodbye, wave away The rest of the sunshine We accept their departures And trudge on, to arrive On depression's doorstep In this sweater weather The rain pours down The curtains are closed The windows steam up Either way We pull up our covers Pull closer our lovers And make our own kisses We can make our own smiles
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Sep 5, 2015
Sep 5, 2015 at 4:50 PM UTC
Sun-kissed Smiles
Isn't it sad How we Can spend A lot of Time together Yet know Next to nothing About Each another. This though, Is not the time To reminisce. Earlier this Morning you Told me that You were leaving. It came in not As bomb that Levels cities, No, it was more Like a baseball That broke through The stained-glass windows Of my heart. This does Not **** me, But day in And day out, I am burdened By the gaping Hole in me. I pick the Shards of glass, Stained with Memories and Mysteries. I only ask To know you more. I try to put The shards together Enduring all The cuts to my Fingers. Cuts of different Sizes, some are Deep and some Are shallow But all draw blood The same. I Persevere through the pain To rebuild That perfect Picture. To see the Mystery Unravel before Me. To put together The pieces of Your identity. Isn't it sad How we Can spend A lot of Time together Yet know Next to nothing About Each another. I only ask To know you more. Someday perhaps, I would see your hands, Whose scars Would gladly Open again, And help me Fix this broken Memory.
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Nov 11, 2014
Nov 11, 2014 at 8:28 AM UTC
Departures