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#deepwater
they say there are plenty of fish in the sea, as if plenty could fill the empty left by your absence, as if saltwater could dull the sting. but you were never near the shore you belonged to the deep places no one visits, to pages no one reads: orca’s shadow, shark’s silence, starfish gripping cold stone, jellyfish glowing like broken lanterns. rare things don’t call out, and the ocean never gives them back. after you, the tides learned a new language the blue grew heavy with grief, the currents slowed to mourning. people chase the bright surface, silver fish flashing in sunlight, but the surface is shallow all flash, no pulse, no ache. i don’t wade there anymore. i don’t go diving anymore. the honest waves crash hard now, and honesty can break you slow. maybe there are plenty of fish in the sea, but the ocean keeps its rarities hidden, and it never returns what it takes.
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Jan 19
Jan 19, 2026 at 10:36 AM UTC
The ocean keeps its secrets
I’ve always had a fear of water that’s deep I remember my fright in the city pool how I made friends with the shallow end how close to the sides I’d keep. I still recall that curved stone edge how my fingers held on and I felt a fool being so scared when the other kids would jump in the deep end with joy how I felt like such a silly scardy boy and I envied their abandon and grit the big splash when their cannonball hit. But it’s true my daddy was never there to teach me to swim to help when I came up coughing for air. Oh man, how I could have used him and his strong arms to hold me and show me the breast stroke slap my back when I choked. Now I still thirst for a father when I get afraid of the deep water. The difference is now I’ve got a dad who’s always there when I’m afraid or sad. In fact I look forward to the dive into the deep where I’m so alive centered and at peace. But I’m still learning to let go and release the edge of that deep pool and breathe in the depths… of spirit fuel.
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Jan 16, 2019
Jan 16, 2019 at 12:48 PM UTC
Deep Water
at the end of the pier no one is fishing a couple from Jersey leans out over the rail looking down into the brown swill rolling under the weathered boards The wife remarked “Belmar's water is much nicer.” on the Gulf’s edge unhappy gulls convene, plaintively gazing over gray waves ebbing at their feet Brown Pelican crews fly in long ordered formations incessantly circling in widening rounds seemingly reluctant to plunge into the endless depletion of this aquatic dead zone I speak with a Jefferson Parish employee working a shovel to regrade disturbed sand boasting a consistency of moist drying cement “How did the Gulf oil spill affect this place?” I ask “It took evarding.” she said With a slight Cajun accent, “dig down a foot or two in da sand you hit earl. It nevar goes away. Nevar. “I live down bay side near forty years. Had’nt been in de water fer twenty five.  The ****** ******** took evarding. They should go back to Englund” She went back to tilling the sand. Deepwater Horizon yet festers a short forty miles out to sea is now covered by an advancing storm swelling in the Gulf standing at the end of the long pier my hands  grasp the sun bleached lumber straining my eyes peering into a dark avalanche the serenade of bird songs have been replaced by the motorized drone of tenders servicing offshore rigs sounding a constant refrain filling my ears with a disquieting   seaside symphony the taste of light sweet crude dances on my tongue the pungent sting of disbursements climbs into nostrils rends my face prickles my eyes grandeur is a conditional state never permanent forever temporary Music Selection: Cajun Music: Hippy To-Yo Grand Isle 2/20/17 jbm
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Mar 3, 2017
Mar 3, 2017 at 5:52 PM UTC
Grand Isle
at the end of the pier no one is fishing a couple from Jersey leans out over the rail looking down into the brown swill rolling under the weathered boards The wife remarked “Belmar's water is much nicer.” on the Gulf’s edge unhappy gulls convene, plaintively gazing over gray waves ebbing at their feet Brown Pelican crews fly in long ordered formations incessantly circling in widening rounds seemingly reluctant to plunge into the endless depletion of this aquatic dead zone I speak with a Jefferson Parish employee working a shovel to regrade disturbed sand boasting a consistency of moist drying cement “How did the Gulf oil spill affect this place?” I ask “It took evarding.” she said With a slight Cajun accent, “dig down a foot or two in da sand you hit earl. It nevar goes away. Nevar. “I live down bay side near forty years. Had’nt been in de water fer twenty five.  The ****** ******** took evarding. They should go back to Englund” She went back to tilling the sand. Deepwater Horizon yet festers a short forty miles out to sea is now covered by an advancing storm swelling in the Gulf standing at the end of the long pier my hands  grasp the sun bleached lumber straining my eyes peering into a dark avalanche the serenade of bird songs have been replaced by the motorized drone of tenders servicing offshore rigs sounding a constant refrain filling my ears with a disquieting   seaside symphony the taste of light sweet crude dances on my tongue the pungent sting of disbursements climbs into nostrils rends my face prickles my eyes grandeur is a conditional state never permanent forever temporary Music Selection: Cajun Music: Hippy To-Yo Grand Isle 2/20/17 jbm
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