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#constructivecritism
If you cannot be bothered to sift through the **** You don't like, then there's no sympathy, not a bit, That you get as you announce such pompous airs, Declaring your work to be better than theirs, When clearly it's not, and your criticism fails, To amount to much more than an infants wails. O maybe, just maybe, if I saw you had written, Something worthwhile yourself then all would be forgiven, Talent aside, if you'd chosen to write Something constructive, instead of such trite, Then the words that you said on deaf ears wouldn't fall, But that's not the case so they're worth ****** all, So next time you see someone's work you don't like, Before you comment, here's a tip - learn to write.
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Dec 22, 2015
Dec 22, 2015 at 9:23 PM UTC
An Address To The Trolls