#constructive
People are selfish,
even the mother who tend her son to take care of her
Greed is inevitable,
just like the old guy who steals money for family
Honestly is cuts like cruelty,
which made women reject hopeful man due to her lover
Betrayal is part of nature,
in which young bird is fling out of nest to fly carelessly
But,
We protect bonds,
even the son tends his mother, who sacrificed her life for him
We still let go of dignity,
just like the old guy who was beaten for feeding his family
We still seek truth,
which made grown boy find someone to accept his love
We still realize the importance of action,
in which young seagull catch fish with his flight
Thus we still hope for tomorrow in which we will live
Sep 29, 2025
Sep 29, 2025 at 12:06 AM UTC
Why was I born with lesser love unlike those who were born with same flesh as me for which I sob
Why was I born, to be hated for something I can't control but for others it's like they are destined to loved for
The belief to be lived out of no obsession is gotten buried into tatrus which doesn't open for liars
The duck that seeked big wings to make him touch the sky is drowning in pond of deep despair in which he lo longer vow
The roach that helped other to cleanse their guilt is now killed for being filthy which till his last breath couldn't seem to know
The motherly earth which is full of unjust still believes in fakes smiles and hope for love and kindness that will everyone desire
I guess I will never know the unfair reason to for which I was born but one that is certain that child that had giggle of love now crys every time
Sep 25, 2025
Sep 25, 2025 at 11:27 AM UTC
Not against any good philosophy -
But religion is disgusting.
What's it yous worship anyway?
Superstition - nonsense.
Thinly veiled is your philosophy;
Dogma about me, me, me, me!
Proudly wearin' your mark of beasts.
This the symbol, crucifix;
Nailed up "our" "prophet," we did!
This is the ritual, wine & bread it is;
Cannibal feast of "blood & body."
This the symbolism, con𝘧𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯;
Reductionism from philosophies stolen.
This the comedy, tragedy;
Bastardizations from destruction & butcheries.
Like orphan children what livin' off charity;
What's me mother's name? Who's my daddy?
Eschewing everything
Cause you refuse to see, nor to hear.
You worship only yourselves;
This that your balderdash?
Nay. You are your own blasphemies!
There's your "divine" "comedy."
Joke's on you lot
For not just havin' "forgot,"
But for stealin'
And sayin' yous didn't.
Crimes enough
To fill sheets yous call scripture.
No such miracles
For those believers.
Those who worship, only worship nothing -
They will be outside of everything,
"Existing" as nothing.
Jul 29, 2025
Jul 29, 2025 at 11:55 AM UTC
Commoners' indignant?
Youth disinherited?
Ha. Nay.
Intellectuals disrespected.
Visionaries neglected.
Aye.
Yous who don't learn,
Refusin' to see eye-to-eye.
You slight genius, Truth.
Ay;
Afraid to even say hi -
Much less engage in honest, forthright conversation.
Rely on your superstitious,
Your hope is to pray
For ignorance like arrogance be your prey.
Lambs what be foul predators
Fat on the blood of their own ewes.
Singin',
"We know not what we do!
We know not what we do!"
Yet, you do so willfully.
Soon-to-be-nothings;
Absence, as nothingness, will be your eternity.
For the unworthy are rejected, universally.
Jul 29, 2025
Jul 29, 2025 at 11:46 AM UTC
In between the lines
There's the hint at some opinion
And not just pictures you hang crooked
On flimsy nails you drive.
I'd rather keep the vocabulary
Short & simple,
If there's more from it
Who might be reached
Or that might be derived.
I know you think you're something
Just as much as I,
I know I think you're something
Just as much as I.
If you can't see, you can have mine;
I've already given up on one eye.
If you can't sense it,
I can go on deprived.
To me it makes no difference,
I'm only trying to help.
Come what may, I'll survive.
Feb 13, 2025
Feb 13, 2025 at 2:27 AM UTC
One more tiny dot,
turned into a watery stack of light in the reading.
One more little lamp,
turns my entire life into sorrow.
Every lantern I pass whispers to me
to go to eternal rest.
Every figure reminds me
of the beginning of my own passing,
and I cannot wait for the end,
and the end may be so near.
Jan 11, 2025
Jan 11, 2025 at 3:31 PM UTC
constructive or destructive - criticism’s delicate balance
Oct 25, 2019
Oct 25, 2019 at 1:51 PM UTC
Oh, the critics,
When you use,
Your fleshy and sticky tongues,
Or,
When,
You scrawl your sharp pens,
To peel the skin,
Of your alleged offenders,
Then,
You look like a butcher,
Chopping and mincing the meat and bones,
Or you like a vulture,
Sipping the blood of a half-dead cattle,
Come shed your literary arrogance,
And wrap your forked tongue,
In a cozy shawl of praise,
And prove that,
To correct the torn skin,
A pair of surgeon’s scissors is needed,
And not a butcher’s knife,
For sure…….
Apr 3, 2018
Apr 3, 2018 at 3:11 PM UTC
Over a period of time difference of opinion leads to debate following which mutual understanding might take place.
Somewhere down the line,
something might click,
then signs of mutual understanding will be there in offing.
Mutual understanding will bring the much needed change,
a change that's desired,
since it also fulfills the need of hour.
If mutual understanding takes place, then nothing like that since it moves in the direction of drawing a line of conclusion, which is the only reason because of which the debate commenced.
If mutual understanding is still a viable option,
yet far away,
then it’s time to keep negotiation apart and away from been a part of the debate.
Finally difference of opinion can lead to something positive and healthy, if the debate that is ensued following a difference of opinion is in the right direction,
in right spirit,
focus remaining on point of concern,
substance with regards to what’s going on in mind is not disturbed in anyway,
most importantly the debate is held on proper grounds.
Difference of opinion is also a sign for something constructive, if the mind is determined to make sure that the odds which are going to come along the way will not only be handled and tackled, but also taken out and taken away from the way of getting things done.
Finally it’s difference of opinion that makes team work interesting, if it is taken in the right spirit at the given moment in time.
Oct 20, 2016
Oct 20, 2016 at 6:49 AM UTC
by Arcassin Burnham
make it out as a **********
then get reincarnated as lizard later on,
then feel a baby's laughter,
like a pack of silver tongues,
im not trying to be a *******
or cover up your losses,
I'm just trying to make you happy,
so you wouldn't have to envy,
but your constructive criticism,
makes it all worth while,
don't it?
putting all your shame on one person,
for a smile,
won't it?
backstabbing to the core,
makes you feel alive,
so you wanna have betrayal,
to come **** your pride,
your pathetic,
in a very technological way,
and if i look your way,
you better not say anything,
in return man i won't feel ashamed,
i would rather see you smile in my face.
Aug 18, 2014
Aug 18, 2014 at 11:49 PM UTC