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#concussion
Yesterday Anton got a concussion because of a mug Someone gave him and He was jumping in celebration And he banged his head on the top of the doorframe And tumbled to the floor Right in front of the school office It was caught on video by the security cameras At Monday night groups he was wearing blue reflective sunglasses The kind that make you search for his eyes but never quite find them He grabs my arm and is showing off his video footage If it was anyone else we would all feel sorry for him But all of us just laughed Because it’s Anton - And he got knocked out by a mug - On camera - It’s funny But he showed up at school this morning just to be sent home Because with a concussion You can’t do schoolwork You can’t look at bright lights Or hear loud noises Or be on your phone You just have to sit And rest And think about life Which sounds to me wonderful But to him terrible But not that bad 
Because, after all He has the mug And the video So it was totally worth it
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Nov 20, 2023
Nov 20, 2023 at 7:09 PM UTC
Concussed by a Mug
No One can see the tears in my eyes For I wear dark glasses No One knows my true demise For I feel my life is blowing ashes The driver behind me did not pay attention I doubt he thought how it would forever change my life The driver what was his intention I doubt he considered how it would wound my wife The headaches are pounding drums in my head The earaches screech like fingernails on a chalk board But maybe enough is said I will pray to the Lord For he will never understand He will never see me covered in ***** For he might believe he never really had a hand He will never see the pain as I hide in my closet
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Mar 6, 2021
Mar 6, 2021 at 11:15 PM UTC
Concussion Blues
Here I am I'll shut me down With a head slam I cannot frown I can't remember what you just said How can a concussion be so bad? Here I am I'll shut me down with a yes ma'am If I'm good enough Soon I'll be dead How can my concussions be so bad?
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Feb 10, 2020
Feb 10, 2020 at 5:09 PM UTC
Is It So Bad?
Year after year --at daylight savings-- he kept moving his clock backward, but never forward, until he wound-up in the wrong century. He then slept in masks, his dreams repeatedly disbanding and reforming, as if in someone else's show, but it was his hallucinating set-list, for sure. He lived at the call of the void, feeding off peppermint sticks and clusters of chokeberry, to help ease the pressure. One phantom summer, he read The Joy of Euthanasia from cover-to-cover, over and over, until he could recite death. He poured his heart into his new work as an artist of tacenda, --yes, he kept a lid on it. And when the pretty young bees buzzed about underneath their brazen parasols, he'd smile up at the sun for her complicit glow: the warmest days always drew them out to him, like honey on the tongue. Now naysayers may keep him out of Canton, but one day, like most serial killers, they will name a school after him and his hijinks.
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Nov 6, 2019
Nov 6, 2019 at 2:21 PM UTC
****** Time Traveler (or) How He Spent His Days After Retiring From the NFL
Writing through water Thinking through dirt. Brain, getting fuzzy. really? don’t lie. Study? I cannot. Make me do it! Please, make me do it.. Me, I, seeks help. I can’t think the same, I’m not the same. Homework, tall brick wall, Sports, I can do, Essay, felt the tear, I want to scream, But I feel nothing. It’s not a thing Yet, but hopefully Soon, I won’t fail. But I will fall down And never get up.
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Jan 27, 2019
Jan 27, 2019 at 12:19 AM UTC
They Say It’s Not A Thing... Yet
My countenance made love with the harsh earth she left me bruised confused and bloodied with a couple days plucked out of my memory thank whoever is above for the few buddies that pulled me to the corner with a flashlight bag of cold ice shoulder rubs and words of advice I got back in the ring ready for to resume the fight I learned that night that you can't beat Gaia but that you could endure a few rounds. Just kidding, I was knocked out during the first round.
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Oct 8, 2018
Oct 8, 2018 at 1:35 PM UTC
Bachelor Party
The drums' pounding sounds echo deep in my chest rattling my rib cage a new heart beat is found. I surge with the crowd dealing with the push and pull like it was the ocean. Well we were on Ocean Avenue So it sort of was. People are being held above the surging waters like boats floating on treacherous seas. One boat emerges from the depths behind me One that I did not see. The next thing I knew the head of the boat had hit me connecting with the back of my head. I turned around quickly and pushed the boat along, but by then the damage was already done. I sang and danced to every song Unaware until later of my new concussion.
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Aug 5, 2018
Aug 5, 2018 at 4:39 PM UTC
Concussion 2.0
I think it’s happening again I really hope that I’m wrong that I’m making it up that it’s all in my, head.   I know where this road leads and it’s called depression    From there, it’s my restriction with Ana     I’m already freaking out. I don’t want to      Go back down this road but it looks to be my only path        I just feel like I’m f                                          a                                             l                                               l                                                 i                                                   n                                                      g apart.
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Jul 11, 2018
Jul 11, 2018 at 8:37 AM UTC
Second time around
My outlet is gone, I feel as though I am a wounded animal that lashes out at the wrong people. I’m not sure what I’m doing, but I cling, I cling like a leaf does in the fall waiting to change. Only to be ripped away and carried by the wind to a place I know not. Or maybe I am the tree clingy to the leaves because once I lose them I will have nothing left. Lonely. No more leaves. No more trees. Just a girl. Lost. Stumbling through the confusion that is life. Perpetually tired and sick of this mess I call home. Over and over and over again this happens. Every fall the leaves are a sight to see. But every time they leave the tree, on to bigger and better things.
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May 29, 2018
May 29, 2018 at 3:53 PM UTC
Concussion
*It's been going on three years now, It gets worse and I talk about it less. Three years of swimming upstream In a river of cognitive stress. I don't recall what it's like To feel rested after a restful night. I don't remember not feeling high Simply because all of the lights are too bright. Friends presume that all is well But it hinders me every day. It is a dim room with stagnant air. Grey clouds that never change. I can't keep up anymore, It's far too much of a strain, Ever since the incident long ago That bludgeoned and blunted my brain. I trudge through every day Shoes weighted with lead. It feels like a dream Because it's all in my head.*
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Aug 12, 2016
Aug 12, 2016 at 6:58 PM UTC
Post Concussion Syndrome
Jotting everything down Lists and dates NAMES Names names... I know your faces But I can't remember Adding to my confusion Forgetting simple things In my daily routine Question marks Screen my thoughts   What was I doing? I ask myself Entering a room Where am I going with this What was my point Oh ya!! I FORGOT Jl 2016
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Mar 22, 2016
Mar 22, 2016 at 9:25 PM UTC
Memory Loss
My temples pummel out A throbbing skull Drumming on my edges Cracked bruises Hidden underneath my hair No one sees my pain Feeling dismissed by perceived delusions Neglect brings forth intensified loneliness A mystery unable to solve Potential brain damage Resting in purgatory Along the coastline of denial Where I appear all right Until another concussion Drags me to this tide Wanting to end my life As I drown to the chilly depth Wondering why my husband Hasn't thrown me a life jacket He tires of my imperfections As do I…. Severity thrown under The boat of exaggeration No one understands my head's sensitivity Not even me The judgements of being weak Of not being careful Arguments against enjoying life I am brought to a surplus of cries Aching sobs swim In my damaged head I'm confused and lines are blurred I'm scared and can't remember Noises storm Inside my ears transmitting corruption Comatose movements Ambushed by swelling spastic vibrations Blinding light Striking serrated razors between my eyes Weighted head Seeks detachment from its guardian How I wish people saw this concussion for what it is © Jl 2016
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Feb 26, 2016
Feb 26, 2016 at 1:46 PM UTC
Concussion
▪●☆●▪ Swirls of verbiage begin to settle. My wish.. that they land to connect a thought. Overflowing as grapes cascading atop sides of vessel butter cup yellow. Fruit of the darkest purple persuasion. I have visions. Ribbons of colour. Movements of flutter Wet paint on pallette, waiting for a canvas to present itself.  Shambolic as to how to put it all together. Can almost sense the fit, yet unable to develop the arrangement. The words,  the vision the pigments are there, on the tip of my mind. I wonder if, in the event it all came spilling out, I would be brave enough to reveal. Begin to heal. If my canvas of words and colors could describe. Maybe then, it would all melt together, becoming the black of all colors, the no color... allowing me to begin anew. ▪○☆○▪ Copyright © 2016. Christi Michaels. All Rights Reserved
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Jan 28, 2016
Jan 28, 2016 at 4:25 PM UTC
Verbiage and Visions
~\|♧■⊙~ **My brain is scrambled A puzzle, missing pieces... Oh look! I found one** •|>♧《● Copyright © 2015 Christi Michaels. All Rights Reserved.
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Oct 7, 2015
Oct 7, 2015 at 7:10 PM UTC
Senryu {#18}
I was in a car accident in September. I suffered a severe concussion. Though my body is rattled and bruised, I believe will heal fine. I am getting extensive therapy and treatment. My brain on the other hand is having a bit more difficulty pulling it together. Words don't line up, thoughts are confused jumbles of messy patterns that don't make sense sometimes. This is very scary to me. As I write everything on my tablet or my android phone, looking at the screen hurts my eyes and my brain. I am very sad as of late. Have been crying (more than usual). Head hurts all the time. Getting lost a lot, like when I drive etc etc etc. Writing backwards. Everything written, looks like it is at a slant (yuck). And I have developed a Very significant,   interesting stutter. Fascinating really... All I want to do is sleep... (which I have become very good at) and to be held... (just isn't in the mix right now). I may try reposting some of my old work at this time, until I'm better. I will do my best to check in on the Dailies.  I need to stay away from reading and commenting. : ((  : ((  : ((   At least for now. I am Sure, I Will Get Better!!! ☆●♡♢♡●☆ I need you all to know how much I've come to Love and Appreciate my HP Family. One of the best gifts I have given Myself. Also, I am trying to join Kalypso and Gang with Our collection of Poems on Sound Cloud. If I can ever figure it out ♡ Peace and Love ♡ ▪○●☆♡♢♡☆●○▪ Christi~ MoonFlower~ Fluer de Luna
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Oct 3, 2015
Oct 3, 2015 at 3:09 PM UTC
Dear HP Family (Not a Poem)
I was in a car accident in September. I suffered a severe concussion. Though my body is rattled and bruised, I believe will heal fine. I am getting extensive therapy and treatment. My brain on the other hand is having a bit more difficulty pulling it together. Words don't line up, thoughts are confused jumbles of messy patterns that don't make sense sometimes. This is very scary to me. As I write everything on my tablet or my android phone, looking at the screen hurts my eyes and my brain. I am very sad as of late. Have been crying (more than usual). Head hurts all the time. Getting lost a lot, like when I drive etc etc etc. Writing backwards. Everything written, looks like it is at a slant (yuck). And I have developed a Very significant,   interesting stutter. Fascinating really... All I want to do is sleep... (which I have become very good at) and to be held... (just isn't in the mix right now). I may try reposting some of my old work at this time, until I'm better. I will do my best to check in on the Dailies.  I need to stay away from reading and commenting. : ((  : ((  : ((   At least for now. I am Sure, I Will Get Better!!! ☆●♡♢♡●☆ I need you all to know how much I've come to Love and Appreciate my HP Family. One of the best gifts I have given Myself. Also, I am trying to join Kalypso and Gang with Our collection of Poems on Sound Cloud. If I can ever figure it out ♡ Peace and Love ♡ ▪○●☆♡♢♡☆●○▪ Christi~ MoonFlower~ Fluer de Luna
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With narrowed eyes I glare out the window Ridiculed by the harsh beams of light that glare back at me. My ankles fidget Shoulders lean forward to see the unknowing plane fly innocently overhead and my bike leaning unforgotten against the rotting fence. I stumble back Spinning In a whirring machine that screeches and shudders and thumps on the door Can I come in? Worried eyes flit my way Take it easy Like a fragile possession Teetering on the edge Crowds gather to catch My faults With walls binding me I take comfort in darkness It soothes my body and warms my tears but nourishes my fears
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Aug 4, 2014
Aug 4, 2014 at 12:34 AM UTC
Concussion
6 months 23 different treatments 15 different medicines nothing, nada, nope, no results. The pain in my head is not one I'd ever wish on anyone, not even my worst enemy. A migraine every second of every day even while sleeping is something no one should endure I dream about headaches... is that weird? ouch. agh. ugh. it's been 6 months, non-stop of people saying: "time is the best medicine" "don't lose hope" "you're young, young minds heal fast." but my favorite: "Laila, I promise, you'll be better in a week" Well doc, it's been 23 weeks, what's up? honestly, it's now a joking matter. one of which I laugh with my friends about I laugh at the fact that I don't remember 95% of the last 6 months Not because I find it humorous but because I've been given 23 different "Laila, I'm telling you this "insert treatment here" will work! It works for 99% of the people that do it." I am the 1% ha. actually, I'm in the .25% of teens still experiencing concussion- related symptoms after 6 months of the hit. Yay for minorities! and now, get this, my treatment after spending thousands on hyperbaric chambers, freaky boulderite "healing gods", gag-worthy chinese herbs is yoga.
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Apr 10, 2014
Apr 10, 2014 at 11:31 AM UTC
I am the .25%