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The path does not go as we thought, we're getting lost -- in compromises.
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Mar 29
Mar 29, 2026 at 3:33 AM UTC
The path does not go
The journey started from me looking for a partner loyal, family oriented, committed, knowledgeable and sort of an ideal ma quite opposite to him but now looking back, it strikes me major things in ife are sense of humor, fun, friends, understanding, someone who aspires to be better each day, and now it just makes me sick that none of this is there I feel am stuck in walls surrounded with heavy silence, no laughter and smiles, orthodox mindset, traditional setup, no way to improve on yourself I don't understand why this world has defined how a daughter in law should be What should she wear How should she talk When should she wake up What should she eat And most important of all In the mindset of the Indian Society she shouldn't leave the house at all this is what i am facing i feel that it is sin to speak up your mind when i was always taught the opposite i feel in the scenario like this it is sin to be who you are and I have always followed the opposite I am expected to change myself because apparently i dont fall under the definition of ideal "bahu" And Why marriage comes with so many compromises on adjustments and as far as i am understanding girls here are expected to adjust in the family why??? are we not human beings Why we are not allowed to dream Why we are not allowed to speak up against the wrong happening to them Why we are just expected to be silent and say nothing I dont know who will survive this this is getting difficult each day i feel somebody has caged me in an apartment luring me with open windows that there is a world outside but no you are not allowed to leave as per your wishes I feel somebody has caged me in a room you are not allowed to keep open because thats not the way it should be, apparently doesnt fall under their list of ideal bahu I feel somebody has caged me in a place you are not allowed to wear eat breathe sit stand as per your wishes I know all this can be easy but not for a person like me whose basis of survival is the word "Freedom" Freedom to eat sleep talk act roam listen sit stand wherever and whenever as per her heart The world here is expecting her to just give up on herself totally. but then what they are getting in return?? what happiness they will get in return where will this take them ?? Nowhere!!! they will be left with a person who is lifeless and colorless Nobody to hear me screaming Nobody to see me drowning This is affecting my inner soul but who is bothered?? noone!!! because now that i am married , i am their asset and no am not allowed to live my life as per my wishes Because "Bahu" is expected to make compromises and adjustments each day.
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Aug 8, 2021
Aug 8, 2021 at 2:27 AM UTC
what went wrong
The journey started from me looking for a partner loyal, family oriented, committed, knowledgeable and sort of an ideal ma quite opposite to him but now looking back, it strikes me major things in ife are sense of humor, fun, friends, understanding, someone who aspires to be better each day, and now it just makes me sick that none of this is there I feel am stuck in walls surrounded with heavy silence, no laughter and smiles, orthodox mindset, traditional setup, no way to improve on yourself I don't understand why this world has defined how a daughter in law should be What should she wear How should she talk When should she wake up What should she eat And most important of all In the mindset of the Indian Society she shouldn't leave the house at all this is what i am facing i feel that it is sin to speak up your mind when i was always taught the opposite i feel in the scenario like this it is sin to be who you are and I have always followed the opposite I am expected to change myself because apparently i dont fall under the definition of ideal "bahu" And Why marriage comes with so many compromises on adjustments and as far as i am understanding girls here are expected to adjust in the family why??? are we not human beings Why we are not allowed to dream Why we are not allowed to speak up against the wrong happening to them Why we are just expected to be silent and say nothing I dont know who will survive this this is getting difficult each day i feel somebody has caged me in an apartment luring me with open windows that there is a world outside but no you are not allowed to leave as per your wishes I feel somebody has caged me in a room you are not allowed to keep open because thats not the way it should be, apparently doesnt fall under their list of ideal bahu I feel somebody has caged me in a place you are not allowed to wear eat breathe sit stand as per your wishes I know all this can be easy but not for a person like me whose basis of survival is the word "Freedom" Freedom to eat sleep talk act roam listen sit stand wherever and whenever as per her heart The world here is expecting her to just give up on herself totally. but then what they are getting in return?? what happiness they will get in return where will this take them ?? Nowhere!!! they will be left with a person who is lifeless and colorless Nobody to hear me screaming Nobody to see me drowning This is affecting my inner soul but who is bothered?? noone!!! because now that i am married , i am their asset and no am not allowed to live my life as per my wishes Because "Bahu" is expected to make compromises and adjustments each day.
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The state of smoothness and rhythmic flow The vibe of calmness and dimly glow The sight of pleasantness and majestic show The terrifying sound and unfinished piece Is what it is, the feeling, the unsatisfaction Even in poetry without no understanding of rhyme and flow Is when I realized It is life and how it is That I will never be fully understood That I have to live, me and my own mood Trying to make some senses From my own little lenses Where I try to create paradise Making the unfinished terrifying piece A melodic heavenly harmony Soothing to my only ear for my own understanding That I live this life without any compromises.
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Oct 11, 2019
Oct 11, 2019 at 6:34 AM UTC
A life without compromises
Think... Till now how the life was, What we have had in our life Fake dreams, false promises, All in a same word.                                                            "compromise" we don't get what we think But we get a sub, There we start compromising. We have a dream But parents dream compromises us. We select our way But the way others tell compromises us We select our interest But "we don't get"  compromises us. Everytime, We plan something , But a new plan compromises us. If we leave "compromises" to compromise Us every time, Then we may lose our originality Be original Think induvidually Speak out...                              Karthik balaji
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May 9, 2017
May 9, 2017 at 4:38 AM UTC
Compromises
It is not that I do not love you It is not that I do not respect you It is not that I have made wrong choices It is not that you do not matter to me It is not that I must always be isolated It is not my "imaginary friends" and "voices" It is that you are way to demanding of me, I have lost a lot of My most precious dreams, and am only running on empty. Sorry if this isn't an excuse to you, but you're not me, "Ones trash is another ones treasure..." or something Silly like that, thanks to your endless hustling at this time, There is no telling when I'll ever be free...
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Jan 20, 2016
Jan 20, 2016 at 2:14 AM UTC
My "Failures" And You