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What if I never get better? I can't beat the fear, I never get Noah's letters What if I'm not the exception? I'm just the rule, ever gullible to affectionate deception What if the damage is forever? We can't re-fall in love, our connection eternally severed What if I'm only worth 49 first dates? You wake up on the 50th and decide this life you hate What if I'm a Heather? Exploding with you without knowing any better What if I don't make it out of the car? Just wasted potential, never getting very far What if I'm a bet you made with your friends? 10 days- I'm in love and your joke's end And if I'm the bridesmaid, never the bride? I catch the bouquet- staring at you swallowing my pride
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Jun 9, 2025
Jun 9, 2025 at 3:58 AM UTC
I Blame the 2000's
What does Snow White see, When she looks in the mirror? Does she like what she sees, freely? Or does she, like me, look With dismay, and say,  "Oh, my skin is not as white, As yesterday, I won't go out and play Today, I will stay in and away, Because people will say 'she's not so fair'." It's not fair that weight of expectation, and the wait for ultimate perfection.
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Nov 23, 2024
Nov 23, 2024 at 7:20 PM UTC
I wonder what Snow White sees when she looks in the mirror?
Comparing is... Having your eyes blinded to The reality of who you are, Really. Reality is stark; it holds no glamour, but A life well lived holds the tensions of Reality. Hand-in-hand the joy in the pain, The reality that this is life, This is what we’ve been called to live; Loneliness in the ordinary, Joy in the pain of the everyday. This is life.
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Oct 14, 2024
Oct 14, 2024 at 4:16 PM UTC
Comparing is...
I'm sure the phenomenon is Far wider-spread than At any other time throughout history. The want to have been born, Decades or years before, And I think it's easily attributable. Inundated with knowledge It is hard to come to some consensus Among peers, Likewise it is difficult To be in a situation you'd rather not Able not only to conceive But receive, every scenario you could think of. Many of which would be the least bit better than the reality currently ascribed
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May 18, 2024
May 18, 2024 at 7:20 PM UTC
Holding Down
Critics collude in cliques to keep themselves safe from reality. "Truth is subjective!" they say, diluting its potency and dilating its delusions; But grounded, truth becomes a platform on which to kick critics to the curb, To taste the dirt of their terse tunes.
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Jan 9, 2024
Jan 9, 2024 at 9:21 PM UTC
Kicking Critics to the Curb!
~ *Or migrated pod        Or fleeing refugee             Or corban                   Or carbon dioxide                        Or yubitsume                             Or van Gogh's ear                                  Or black Friday                                       Or lazy evening at the carnival                     (Tomorrow has already started) Or free range      Or gated community           Or breast exam                Or storage crisis                     Or fallen leaves                          Or germ warfare                               Or temporary file                                    Or permanent wave                                         Or thigh gap                                              Or physiognomy                                                   Or soap made of heroes                                                        Or multiplanetary living                                                      (There's a floating graveyard between this world and the next) Or logical fallacy      Or irrational number           Or elementary analysis                Or college guess                     Or cardiopulmonary resuscitation                          Or extrasensory perception                               Or ten fingers and toes                                    Or a dozen eggs                   (They say there's strength in numbers) Or fifth floor, corner room      Or high as a kite           Or bellwether                Or mingled with bells                     Or police sirens                          Or loitering around in silent films                               Or rule of thirds                                    Or tombs of second-hand kings                                         Or face in the rain                                              Or pareidolia (Otherwise, at first light you might be smiling...)* ~
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Nov 19, 2023
Nov 19, 2023 at 9:11 AM UTC
Otherwise
~ *Or migrated pod        Or fleeing refugee             Or corban                   Or carbon dioxide                        Or yubitsume                             Or van Gogh's ear                                  Or black Friday                                       Or lazy evening at the carnival                     (Tomorrow has already started) Or free range      Or gated community           Or breast exam                Or storage crisis                     Or fallen leaves                          Or germ warfare                               Or temporary file                                    Or permanent wave                                         Or thigh gap                                              Or physiognomy                                                   Or soap made of heroes                                                        Or multiplanetary living                                                      (There's a floating graveyard between this world and the next) Or logical fallacy      Or irrational number           Or elementary analysis                Or college guess                     Or cardiopulmonary resuscitation                          Or extrasensory perception                               Or ten fingers and toes                                    Or a dozen eggs                   (They say there's strength in numbers) Or fifth floor, corner room      Or high as a kite           Or bellwether                Or mingled with bells                     Or police sirens                          Or loitering around in silent films                               Or rule of thirds                                    Or tombs of second-hand kings                                         Or face in the rain                                              Or pareidolia (Otherwise, at first light you might be smiling...)* ~
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I awaken in darkness still terrified and running from the mountain lion. But what if I’m the prey of my own judging captive of my comparisons? At times I feel those verdicts in my gut like when I can’t concentrate on a task I SHOULD be doing. When I notice my tight gut and my mind wanting to flee I can stop trying and lying to myself set my imagination free roam a wilderness I choose like right here on the flat and fertile plains of this poem’s lines.
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Sep 21, 2021
Sep 21, 2021 at 2:15 PM UTC
Wilderness Dreams
I would rather have integrity than popularity I would rather be alone but be kind I would rather be poor than have money made from crime I would rather know a bitter truth than live a life of lies I would rather have one true friend than a group that can't be genuine I would rather die at twenty one if that short life was filled with love I would rather be shot than use a gun against another I would rather be female just to prove we have it harder I would rather have integrity than popularity I would rather live in my fantasy than in your reality
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May 31, 2021
May 31, 2021 at 3:02 AM UTC
Integrity vs. Popularity
I'm ok With one colour Why rainbows try to flatter I'm ok In dark Why sparks need to remark It's not ok.
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Aug 29, 2020
Aug 29, 2020 at 2:08 AM UTC
I'm ok
Loving you is like eating pistachios, I can't stop once I have started!
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Aug 5, 2020
Aug 5, 2020 at 10:51 AM UTC
Loving you
and you question, "how does she do it!" - these golden girls are mighty pretty. but darling don't exclude yourself, haven't you known that the elements are elementary? now go upstairs and mine in your room.
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Jun 12, 2020
Jun 12, 2020 at 1:16 AM UTC
golden girls
Get to the Market Some people take the back road Others use the highway Some arrive early Some arrive late Get the market We all follow our own way No persuasion No need to jump a red light A river will flow where it flows Carve its own way Get to the market Some exhilarate Others doddle along the way Walk or run You will arrive when you get there Get to the market
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May 6, 2019
May 6, 2019 at 5:41 AM UTC
Get to the Market
Melancholy waves crash upon my shore At the thought of not seeing your crooked smile Hearing your laugh Watching your soulful eyes: And I'm drowning Head bobbing just above the water Heart racing Reaching blindly Treading water, Eventually sinking into you Its funny how drowning and falling In love are so similar; ask my waterlogged heart, and it'd say they're the same.
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Mar 13, 2019
Mar 13, 2019 at 1:02 AM UTC
Comparisons
you can't expect your flowers to bloom if you don't water your own garden
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Feb 21, 2019
Feb 21, 2019 at 2:43 PM UTC
bloom
Some people: "be kind to yourself." Me: "get to work, *****
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Nov 3, 2018
Nov 3, 2018 at 6:09 PM UTC
More comparisons
I  don’t mean to compare, Past and the present, It’s just a game I play, What-ifs of my existence, I have a vivid imagination. I am sans the thoughts, That makes it appropriate, The wordplay, I indulge in, I am sans the guilt, Of the aftermath it brings. Many are held captive , More are repulsed, The gears in action, Churning, burning ,moving, I keep going on. I don’t mean hurt, I see, you are enraged now, It’s where I stop the play, It’s not a test or measure, These are just stories, So hear me now .
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Nov 3, 2018
Nov 3, 2018 at 10:53 PM UTC
Stories of the past
i am not the night sky although we are similar in the fact that i am not always clear and i don't always look as pretty in pictures this is for one simple reason i am human and i cannot be compared to an object even as complex as the sky, i am by far more complex than it could ever be i feel things and i think through things i try new things and sometimes i change how i look i add variety in my life and nothing can change that fact so to compare a human, like myself, is so abnormal because how could something so simple ever compare to the vastness that a human holds it shouldn't be spoken of or let alone be thought of but it is because we as a species are constantly trying to find ourselves in things whether they be other humans or something as simple as the night sky we always wish to see bits of ourselves and feel a connection with this bit of information should shine light on a fact we should be able to find security within ourselves but it is rather difficult when society and other people try to push the idea that we will see ourselves in something because that is not always the case and to try to make ourselves seem so simple is so absolutely absurd because what makes us human is our expansive ability to be unique to be incomparable is what it means to be human
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Jun 11, 2018
Jun 11, 2018 at 4:04 PM UTC
nothing can be compared to the vastness of a human
I love you more in my memory than in reality
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Nov 18, 2017
Nov 18, 2017 at 4:42 AM UTC
vague
fresh and printed new as the glistening morn dew tis a lovely view old and so well worn as the near dead cobs of corn tis a sight forlorn
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Nov 7, 2017
Nov 7, 2017 at 6:01 PM UTC
Haiku
Poetry is, as poetry flows Beneath the rocks, through undertows Over great mountains, across oceans deep Dwells within dreams, while dreamer's asleep As poison to pen, heaven can wait Driving the path, for creativity sake Don't judge yourself, of what you read here Create your own space, and abandon, all fear
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Dec 28, 2016
Dec 28, 2016 at 7:29 AM UTC
Keeping the faith, of oneself
It's crazy what can happen in a day; in an hour; in a moment; in the blink of an eye. One minute you're fine, the next you're in utter chaos. One minute you're complete, the next you're empty. All in a matter of seconds the sky can go from being bright and clear to being grey and disastrous and the same can be said about people. You never know when a storm cloud is going to strike until it's too late and you're stuck in the rain without an umbrella.
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May 7, 2016
May 7, 2016 at 11:50 AM UTC
Comparisons: People vs. Storms
you're a mountain high and mighty doesn't bow doesn't bend you're the sky vast and wide no beginning and no end you're an ocean calm and stormy all consuming ever rising you're a forest green and wild pure enchantment ever growing you're a mine gems and gold you are mine rare and precious
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Aug 17, 2015
Aug 17, 2015 at 7:52 AM UTC
you are
caught in little fishing hooks pierced ears gone awry its scales scrubbed viciously from flesh hacked open gory madness soaking into the oak table not very hygienic not much of anything congealing, drying still wet enough that to touch it would be to spoil everything (makes such pretty colors in the wood)
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Jul 2, 2015
Jul 2, 2015 at 8:10 PM UTC
where did all of my creativity go?