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#commuting
A diuretic’s the best juice To glug before those long commutes. If coffee makes you *** That is a paltry fee For the elation it’s produced.
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Dec 3, 2024
Dec 3, 2024 at 4:52 PM UTC
Urgency
Everyone’s the same on the bus Yes everyone’s the same on the bus Rich or poor either or everyone’s the same on the bus The bus is not about character one could be brave or one could be meek nor is it about where you’re headed and if you’re going to shout or to sneak and if it isn’t about where you’re headed then it isn’t about where you’ve been and it isn’t about what you’ve done and it isn’t about what you’ve seen Everyone’s the same on the bus Yes everyone’s the same on the bus Weak and tough Posh and rough Everyone’s the same on the bus On the bus none of it matters a man could be in sickness or in health on the bus he is simply going from one place To somewhere else
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May 27, 2024
May 27, 2024 at 9:02 AM UTC
The Bus
A fat ***** Sitting in the seat, in the row in front of me. His suitcase takes up another seat, left across from me. This **** takes up four seats and it’s too much wasted space. There’s so much space in the classroom, I made myself quite the spectacle when I walked out Ran into the teacher right behind the door, waiting To see if the screening went well. I’d seen it three weeks ago, I told him so. Made myself quite popular in one go. Seems like it is my ego, (but the truth is, I really don’t know) That prevents others from sitting close, It’s fine, I don’t talk to them, I couldn’t stand to. Less than thirty minutes till Hoorn A few more hours until bed, And then all of the routine can start again, I dream of a future, but when I’m awake I’d rather not be a part of it. Don’t want to participate. I have nothing useful left in me, There’s nothing I could say, That would sway/ persuade the world To turn the other way. I’m no earthquake, no rain or thunder Lightning strikes me, not I the sky, And it’s in the dark that I cry. Days have grown shorter, Nights longer, And the sun doesn’t set early yet. There’s ten of me Sitting down on my chest Steamrolling down my back And flattening me into the grains Of the ordinary, common experience. (Perhaps I’d like that best) In the wee hours of the morning I close my eyes and plan and plot I stew until I’m blue in the face And I’m itching to leave this place, It’s then that the cuts and ropes The drownings and falling downs Lull me to sleep, and I breathe out Sweet death, and when I wake again, I live and take another breath.
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Sep 14, 2021
Sep 14, 2021 at 4:49 AM UTC
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A fat ***** Sitting in the seat, in the row in front of me. His suitcase takes up another seat, left across from me. This **** takes up four seats and it’s too much wasted space. There’s so much space in the classroom, I made myself quite the spectacle when I walked out Ran into the teacher right behind the door, waiting To see if the screening went well. I’d seen it three weeks ago, I told him so. Made myself quite popular in one go. Seems like it is my ego, (but the truth is, I really don’t know) That prevents others from sitting close, It’s fine, I don’t talk to them, I couldn’t stand to. Less than thirty minutes till Hoorn A few more hours until bed, And then all of the routine can start again, I dream of a future, but when I’m awake I’d rather not be a part of it. Don’t want to participate. I have nothing useful left in me, There’s nothing I could say, That would sway/ persuade the world To turn the other way. I’m no earthquake, no rain or thunder Lightning strikes me, not I the sky, And it’s in the dark that I cry. Days have grown shorter, Nights longer, And the sun doesn’t set early yet. There’s ten of me Sitting down on my chest Steamrolling down my back And flattening me into the grains Of the ordinary, common experience. (Perhaps I’d like that best) In the wee hours of the morning I close my eyes and plan and plot I stew until I’m blue in the face And I’m itching to leave this place, It’s then that the cuts and ropes The drownings and falling downs Lull me to sleep, and I breathe out Sweet death, and when I wake again, I live and take another breath.
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You are reading "If On a Winter's Day a Traveller", perhaps online, or on your phone, during your commute. The train, the bus, the streetcar is quite crowded, jostling and rattling around as you get your head into the poem. What lies ahead? The curve of road or track leads on to darkness, mystery, confused deep tunnels, full of dusty lights, or intersections where the traffic snarls into a knot. There's no way out but forward, so you go, in time. The screen is dark, you've been distracted, and now the poem is done.
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Jan 24, 2020
Jan 24, 2020 at 12:20 AM UTC
If On a Winter's Day a Traveller
narrow spaces unidentified faces
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Sep 18, 2019
Sep 18, 2019 at 6:18 PM UTC
commuting
Just a minute left before I should pinball out of my building doors and speed over past the new high riser, gust of wind pushing against my little body, tiny amongst these buildings going up. My eyes switch between the time and the streets, My feet fall soft and I’m safe. The trains not here yet and then it is, and then I sit and I rip my book out of my lunch bag, ticket tucked under my bookmark In case the conductor don’t see me I’ve been reading about the golden state killer. Rye’s a five minute warning and then I’m speeding out of another door down the stairs past the elderly, across one of the many ****** Port Chester streets difficult to cross but I’m walking my legs dart fast past the head shop and the bread shop and my nose is filled with sweet and sour. I walk faster- avoiding the CEO he rides the same train and I don’t want to talk. So I march forward and don’t look back. I get closer and mentally flip off the line of five short men catcalling me in Spanish, all the while peeking in to the brisa marina window to see if there’s anything my herbivorous mouth could swallow, but i don’t break my stride. They’re practically a butcher anyway. I climb the stairs to the entrance, stepping beyond the dead baby bird carcass I was hoping some other animal would consume yesterday and the avocado shell that would have been good to bury it with. I try to shake the thought of impending doom as I swipe myself in Still going as fast as i can so that I don’t have to hold the door open for the CEO Call me petty, but I do enough of his bidding on a day to day And I ascend to age 5 years for 10 hours. And then I run home just to do it all over again the next morning.
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May 17, 2019
May 17, 2019 at 11:15 PM UTC
come mute
Just a minute left before I should pinball out of my building doors and speed over past the new high riser, gust of wind pushing against my little body, tiny amongst these buildings going up. My eyes switch between the time and the streets, My feet fall soft and I’m safe. The trains not here yet and then it is, and then I sit and I rip my book out of my lunch bag, ticket tucked under my bookmark In case the conductor don’t see me I’ve been reading about the golden state killer. Rye’s a five minute warning and then I’m speeding out of another door down the stairs past the elderly, across one of the many ****** Port Chester streets difficult to cross but I’m walking my legs dart fast past the head shop and the bread shop and my nose is filled with sweet and sour. I walk faster- avoiding the CEO he rides the same train and I don’t want to talk. So I march forward and don’t look back. I get closer and mentally flip off the line of five short men catcalling me in Spanish, all the while peeking in to the brisa marina window to see if there’s anything my herbivorous mouth could swallow, but i don’t break my stride. They’re practically a butcher anyway. I climb the stairs to the entrance, stepping beyond the dead baby bird carcass I was hoping some other animal would consume yesterday and the avocado shell that would have been good to bury it with. I try to shake the thought of impending doom as I swipe myself in Still going as fast as i can so that I don’t have to hold the door open for the CEO Call me petty, but I do enough of his bidding on a day to day And I ascend to age 5 years for 10 hours. And then I run home just to do it all over again the next morning.
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Dust motes and sweat stains Faded graffiti over rusted steel plates Advertising everything, from politicians to a massage parlor, The engine roars disgruntled, in smoky rancor. I stepped on your feet, said I was sorry Tell me mister, could you tell I was lying? Pushing through the rush-hour crowd I finally found my footing and was proud. Well, there’s something to be said for low expectations A word of praise for cranky co-passengers. Not that the polite ones aren’t fun, When they smile and roll their eyes like they’re so done. And it’s not that I’d ever expect sincerity, At 10 on a rainy Tuesday morning I’m not a nihilist, or even much of a cynic by default But at 10am, I take nice with a bucket of salt.   I put on my headphones, crank the volume up to max, Sway to the shrill screeching of pirated tracks I’m sorry, did you say something? I can’t really tell. It’s not you’re uninteresting, it’s just that this song is swell. And maybe I could’ve made more of an effort Gotten to know your name, exchanged toffees and emotional support Maybe you’d have told me your story, if my ears were free Maybe we could’ve found something worth a keep. But you see, mister, it’s not you it’s me At 10 on a Tuesday morning, I’m not the best company. I hope, tomorrow, you’ll find a co-passenger worth your time, As for me, facelessness suits me just fine.
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Sep 12, 2018
Sep 12, 2018 at 5:47 AM UTC
To the Faceless Co-Passenger on a Crowded Public Bus
Avoiding the eyes, the arms and legs the charity seller eagerly awaiting I look about but all I see is a sea of bodies polluting the streets, the skies, their minds move on making noise, make less noise fill the silence take a breath of air, all the way down take a pause there's time no need to rush around pounding the chewing gum streets The grime of life is on your skin now embedded in the layers of filth the coffee stains and late night bars the early starts and frown lines of life are on your face now that's life now make change and waves in the noise that was your life where silence pounds the chewing gum streets of your mind.
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May 31, 2018
May 31, 2018 at 5:55 AM UTC
Breath
This travel refreshes the eyes Even if it is the same view Day in and night out Doesn't take away its beauty A journey marked by swans That runs seaside then turns riverside and adjourns right side See, it's a journey burned behind my eyes It is between the swans that I can think And not think This is my safe house and I'm a habitual criminal Stowing away in this liminal place Taking a rest from being arrested for too much stress I will never tire of these travels Each sunrise and full moon Falling that little bit more in love Pupils dilating as the eyes refresh
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May 17, 2017
May 17, 2017 at 8:18 AM UTC
Refreshed Eyes
Standing in the tunnel at Eighth and Pine station, I survey westbound commuters waiting across the tracks  - standing arms akimbo or leaning on marble walls. A well-suited young man paces the platform - cell phone pressed to his cheek.     [Passengers stand clear of the     edge of the platform at all times] Rushing in from the east, a gleaming white chariot arrives - pauses - resumes leaving the far platform vacated as if by alien abduction From the left a blazing light pierces the  tunnel and the Shiloh – Scott eastbound halts and snaps open its doors. crossing the threshold., I claim a seat by the aisle.     [Please stand clear! Doors are closing] With eyes half shut I scan the crowd: uniformed workers wearing ID's,   a toddler’s arms and legs dangling off his mother's lap, An elderly couple talking softly. The soft clatter of wheels and the gentle side-to-side sway rocks us like a cradle - memories of the long day melting into thoughts of home.     [Fairview Heights Station.     Doors open to my right] The lady with the toddler steps off. A trio of teenage girls fresh from the mall seek and find empty seats - filling the rear of the car with the music of their chatter. Streetlamps scatter shadows over parking lots. The unseen country side slips by under cover of darkness. Headlights gleam like jewels waiting for crossing gates to lift     [Next stop Belleville Station     Doors open to my left] I clutch my lap top, work my way to the door and wait for the train’s full stop Stepping out into the frost filled air I pause to watch the sleak white chariot vanish on the eastern horizon. September,  2006
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Nov 13, 2015
Nov 13, 2015 at 6:29 AM UTC
Shiloh-Scott Eastbound
Standing in the tunnel at Eighth and Pine station, I survey westbound commuters waiting across the tracks  - standing arms akimbo or leaning on marble walls. A well-suited young man paces the platform - cell phone pressed to his cheek.     [Passengers stand clear of the     edge of the platform at all times] Rushing in from the east, a gleaming white chariot arrives - pauses - resumes leaving the far platform vacated as if by alien abduction From the left a blazing light pierces the  tunnel and the Shiloh – Scott eastbound halts and snaps open its doors. crossing the threshold., I claim a seat by the aisle.     [Please stand clear! Doors are closing] With eyes half shut I scan the crowd: uniformed workers wearing ID's,   a toddler’s arms and legs dangling off his mother's lap, An elderly couple talking softly. The soft clatter of wheels and the gentle side-to-side sway rocks us like a cradle - memories of the long day melting into thoughts of home.     [Fairview Heights Station.     Doors open to my right] The lady with the toddler steps off. A trio of teenage girls fresh from the mall seek and find empty seats - filling the rear of the car with the music of their chatter. Streetlamps scatter shadows over parking lots. The unseen country side slips by under cover of darkness. Headlights gleam like jewels waiting for crossing gates to lift     [Next stop Belleville Station     Doors open to my left] I clutch my lap top, work my way to the door and wait for the train’s full stop Stepping out into the frost filled air I pause to watch the sleak white chariot vanish on the eastern horizon. September,  2006
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I'm on the train, it's six o'clock With a hunger bomb, tick tock, tick tock Which at any moment, will explode My weight loss goals start to implode Why not have a small baguette Who needs a diet, just forget No one knows, it's not a sin Just buy that chocolate, stuff it in How dangerous can a latte be With that biscuit pack that comes for free Or maybe just a little wine Along with nuts, go on it's fine Determined, I shut out the voice Stay in charge, I have a choice I sip some water, shun a snack And pat myself upon the back
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Mar 5, 2015
Mar 5, 2015 at 4:28 PM UTC
Hunger Bomb
Commuter trains go clickety clack up and down the trickety track except when it snows or leaves the wind blows then you can’t get there or back
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Feb 17, 2015
Feb 17, 2015 at 3:45 PM UTC
Commuting Today?
There’s stasis on the freeway A backup from the bridge An accident in the tunnel I left my lunch in the fridge Grey cars with no lights Vanish in the mist A November Oregon morning I remember that we kissed The parking lot is crowded The storm surges blow after blow Two trucks block my progress You’ll miss me when I go? I leave the car in limbo-land I give a street kid a tip There’s a long walk to the office Your taste lingered on my lip Another dreary screen day Click once here for madness Scroll your life to hell Did we really do our best? I left my lunch in the fridge I remember that we kissed You’ll miss me when I go Your taste lingered on my lips Did we really do our best?
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Jul 24, 2014
Jul 24, 2014 at 2:45 PM UTC
A Day