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Make heart too heavy to hold Beautiful thing to burst Nobody else has the power To break if you do first Today the day to take control It may be too late Worried about romance failing Proof of eventual fate I am not just repeating words A sock puppet limp and hollow My opinions are my own energy Do not trust other instinct to follow Gentle reminder is not good enough Gentle with only your hands Let voice have authority over yourself Answer no commands
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Nov 25, 2020
Nov 25, 2020 at 7:11 AM UTC
I Burst My Own Bubble
When you measure something once, it doesn't always go the way you fully expected. Nor was it how you solely intended for its very actions to not solidify your commands very nicely, either. That's exactly why you need to measure those very commands twice, or else those very actions (which became the dreary outcome beyond both your own expectations and how you never intended it to go the exact opposing opposite way you truly "not so wisely" measured it, the first time). All this isn't as solidifying or even unifying when you shed the costs of the simple mistakes that turn into even more dreary outcomes! Either ahead of time, or entirely beforehand. (Since sometimes the most basic mistakes of our very actions towards our very messy commands, shows we perceive the outcome ahead of time, instead of taking it easy once and a while to urge our decisions beforehand...just in case.) You need to make utter sure when (the next time comes around) too measure things twice...from NOW ON!
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Jul 17, 2020
Jul 17, 2020 at 3:11 PM UTC
Measuring everything twice
Far away from here, There is somewhere. I dnt need to cry, and bow down to all your whys. The questions and demand, Here i burden myself with all your commands. But somewhere, My view matters, My choices are better, I dnt need to follow command And my desire expand. I wish to meet you there too, So that you see how happy i am without you.
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Jun 16, 2020
Jun 16, 2020 at 4:03 AM UTC
Far away from here..!!
Commands were necessary for alphabets and numeric to dance.
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Nov 8, 2019
Nov 8, 2019 at 3:15 AM UTC
Why Commands?
the impact of mankind is profound it's ridiculously simple --childishly intent on giving commands and ordering respect meanwhile leaving behind fierce footprints of disrespect
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Oct 9, 2016
Oct 9, 2016 at 2:27 PM UTC
Fierce Footprints
It's taking over my life. It's taking control of me. I give into its wishes. I listen to its commands. It declares my every move. I'm a puppet and it's my master holding the strings, holding the reins to my life It dominates me. It restrains me. It keeps me paralyzed. But I can't ask for help. Asking for help admits defeat. I can never admit defeat. Defeat means weakness. Weakness means I'm powerless. When I'm powerless, I'm, hopeless.
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Aug 18, 2014
Aug 18, 2014 at 5:57 PM UTC
Torment