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never knew it, never was I self-percepted, that anything exceptional, lay within, neither obvious or dormant, was just an ordinary if not, extra-ordinary pained child by peers and my surrounders and my own words yet today, do not confer any distinction when yours irradiate me into a stunned and silenced reverie, a reminder, a minder, that talent recognizes no laws of equilibrium, equality, and certainty not, equity so I read with shocked, shocked, I tell you, bemusement but comprehensive perception when the young and extra~special confide, their own misperceptions, overwhelmed by the anxiety of the billions of sky stars, and letters in their twinkling orbs when forming identifiable comets with tagalong dust trails^ of the debris of words that are formed by their travels and travails on orbits not necessarily predetermined by gravitational adult pulleys, a gravity upon their projected, sometimes directed, sometimes not, trajectory *"and yet, though an orbit is a type of trajectory, not all trajectories are orbits"* nor are *"some comets, particularly those from outside our solar system, that move so fast that the Sun's gravity is not strong enough to capture them into a closed orbit* *These comets follow an open, curved path through the solar system and then continue on into interstellar space, never to be seen again*" so be advised, as you reassemble the debris from the multi~universe, when assembling your owned, unique~verse, create your tail and trail, the futurity of you is to be both silent and loud, absorbing and disgorging, to awed and to be humbled, by all that and those who went before, all once younger and talented, and knew this self-same anxiety, but never let the fearing of their the mystery of plotting of their path deter them from exploring the skies and deep mines of the sea trenches where undiscovered mysteries abide <nml> 4:59am in the city where one can never see the light of the stars, particularly by their owners
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Oct 1, 2025
Oct 1, 2025 at 7:25 AM UTC
The Anxiety of the Young and Talented Comets
never knew it, never was I self-percepted, that anything exceptional, lay within, neither obvious or dormant, was just an ordinary if not, extra-ordinary pained child by peers and my surrounders and my own words yet today, do not confer any distinction when yours irradiate me into a stunned and silenced reverie, a reminder, a minder, that talent recognizes no laws of equilibrium, equality, and certainty not, equity so I read with shocked, shocked, I tell you, bemusement but comprehensive perception when the young and extra~special confide, their own misperceptions, overwhelmed by the anxiety of the billions of sky stars, and letters in their twinkling orbs when forming identifiable comets with tagalong dust trails^ of the debris of words that are formed by their travels and travails on orbits not necessarily predetermined by gravitational adult pulleys, a gravity upon their projected, sometimes directed, sometimes not, trajectory *"and yet, though an orbit is a type of trajectory, not all trajectories are orbits"* nor are *"some comets, particularly those from outside our solar system, that move so fast that the Sun's gravity is not strong enough to capture them into a closed orbit* *These comets follow an open, curved path through the solar system and then continue on into interstellar space, never to be seen again*" so be advised, as you reassemble the debris from the multi~universe, when assembling your owned, unique~verse, create your tail and trail, the futurity of you is to be both silent and loud, absorbing and disgorging, to awed and to be humbled, by all that and those who went before, all once younger and talented, and knew this self-same anxiety, but never let the fearing of their the mystery of plotting of their path deter them from exploring the skies and deep mines of the sea trenches where undiscovered mysteries abide <nml> 4:59am in the city where one can never see the light of the stars, particularly by their owners
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equal top billing Leonids and Taurids show ~fireball duet Mark Toney © 2020
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Nov 15, 2020
Nov 15, 2020 at 5:21 PM UTC
Fireball Duet
A lonely star Isolated in space And I dream Of planets Touching their atmospheres Feeling them Slip smoothly between fingers Isn’t that love To gather fingers In an embrace To pull someone close Into your gravity Whisper them a lullaby Absorbing their opulence Falling away into darkness Constellations of rendezvouses And this is how Comets are made
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Sep 9, 2020
Sep 9, 2020 at 6:02 PM UTC
Comets
I. I got So ******* hung up on you The highs, the lows Everything was you So far I was completely smitten Every word was lyrical Everything was you II. And I I thought I had moved on From all the pain you left me with But still I saw Everything was you III. Do you remember, how my friends Were your friends And our friends always spoke of how Great we were Do you remember, how my friends Weren't your friends The second I said it was over They still say how I can do so much better then him (you) I'm a thousand times better then him (Everything is still you) But in the aftermath Before their questions were answered They still spoke of how Wonderful we are We were So I'm sure they're lying to me Do your friends lie to you About me too? Do you still have friends, after I took our friends And made them mine? IV. I called it a Mutual ghosting That neither of us wanted us But I really thought you wanted us I still don't know why you let me go But I said I wanted to let you go My friends asking me who I like And I Have moved on from you Surely I'm done with you by now V. I've started seeing girls in the street God they're beautiful (Like you were Two, three years ago?) Girls are pretty I thought you were pretty I thought I was done I thought I was fine with the way we left us I still write about you Surely I'm not done with you VI. Sometimes I wonder if I ever really liked you Or if I just wanted to be your friend And my friends called it affection I'm not really sure VII. I know I could've loved you We were perfect in every way Except I didn't have any trust or love Because I was scared of going too fast We were comets If we got to close surely we'd collide I want to be done with you There's empty pages in front of me I'm ready to write on them As soon as your ghost leaves me Please leave me I want to be done with you I want to move on We were barely an us How does that warrant this obsession With how beautiful it was to talk with You
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Aug 6, 2020
Aug 6, 2020 at 10:32 PM UTC
I thought I was done with you
I. I got So ******* hung up on you The highs, the lows Everything was you So far I was completely smitten Every word was lyrical Everything was you II. And I I thought I had moved on From all the pain you left me with But still I saw Everything was you III. Do you remember, how my friends Were your friends And our friends always spoke of how Great we were Do you remember, how my friends Weren't your friends The second I said it was over They still say how I can do so much better then him (you) I'm a thousand times better then him (Everything is still you) But in the aftermath Before their questions were answered They still spoke of how Wonderful we are We were So I'm sure they're lying to me Do your friends lie to you About me too? Do you still have friends, after I took our friends And made them mine? IV. I called it a Mutual ghosting That neither of us wanted us But I really thought you wanted us I still don't know why you let me go But I said I wanted to let you go My friends asking me who I like And I Have moved on from you Surely I'm done with you by now V. I've started seeing girls in the street God they're beautiful (Like you were Two, three years ago?) Girls are pretty I thought you were pretty I thought I was done I thought I was fine with the way we left us I still write about you Surely I'm not done with you VI. Sometimes I wonder if I ever really liked you Or if I just wanted to be your friend And my friends called it affection I'm not really sure VII. I know I could've loved you We were perfect in every way Except I didn't have any trust or love Because I was scared of going too fast We were comets If we got to close surely we'd collide I want to be done with you There's empty pages in front of me I'm ready to write on them As soon as your ghost leaves me Please leave me I want to be done with you I want to move on We were barely an us How does that warrant this obsession With how beautiful it was to talk with You
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Summer pondered in everlasting hands clasped to rose watching comets fly while daydreaming of Paris on stardust nights
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May 3, 2020
May 3, 2020 at 4:46 PM UTC
stardust dreams
his fingers fidgeted with the stars comets flying like racing cars when he glanced above, all he hoped to sing a lullaby to the one he loves the most
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Apr 27, 2020
Apr 27, 2020 at 11:59 AM UTC
racing cars
Zeus and Amphitrite edge of the sea reflecting down looking up god or goddess reflecting the same draped in gold Hercules Coronal Borealis Great Wall superstructure feathered on the shoulders skyward brilliance reflecting shaking future stars comets meteors meteoroids asteroids meteorites rain down around deafening sound of the greatest thunder bolt hear me hear her **** this **** that roll good times patience is virtue zero point generosity kindness affection pleasantness waiting on the ecliptic plane sun and heavens where hummingbirds dragonflies soaring creatures rise out of the abyss propelled and lifted seahorse air bubbles octopuses chant straight ******* propulsion ****** velocity magic of the darkness ready set giddy up
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Oct 28, 2018
Oct 28, 2018 at 5:08 PM UTC
Ζεύς and Ἀμφιτρίτη
Classic trepidation, stationary with the aura of Coincidence, slit myself and call it skyward thinking Sinking feelings that argue for a sudden resignation Conscientiousness, leprous and typesetting Intimate knowledge that I disclose verbatim cannot, and should not, ever be used against me. Interest infected through wavelengths, non responsive partly cause of the rupturing that's been running through my dreams. Scant as fixes to the problems, overblown and oft forgotten, lisping when I speak of this Epiphany. Taxidermist furnish houses, howling wolves that get devoured, sounds like God and hell and them finally worked out peace. Just cosmetic, slightly pathetic the ease at which the mind elapses Classics retconned till nothing's left except the years of influence Invested in the melancholy, snobs lobbyist and in distant memories
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Apr 21, 2018
Apr 21, 2018 at 9:44 AM UTC
I'm not very good at this
Icy clusters of rocks and dust, leftovers Of extra matter scattered around a star. Following the orbit guiding a perpetual run, For seeing creatures to gaze at midnight skies In search of glistening shooting lights. Comets, so named by the ancient man, Enchant humans to strive and understand, Beholding their subliming approach to the Sun, Where radiations and winds melt solids to sparkle Spews of gas. An aura, a coma and a tail. Nebulosity inclosing the nucleus confers On the object a misty glow, distinguishing it Form a star, hiding water in volatile form. Tails extending to astronomical units lose Trails of debris at times, visible to the naked eye. When finally orbital highways cross, Meteor showers arise. Debris igniting As falling stars, enter the atmosphere. Perseids in August begot by Swift-Tuttle Comet, Orionids in October by Halley's. Games of splendour to remind us where We come from and how it all began. When antediluvian comets did not shy away From colliding unswervingly with Earth, Reach its crust. Inundating the planet with H2O, For us to be here, witness the show.
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Oct 23, 2017
Oct 23, 2017 at 5:02 AM UTC
The Perseids
If space and time were to entwine I'd loop through the galaxies with fantasies infinite times in my mind Over stars and black holes comets and planets If only time and space were to entwine infinity would turn into my everyday
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Jun 13, 2017
Jun 13, 2017 at 4:18 AM UTC
Time & Space
You tie my gut in knots Never expected this in my plot Twisting my lochs with Nervous fingers locking Hands with you is magickal. You tie my mind in knots Its like a roller coaster lost In space the comet's frost Ignites a shower of colors Cascading across your eyes... You tie my heart in knots I pray it doesn't clot my Thoughts about our Dreams about our Kids about our Means of getting by... And I love having this in common with you.
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Nov 6, 2016
Nov 6, 2016 at 9:10 PM UTC
Dreads
Hello , Take my hand . . . we will step out onto the stars and run across the Milky Way We will swim in the pools of glistening light and share to our heart's delight We will catch comets . . . putting them in our pockets making wishes along the way We will visit the darkest moons and give them light from far across the galaxies But the most heavenly light of all will reside in your smile
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Aug 28, 2016
Aug 28, 2016 at 10:20 PM UTC
Milky Way to my Heart
You say you see comets in my eyes. They spark to life and quickly die like the light that used to ignite inside my chest. A starshine fire that would burn at the edges of a darkness that seeps through the cracks of my atmospheric breaths. My lungs collapse like planets that come to rest in the black hole that grows inside my heart; what I once could love, falls apart.
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Aug 13, 2016
Aug 13, 2016 at 12:12 AM UTC
Black Hole
i lost you too easily to space dust dreams and cosmic clouds of nebulae. knowing you, you would have willingly dissolved yourself to beautiful phenomena such as these ever since i woke up to the stars igniting brighter than normal and your body disappearing from the other side of the bed, i packed my bags to traverse every swirling galaxy within reach in the pursuit of finding you perhaps that is why you decided to leave planet Earth; you have always been itching to join the stars you never felt settled in your skin, in the matter that made you and you wanted to be something more. i do not know how long i will keep searching for you amongst cosmos and i have seen my fair share of comets and dark matter, but whatever universe you are in may never come in sight - at least the stars seem brighter with you now
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Mar 17, 2016
Mar 17, 2016 at 10:13 AM UTC
Space Exploration
hey there comet sorry about throwing you away i mistook you for a bad idea i missed the can and you ended up in orbit ***** little snowball without a place to land spinning in space without a ship when i was little i did not want to be an astronaut i wanted to be a teacher and a mom i wanted to be responsible for shaping little souls i thought it would be like play-doh i thought it would be like dress up because when i put on mommies sweater daddys glasses growing up was just about getting larger so that this dwarf planet could become a sun with a few more servings of vegetables and some glasses of milk stretching my bones by hanging off the monkey bars gravity worked for me and gravity kept me grounded and gravity kept the planets in place and gravity would grant me permission to grow but i would never become a planet because i was born a bit too fast and a bit too cold so just make sure to orbit on back around this planet my little comet and I won’t miss it this time
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Mar 3, 2016
Mar 3, 2016 at 7:45 PM UTC
comet
What are we but a speck in this universe of granite, metal and a burning tail Fiery wild passion moving in a constant speed As if we already knew As if we planned As if written As if measured Do we count in Fibonacci's in blindfolds eternally spin in this limbo indulging ourselves in the futility of a dog chasing its tail are we just asleep in this journey conversing in our dreams decoding static noises in the other end of the radio for flight directions over shifting planes of time Like the stars believed that fate is their religion Or the cosmos just furtive of its secrets? -Margaret Austin Go, Lost in Orbit
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Feb 21, 2016
Feb 21, 2016 at 3:31 PM UTC
Lost in Orbit
God, the universe, I’m headed toward you In bright defiance Against your reign. You are Boring and boundless, Still and silent. I am Blazing and brilliant Loud and lively. I am Fire -- I burn Through your ice I tear through your blackness I rip through your stars Limitless, or so you were Until calamity came crashing through. Hear me, see me, feel me I am a presence, a sensational sight Flaming through the night Young and reckless, Spirited and stubborn. See me speed, Careening into chaos One cataclysmic collision Before I fade off See my trail, My ghost, My legacy See my start And end My escape From eternity.
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Feb 15, 2016
Feb 15, 2016 at 9:42 AM UTC
Kometes
You shot through the sky and I made a wish. My heart seemed to stop as it suddenly hit. You weren't a star, I had made a mistake. But your tail was so bright, you had me amazed. I wished upon you, not knowing the truth. You were merely a comet, just passing through.
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Jun 10, 2016
Jun 10, 2016 at 3:20 PM UTC
Wishes
Outside with tea and blankets: a Fortress against the August cold. And so begins another typically English evening. night is marching, marching on and unusually we are not glued to our phones nor the daily grind. we catch a handful of Shooting Stars and find that this is an addictive occupation. One moment I wished I could drape my room with starry waterfalls but then considered how they would dull               and                          darken if I breathed too deeply in my sleep. (a subconscious effort to absorb some starlight into my clotting veins.) So leave me now under the Flaming Sky and all its anger. Leave me alone so that I may fall asleep, at last. I have an appointment with the moon about my dulling temperament. The stars have sworn to let down a r o p e l a d d e r my own Stairway to Heaven. So rip my heart out, let my arteries unwind. Haul me to heaven with my umbilical cord. There I cling to the back of a comet and hurtle through space alive at last and full of stars until the nausea takes hold and puts me to bed.
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Sep 19, 2015
Sep 19, 2015 at 6:27 PM UTC
The Perseid Shower, and the dream I had afterwards
I ate all the stars last night every single one Then I had a comet cone for dessert Now I have starburn and I'm burping up rays of light that sunburn my throat The comet cone was too sugary So I let it spew away Now I have to learn all the new constellations And of course it's all Confucius
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Jun 15, 2015
Jun 15, 2015 at 11:00 PM UTC
Star Eater
Planetary dance of the Heavens as tears of rock Fall into flaming oblivion.
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Jun 9, 2015
Jun 9, 2015 at 3:30 PM UTC
Heavens Oblivion Tears
you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets because all stars are destined to explode and the more light you give off the faster you burn out i guess this is why they say only the good die young, i guess i’ll live forever but immortality sounds lonely and most living legends tie their own nooses, and the rest of us live just by making excuses i'd count out all the stars in between us like miles but you're half way round the world and i'm more than a few days behind i'd count out all the stars between us, make promises and wishes on them but i know they’d both be empty but stars are always dead on arrival but you’re too far away even if you're right next to me we were looking at the same stars, just not the same constellations and i'm so ******* sorry for all the things i let burn out, all the things i let go ruined instead of dealing with them i’m afraid of failure so sometimes i don’t try at all i’m sorry you got the worst parts of me i’m sorry you got my collisions instead of constellations you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets because you were afraid of commitment mostly because you thought you were supposed to be and i said i love you like a bomb going off too soon my whole body is on fire, you ignite me like lighter-fluid and bad decisions and the best things burn out fast the shortest lights burn the brightest it’s science, it’s physics, we can’t fight this we were doomed from the start, it’s inevitable that we have to take things apart somebody told me love is having the perfect opportunity to hurt somebody and letting it go, so i guess that’s how i know we’re not in love because we hurt each other just to prove that the other one still cared enough for it to sting because i learned that you’re not real unless you make marks, so i hope it ******* scars i hope you can always see the bruises in the shape of my lips i hope you never forget you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’ve been thinking about whether comets or craters are more important whether it’s about the way you blaze out or just your ashes whether it’s about what you do or what you leave behind i’ve been thinking about why we treat black holes and supernovas as opposites when they’re really not that different at all both catastrophes in their own right, yet one of them seems more poetic but you don’t get to decide the amount of pain you’ve inflicted, we are all afflicted with this thinking that we’re the only exception i think we are all guilty of thinking we’re supernovas instead of blackholes you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’m a mess and not just metaphorically, sometimes i kind of think i’d be a lot happier without all the things that make me myself i am in a glass jar watching myself implode because i kind of wish i was born with more serotonin and a different kind of motivation, like i’m an observer to myself and i’ve always viewed my own heart breaks almost as the out-of-body experience, like a third party investigating the remains of what was or what wasn’t i am the medical examiner of my heart and poetry is a lot like dissection and love is a lot like hate and living is a lot like dying but regret is just a waste of emotion and love is just a waste of devotion and going out with a bang is much more glamorous than going out with a whimper and nobody talks about slow burn, only the explosion if you were a star then you were a shooting one, and you’re always most popular the day after you die but i’m done with that **** this is not a dead poet’s society this is a society of poets who wanted to die but didn’t because i think this might be a sad poem, but i am not a sad person or at least i've been trying not to be because we were all born to die, but we were also all born to live measured by the blaze of our burnout, the trail behind us i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’ve been thinking a lot about comets
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May 17, 2015
May 17, 2015 at 12:42 AM UTC
destruction is only three letters off from construction
you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets because all stars are destined to explode and the more light you give off the faster you burn out i guess this is why they say only the good die young, i guess i’ll live forever but immortality sounds lonely and most living legends tie their own nooses, and the rest of us live just by making excuses i'd count out all the stars in between us like miles but you're half way round the world and i'm more than a few days behind i'd count out all the stars between us, make promises and wishes on them but i know they’d both be empty but stars are always dead on arrival but you’re too far away even if you're right next to me we were looking at the same stars, just not the same constellations and i'm so ******* sorry for all the things i let burn out, all the things i let go ruined instead of dealing with them i’m afraid of failure so sometimes i don’t try at all i’m sorry you got the worst parts of me i’m sorry you got my collisions instead of constellations you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets because you were afraid of commitment mostly because you thought you were supposed to be and i said i love you like a bomb going off too soon my whole body is on fire, you ignite me like lighter-fluid and bad decisions and the best things burn out fast the shortest lights burn the brightest it’s science, it’s physics, we can’t fight this we were doomed from the start, it’s inevitable that we have to take things apart somebody told me love is having the perfect opportunity to hurt somebody and letting it go, so i guess that’s how i know we’re not in love because we hurt each other just to prove that the other one still cared enough for it to sting because i learned that you’re not real unless you make marks, so i hope it ******* scars i hope you can always see the bruises in the shape of my lips i hope you never forget you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’ve been thinking about whether comets or craters are more important whether it’s about the way you blaze out or just your ashes whether it’s about what you do or what you leave behind i’ve been thinking about why we treat black holes and supernovas as opposites when they’re really not that different at all both catastrophes in their own right, yet one of them seems more poetic but you don’t get to decide the amount of pain you’ve inflicted, we are all afflicted with this thinking that we’re the only exception i think we are all guilty of thinking we’re supernovas instead of blackholes you know, i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’m a mess and not just metaphorically, sometimes i kind of think i’d be a lot happier without all the things that make me myself i am in a glass jar watching myself implode because i kind of wish i was born with more serotonin and a different kind of motivation, like i’m an observer to myself and i’ve always viewed my own heart breaks almost as the out-of-body experience, like a third party investigating the remains of what was or what wasn’t i am the medical examiner of my heart and poetry is a lot like dissection and love is a lot like hate and living is a lot like dying but regret is just a waste of emotion and love is just a waste of devotion and going out with a bang is much more glamorous than going out with a whimper and nobody talks about slow burn, only the explosion if you were a star then you were a shooting one, and you’re always most popular the day after you die but i’m done with that **** this is not a dead poet’s society this is a society of poets who wanted to die but didn’t because i think this might be a sad poem, but i am not a sad person or at least i've been trying not to be because we were all born to die, but we were also all born to live measured by the blaze of our burnout, the trail behind us i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’ve been thinking a lot about comets i’ve been thinking a lot about comets
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Darling I'm not the same as I was back then, I thought comets and stars were things in the sky Until I looked around one day to find That they're in as many people As they are in my mind No one is really ever the same, you see Everything changes you and me Every thought and action we do will lead Into another alternate reality. What if we turned left instead of right that one day? Would we have met with early demise? Or would we have gotten that job we had hoped to find? See these are the things that are constantly on my mind For I can't help but contemplate how the stars align To bring us closer together or further apart Or weather or not you see someone's true heart. I guess it's a difficult concept for some to grasp I mean even I am having a momentary lapse of reason I guess that's just part of being human Thinking about what's bigger about us Or what could bring our downfall So many of us just sit and contemplate what it means to be in this body And the longer we think about it the more uncomfortable we become with ourselves Because with how our world works if you're not a size zero through nine you're not worth the time of the males searching for mates. Or if the muscles in your stomach don't look like a six-pack then you're not a very good looking male in the first place. But if you sit and think about how to make this world crumble You'll see how everyone thinks they're nothing. But if you tell a girl or guy they're made of stardust and clear skies They'll laugh and call you a dreamer. Maybe I am, Or maybe that's what poets are Dreamers who think the world is pretty terrible So they string lines together to create a scenario to help others see the bigger picture That everyone is made from stardust. That everyone is beautiful.
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Apr 30, 2015
Apr 30, 2015 at 5:04 PM UTC
Stardust
Darling I'm not the same as I was back then, I thought comets and stars were things in the sky Until I looked around one day to find That they're in as many people As they are in my mind No one is really ever the same, you see Everything changes you and me Every thought and action we do will lead Into another alternate reality. What if we turned left instead of right that one day? Would we have met with early demise? Or would we have gotten that job we had hoped to find? See these are the things that are constantly on my mind For I can't help but contemplate how the stars align To bring us closer together or further apart Or weather or not you see someone's true heart. I guess it's a difficult concept for some to grasp I mean even I am having a momentary lapse of reason I guess that's just part of being human Thinking about what's bigger about us Or what could bring our downfall So many of us just sit and contemplate what it means to be in this body And the longer we think about it the more uncomfortable we become with ourselves Because with how our world works if you're not a size zero through nine you're not worth the time of the males searching for mates. Or if the muscles in your stomach don't look like a six-pack then you're not a very good looking male in the first place. But if you sit and think about how to make this world crumble You'll see how everyone thinks they're nothing. But if you tell a girl or guy they're made of stardust and clear skies They'll laugh and call you a dreamer. Maybe I am, Or maybe that's what poets are Dreamers who think the world is pretty terrible So they string lines together to create a scenario to help others see the bigger picture That everyone is made from stardust. That everyone is beautiful.
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