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#coma
Don’t Let It End with curtains of breath suspended chest drum patiently beating worlds out of silence closed eyes shedding nothing from empty sockets. You, come back now sunlight chirps through the window trees whisper stories yet to be told coffee chants its steamy ballad here when you wake. So am I. Don’t surrender to the dream, to the life so far away Don’t let it end where there is no end
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Jan 17
Jan 17, 2026 at 6:27 AM UTC
Come Back Now
Swing time is over. I’m tired and wander through an apocalyptic portal; albeit a motel. Landscapes of red dunes brandish the theme and the hot air hits me square in the face. I am in Modesto. A classic motif of the 80s dullness ascribed to each room of this Motel 8. Then there is one room completely covered in everything Hello Kitty. Sanrio is serious. The bed spread, the rugs, the pictures hung askew with intent That sent me into a sleep I can only surmise as a coma. Dreaming to sleep.
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Jul 31, 2025
Jul 31, 2025 at 12:16 AM UTC
Sanrio
So scraps are what I have to show Find myself amidst the undertow A pathetic pile of perfumed dreams   Like pretending life is greater than it seems This multiverse molded with illusions and tricks To knock you down just for kicks Nothing glamorous about depression A void that leaves the deepest impression Feeling like rocks loaded onto my back As if gravity is out of whack Attempting to rise off the floor Each movement leaves muscles sore Past mistakes written in blood Try but fail washing away with a flood So sick and tired staying the same Doubt and fear the scapegoats to blame Reasons irrelevant nevertheless Little extra effort might lead to success I am aware everything is bound to fall apart One by one shards will chip off my heart I attempt reassembling it with some glue To give it away like deja vu These choices I cannot explain Behavior proof I must be insane Wasting more minutes than I have to spare Fish out of water and I'm gasping for air Can't you see I'm drowning? A sea of my regrets Ghosts dancing on horizon staring at their silhouettes I think about years I continue to let slip through my hands I'm so exhausted chasing answers to a puzzle I don't understand Scared to admit this the extent of what I'll become Wonder if I'll ever escape the place that I am from I yearn to love now like I loved back then Believe in magic and forever again But hopeful naivete faded along with the sparkle in my eye Like while I've been in limbo best opportunities passed me by In a cerebral cage confidence confined by bars Self-acceptance shackled by a multitude of scars I am sorrier than lips will ever audibly speak Unsure if my dungeon will let me discover the exit I desperately seek This nightmare of creation darkens at an alarming rate Need to wake up from this coma I'm in before it is too late
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Feb 10, 2025
Feb 10, 2025 at 1:27 AM UTC
Coma
So scraps are what I have to show Find myself amidst the undertow A pathetic pile of perfumed dreams   Like pretending life is greater than it seems This multiverse molded with illusions and tricks To knock you down just for kicks Nothing glamorous about depression A void that leaves the deepest impression Feeling like rocks loaded onto my back As if gravity is out of whack Attempting to rise off the floor Each movement leaves muscles sore Past mistakes written in blood Try but fail washing away with a flood So sick and tired staying the same Doubt and fear the scapegoats to blame Reasons irrelevant nevertheless Little extra effort might lead to success I am aware everything is bound to fall apart One by one shards will chip off my heart I attempt reassembling it with some glue To give it away like deja vu These choices I cannot explain Behavior proof I must be insane Wasting more minutes than I have to spare Fish out of water and I'm gasping for air Can't you see I'm drowning? A sea of my regrets Ghosts dancing on horizon staring at their silhouettes I think about years I continue to let slip through my hands I'm so exhausted chasing answers to a puzzle I don't understand Scared to admit this the extent of what I'll become Wonder if I'll ever escape the place that I am from I yearn to love now like I loved back then Believe in magic and forever again But hopeful naivete faded along with the sparkle in my eye Like while I've been in limbo best opportunities passed me by In a cerebral cage confidence confined by bars Self-acceptance shackled by a multitude of scars I am sorrier than lips will ever audibly speak Unsure if my dungeon will let me discover the exit I desperately seek This nightmare of creation darkens at an alarming rate Need to wake up from this coma I'm in before it is too late
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I'm an anterograde amnesiac per se, But I remember what you did say.
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Dec 7, 2024
Dec 7, 2024 at 12:58 PM UTC
Strange Memories
Eight years ago, foggily I awoke from a 40-day deep, deep deep, sleep, Seven times I've donned the sackcloth, which may continue seventy times seven in acceptance of my new reality. Six years of gratitude redirected my heavy heart and thoughts, reframing and good perspective keep -- Five rehabilitation programs, cross-country, helped regain vital functionality, to commence: Four years of post-graduate study in counselling and chaplaincy, processing grief, re-skilling, and growing more confidently, despite my Three-second memory retention, slowly but surely, my amazing brain rewired grey space. My Two eyes, after several surgeries, still view life in fragments, hoping to be restored by the One Almighty God, who has blessed me with life, I stand in awe of His grace.
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Apr 3, 2020
Apr 3, 2020 at 9:55 PM UTC
Continually Transforming: Day-by-Day, Moment-by-Moment
I can't make out since how long I have been here It seems like ages but it can't be fair I was in a world which was far and different from ours No their were neither planet nor the stars It was all empty with a sheet of darkness all around It was a place where time has no bound I was neither feeling happy nor have I any kind of grief I am at loss of words in explaining that sensation in brief Once I leave this place I may never be at peace again. Will be lost in haze of materialistic world and might experience tremendous pain. Away from worldly pleasures was the place where I was. I wanna be here forever and peace was the utmost cause
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May 30, 2022
May 30, 2022 at 4:47 AM UTC
Coma
The feel of the pen on the paper the poet grabs a verse. the dripping of morphine the flow of endorphins flow of electronic lines across the monitor let’s hope we don’t flatline this mere mortal needs a portal to the stars this mere mortal needs defibrillation to the heart the way the poetry forms in the lungs and the mind the way life needs beauty is sometimes unkind I am the blood transfusion the illusion of poems bells chime Electrons flow Radioactive X-rays know Poetry opens doors I am the emergency poet I will take flight in flames never shall I be tamed But I will make that heart beat and get you out of your seat And on the road to recovery and discovery Because poetry heals and steals back our songs what could go wrong?
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Dec 8, 2021
Dec 8, 2021 at 2:54 PM UTC
The Emergency Poet
From the black sky, rain starts falling down Makes my emotions softly settle down In thorny path, I’m crawling… Saying to myself, not to fall apart To search for what I’ve never seen No one knows what’s waiting ahead of life Hopes and fears, take my conscious out In thorny path, I’m crawling… Saying to myself, not to fall apart To search for what I’ve never seen Saying to myself, not to fall apart…
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Oct 13, 2021
Oct 13, 2021 at 2:12 AM UTC
Coma (by Yoshikazu Takahashi)
midnight and i'm still here tapping out words in the hope that i'll write something worthy of reading. the instructions aren't clear: am i supposed to sleep or work on word therapy and...feelings? i don't care now just turn on tiktok and i'll slip into my beloved mind coma
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Jun 10, 2021
Jun 10, 2021 at 5:24 PM UTC
"Word Therapy"
The one who’s behind you is the one you love. Something else calls you’re name, tickles your ear. But what happened to the intuition of what was and is so true? Ticks on your shoulders, did they wait for you? Left you in corruption, an unsound view. The trade is so strong, kills your brawn but what can you do? The pain never ends, when no one wins, you can only die in this life. The paper god on your tongue melts you into glue. It’s agonizing as you bind the world. Nothing splits you but your pulled by all. Reality stretches your skin, your mind loses sight and you’re paranoid. It will never end. And it never ends And it never ends And it never ends A woman evolves from the colors on the wall. Strange and hairy, lament grows as her fur. Scintillating messages of life and death they call. Who am I, and who are you? I’m speaking in tenses contradictory to a single point of view. I can hear her scream, as she shaves her pits. So beautiful it serenades my mind and scars my eyes. I’ll never have her, and she dissolves into the bars of this cell again. I’m coming down or I’m blasting off, so hard to tell when god digests so well. Release my mind. It will never end. And it never ends And it never ends And it never ends Pierced skin, stained skin, ripped skin, all over her. She’s broken and odd, but so close to me, I can’t help but connect. The cover of her book is blank and new. Pages are torn and ****** nothing to awe but still novel inside. It drains me as it’s end never finds an end. I can’t belong here when I’m rinsed of life and I dry as glue. Bound and confound I can’t decide what voice to choose. You’re on the right and I’m on the left, in the middle is me and we are you. The nurse draws a bath and I am rinsed. Drooling in comatose they wipe your lip. Who new god had a price and came in a sheet. That little square is the key to become like me. So free from what’s contrived when you can’t decide the difference in truth. The days go by and the years turn to seconds. The nurse whispers in our ear, your mother is here and we start to cry. She holds our hand. And it ends. And it ends And it ends It ends.
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Nov 16, 2020
Nov 16, 2020 at 1:43 AM UTC
Rinsed
The one who’s behind you is the one you love. Something else calls you’re name, tickles your ear. But what happened to the intuition of what was and is so true? Ticks on your shoulders, did they wait for you? Left you in corruption, an unsound view. The trade is so strong, kills your brawn but what can you do? The pain never ends, when no one wins, you can only die in this life. The paper god on your tongue melts you into glue. It’s agonizing as you bind the world. Nothing splits you but your pulled by all. Reality stretches your skin, your mind loses sight and you’re paranoid. It will never end. And it never ends And it never ends And it never ends A woman evolves from the colors on the wall. Strange and hairy, lament grows as her fur. Scintillating messages of life and death they call. Who am I, and who are you? I’m speaking in tenses contradictory to a single point of view. I can hear her scream, as she shaves her pits. So beautiful it serenades my mind and scars my eyes. I’ll never have her, and she dissolves into the bars of this cell again. I’m coming down or I’m blasting off, so hard to tell when god digests so well. Release my mind. It will never end. And it never ends And it never ends And it never ends Pierced skin, stained skin, ripped skin, all over her. She’s broken and odd, but so close to me, I can’t help but connect. The cover of her book is blank and new. Pages are torn and ****** nothing to awe but still novel inside. It drains me as it’s end never finds an end. I can’t belong here when I’m rinsed of life and I dry as glue. Bound and confound I can’t decide what voice to choose. You’re on the right and I’m on the left, in the middle is me and we are you. The nurse draws a bath and I am rinsed. Drooling in comatose they wipe your lip. Who new god had a price and came in a sheet. That little square is the key to become like me. So free from what’s contrived when you can’t decide the difference in truth. The days go by and the years turn to seconds. The nurse whispers in our ear, your mother is here and we start to cry. She holds our hand. And it ends. And it ends And it ends It ends.
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a daughter named seble seven years old being in a coma she couldn't hear her daddy's words she couldn't see him fog in front of her eyes covering differences of sleep and wakefulness oneday seble's father who was desparate put headphones on seble's ears lyrics from two tall germans they are called the "wildecker herzbuben" "herz" means heart and a "bube" is a boy seble closed eyes slowly breathing seble's father is called brhane rapidly breathing brhane was pressing play and after seconds among lurid lights seble harvest moved her head seble closed eyes smiled as the wildecker herzbuben sang: "Ein letztes Glas'l mit alten Freunden die geh'n allein nach Haus. In den Straßen in den Gassen geh'n langsam die Lichter aus." a last drink with my buddies who go home alone in the streets in the alleys the lights are vanishing seble moved her head no windows but her daddy was there sebles mother is not alive anymore brhane prayed holding his daughter's hand seble opened one eye looking at brhane seble came back to reality when brhan had finished his talk to god the end of seble's and brhane's story is wordless
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Nov 15, 2019
Nov 15, 2019 at 5:29 PM UTC
Folk Music
Mom called. She said something happened at your friends. She said, the result of whatever cataclysm took place there, left you asleep. You still haven't woken up. Not fully. You've moved your hand a couple of times, and your eyes but They say you're still fighting your way out of it. I know your mom died. You're probably dreaming dreams of being with her now, dancing in your living room On a warm summer night, without a care in the world. I need you to know that it's okay to be tired. I'm tired, too. My eyes all yearn to shut and stay shut till my soul can rest. Sleep as much as you'd like, And rest. But please, do wake up soon. I don't want you to become enchanted by the world you're staying in And end up becoming a permanent resident of the Dreamland destined for Lost souls.
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Oct 29, 2019
Oct 29, 2019 at 12:23 AM UTC
Sleep of the Soul
drown by the lake pier i fish to sleep forever never wash ashore
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Oct 10, 2019
Oct 10, 2019 at 10:02 PM UTC
Slumbercide
Someone out there doesn't have a mom. You say "Everyone has a mom". Well, get this. Someone's mother was born in the 70's, with bipolar disorder. Quite the disaster. This was before people knew how to address things like that, so instead it was hidden away. Someone's mother turned to drugs to make herself feel okay but it didn't really turn out that way. By the time she was 22 she had two daughters, but no source of stability. Someone's mother overdosed one (two? three?)too many times and got arrested for possession of illegal drugs. Someone's mother had to sing "You Are My Sunshine" with her hand up to glass, instead of with her hand in her daughter's. Someone forgot to give their mother one last hug goodbye. Someone's mother's last OD resulted in laying on a couch for three days. Alone. Someone's mother went into a coma. Someone was told to say goodbye to her mother, and said "She can't hear me. Why should I say goodbye if she can't hear me?" Someone was without a mother at 11 years old. Someone had a sister that stole *** from her mother. Someone grew up not really knowing what was going on. Someone out there doesn't have a mom.
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Apr 19, 2019
Apr 19, 2019 at 8:21 PM UTC
Someone's Mother
In the mists of all the thunder and lighting I made a decision to strengthen my bond with my dad before its too late I do not want to die not knowing that my parents truly love me because for some time I felt like no one loved me people may like me but never love and the fact that I was never able to accept any love left me emotionally in a coma I did not know how to react to things that most people would and I still dont I am willing to learn how to but I am still afraid I know that writing this probably means nothing to other people but to me, it is going to be like a written contract to myself to make new moments happen
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Apr 17, 2019
Apr 17, 2019 at 9:13 PM UTC
New Moments
I’ve been needing your lies I’ve been craving your poison I’ve been missing your demons I’ve been loving your hater While I was playing with death While it was ******* me upside down While I was freezing face to hell I’ve been moaning your name When my hands were trembling When my soul was jumping When my veins were twisting I howled your April’s farewell Once Azrael was invited And the sky was open Then my mind got naked Your shadow was my only Savior My voice was resonating But from your ears was forbidden My snow capped depth was on the summit of its alp Pleading you to be its shield That’s when you threw it into a dark swamp Claiming that you were lost in a blinded place Everything was mute and your bones were broke But I saw you secretly radiating in a crystal ball You thought I’m nowhere nearer Was it amusing to fool a downcast lifer? You were pushing my destiny to its sharp ending chapter Below the belts freedom was dedicated to a shrewd sinner Meanwhile I’ve been taken to where nothing left to catch Failures over the time of my rotten life have built my forgotten grave Gloomy butterflies surrounded my sick grove No flowers to bloom no hope to **** No words to draw no feelings to touch No time to rush no remorse to scratch The door of paradise was barely visible But the clouds drove me to a fiery jungle I begged life to be my sucker One last elegiac parting with winter But death was an invincible fighter Loneliness was feeding my blur future Chiselling out my anxiety within four blank walls Then stirred up a wild storm of toxic fears Moving on was the synonym of stuck in a rut A sterile heart gave up on its darned patience Charcoaled love erased its existence Dry tears chained to these anorexic cheeks You shutdown the light you once heated up Now I’m sober yet drunk on my coma Trying to perforate your karma While cleaning up my ugly Fantasia. Where I was your moon and you were my star
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Apr 10, 2019
Apr 10, 2019 at 4:47 PM UTC
Life Plays With Death
I’ve been needing your lies I’ve been craving your poison I’ve been missing your demons I’ve been loving your hater While I was playing with death While it was ******* me upside down While I was freezing face to hell I’ve been moaning your name When my hands were trembling When my soul was jumping When my veins were twisting I howled your April’s farewell Once Azrael was invited And the sky was open Then my mind got naked Your shadow was my only Savior My voice was resonating But from your ears was forbidden My snow capped depth was on the summit of its alp Pleading you to be its shield That’s when you threw it into a dark swamp Claiming that you were lost in a blinded place Everything was mute and your bones were broke But I saw you secretly radiating in a crystal ball You thought I’m nowhere nearer Was it amusing to fool a downcast lifer? You were pushing my destiny to its sharp ending chapter Below the belts freedom was dedicated to a shrewd sinner Meanwhile I’ve been taken to where nothing left to catch Failures over the time of my rotten life have built my forgotten grave Gloomy butterflies surrounded my sick grove No flowers to bloom no hope to **** No words to draw no feelings to touch No time to rush no remorse to scratch The door of paradise was barely visible But the clouds drove me to a fiery jungle I begged life to be my sucker One last elegiac parting with winter But death was an invincible fighter Loneliness was feeding my blur future Chiselling out my anxiety within four blank walls Then stirred up a wild storm of toxic fears Moving on was the synonym of stuck in a rut A sterile heart gave up on its darned patience Charcoaled love erased its existence Dry tears chained to these anorexic cheeks You shutdown the light you once heated up Now I’m sober yet drunk on my coma Trying to perforate your karma While cleaning up my ugly Fantasia. Where I was your moon and you were my star
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I know how many stories is tall enough I know how much Windex I have to drink I know long I have to be alone in order to hang myself I know where to cut I know how many pills I have to swallow So you ask how come I keep trying and keep failing Listen you have no idea how ****** windex tastes Listen I can't get to the roof of the buildings Listen All the pills are in a safe I do everything wrong I can't even die correctly But I don’t want to **** myself anyway   My uncle shot himself And I watched my grandmother lose a son I watched my dad lose his best friend I have seen what it does to people and I have felt that feeling I don’t want to **** myself I just want to be in a coma
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Mar 28, 2019
Mar 28, 2019 at 3:05 PM UTC
windex
Such a privilege to walk amongst this destruction to tread lightly through these fires and see the light that comes between the struggles of the itching dying to bathe with this and rub my naked self against the charred trees and sample the taste of fatty ashes in warmed air All cries reach a pitch that hot soaks the inner ear Smiles all around Gapping land spills over and over and over I'll bury myself here in the burning earth equipped with a hollow reed to reach the wonders above and sleep.
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Mar 23, 2019
Mar 23, 2019 at 7:24 PM UTC
Coma of White Hot
Valentines Day is stupid; Picking on me Curse that Cupid! No one loved me Since you was killed, Hate this day until... This day has end, Curse is over Got no friends; A cursed clover. Coma won't let me awaken, Hate myself till that day when... I see your smile: Shining, glowing. You'll still love me, That I'm hoping. You won't come back, That I'm knowing... Your memory keeps the tears flowing, Forgive me accidental sinning: Didn't mean to **** you again. My wife, my lover, my best friend. Valentine's Day's forever Forgive my? What?! No! Never!
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Jan 15, 2018
Jan 15, 2018 at 8:29 PM UTC
Valentine's
blood in my hair can't really remember what yr face looks like makes me sad but i can't really feel it, y'know? i love yr sick veins i hear yr heartbeat in my brain wish i could feel it i wish i could feel something at all
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Jan 30, 2019
Jan 30, 2019 at 3:31 PM UTC
listening to coma cinema
The night sky is bright So alive and so busy Unlike her dark eyes
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Nov 12, 2018
Nov 12, 2018 at 6:38 AM UTC
A Haiku
Sometimes I wonder Is this even real? what if it's a dream, a coma, what if we're already dead? Roses are red, Violets are blue, **** you.
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Jun 20, 2018
Jun 20, 2018 at 3:30 AM UTC
Thems the breaks
I wake up in an unknown room With needles sticking out of both my hands and one in my arm There is a tube down my throat and i cant figure out why im still breathing I look around with blurry eyes And here the beeps with foggy ears I look up to see clear bags on poles connected to the needles I feel like i can hear the slow drip drip drip of the liquid flowing through those tubes I know it is impossible but i could feel those drips They were like tiny earth quakes in my hands That shook me to my coar A smiling blonde nurse walks in and takes the tube out of my throat Her name is McKenzie McKenzie tells me how I was life flighted to spokane How i have been in a coma for 4 days How my heart rate was above 170 How my dog found me laying on the concrete floor covered in my own **** But all i can hear is the incessant beeping of machines All i can hear is the sound of my own failure I took so many pills i lost track after 150 I could still feel the steel knife against my skin I was so careful So sure Well They always say third times the charm.
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Feb 25, 2018
Feb 25, 2018 at 10:29 PM UTC
Coma