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We walked on clouds just to fall asleep in loveless coffins Imagining a new world While suffering in the present Dreaming of the future Just to escape our daily nightmares Hiding our deep scars just to face our reality that when it’s all said and done we will all end up in loveless coffins
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Oct 29, 2025
Oct 29, 2025 at 11:54 AM UTC
Loveless Coffins
Crescendo Against Heaven by Michael R. Burch This is a poem about a crisis of faith that occurred after the death of the wife of a fellow poet. As curiously formal as the rose, the imperious Word grows until it sheds red-gilded leaves: then heaven grieves love’s tiny pool of crimson recrimination against God, its contention of the price of salvation. These industrious trees, endlessly losing and re-losing their leaves, finally unleashing themselves from earth, lashing themselves to bits, washing themselves free of all but the final ignominy of death, become at last: fast planks of our coffins, dumb. Together now, rude coffins, crosses, death-cursed but bright vermilion roses, bodies, stumps, tears, words: conspire together with a nearby spire to raise their Accusation Dire ... to scream, complain, to point out these and other Dark Anomalies. God always silent, ever afar, distant as Bethlehem’s retrograde star, we point out now, in resignation: You asked too much of man’s beleaguered nation, gave too much strength to his Enemy, as though to prove Your Self greater than He, at our expense, and so men die (whose accusations vex the sky) yet hope, somehow, that You are good ... just, O greatest of Poets!, misunderstood. Published by The NeoVictorian/Cochlea, Poetry Life & Times and The Eclectic Muse (Canada). Keywords/Tags: crescendo, heaven, salvation, price, cost, hymn, funeral, grave, graves, coffins, cross, crosses, cemetery, graveyard, church, spire, God, distant, silent, misunderstood
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Mar 22, 2020
Mar 22, 2020 at 1:02 AM UTC
Crescendo Against Heaven
Crescendo Against Heaven by Michael R. Burch This is a poem about a crisis of faith that occurred after the death of the wife of a fellow poet. As curiously formal as the rose, the imperious Word grows until it sheds red-gilded leaves: then heaven grieves love’s tiny pool of crimson recrimination against God, its contention of the price of salvation. These industrious trees, endlessly losing and re-losing their leaves, finally unleashing themselves from earth, lashing themselves to bits, washing themselves free of all but the final ignominy of death, become at last: fast planks of our coffins, dumb. Together now, rude coffins, crosses, death-cursed but bright vermilion roses, bodies, stumps, tears, words: conspire together with a nearby spire to raise their Accusation Dire ... to scream, complain, to point out these and other Dark Anomalies. God always silent, ever afar, distant as Bethlehem’s retrograde star, we point out now, in resignation: You asked too much of man’s beleaguered nation, gave too much strength to his Enemy, as though to prove Your Self greater than He, at our expense, and so men die (whose accusations vex the sky) yet hope, somehow, that You are good ... just, O greatest of Poets!, misunderstood. Published by The NeoVictorian/Cochlea, Poetry Life & Times and The Eclectic Muse (Canada). Keywords/Tags: crescendo, heaven, salvation, price, cost, hymn, funeral, grave, graves, coffins, cross, crosses, cemetery, graveyard, church, spire, God, distant, silent, misunderstood
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Like a shadow fleeting across the Moon's face so your eyes darken in return And like a red rose petal settling across dark waters' surface the stillness is broken within me And I remember it through flashes flowers fall and spill from lips I once had of the blood that would come from the rose stems' You watching in horror as the curse sets in death like a blanket of darkness to forever wrap my broken shell I'm buried in a case of glass and mahogany, the cushions light colored and soft everyday I hear you above me It's the only way to tell time in my eternal slumber of body but my spirit wakes to your voice when you leave I'm gone once more drifting in the nothingness of my mistakes
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Feb 5, 2019
Feb 5, 2019 at 2:17 AM UTC
A Flower Curse
I see the rabbits feeding on the grass My heart is filled with joy Their life is precious I see the vultures feeding on the rabbits My heart is filled with joy Their life is precious That's what I never understood about coffins Life is about expanding your prison cell as much as you can There's no requirement to be contained once it's over Our nutriance to the Earth Is our nutrients into Earth All creatures that die on this planet Become a part of it The Debt they paid to the future The Debt that is always collected on We travel nonchalantly on their corpses Wishing they could appreciate That each and every one of them Was one step closer to sentience This planet's passion project Could the first single-celled organism Comprehend my humiliation? When the first creature walked on land Was it anticipating my shame? Did it sprout wings To give me nightmares of dying in an airplane? Did ancient Neanderthals dance around a fire To reenact my adolescence? Could mystic voodoo shaman Cure my lack of agency? Or did lost American tribesmen Prophesize the complexities of my love? I can feel all these ************* looking up at me from the ground And it's just me As I accidentally burn my notebook with a cigarette
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May 29, 2017
May 29, 2017 at 12:01 AM UTC
Coffins
Dad didn't want a coffin. "Cremate my last remains," And so we did. Cool and dry, His ashes, urned, Lie beneath the sod And prairie sky Waiting some clarion call, Some trill of hope, Bright, re-constitutional, Faith-affirming. Mother's wishes rise before us: No crematory, No embalmer. Just her blanket, Just a hole Dug beside our Dad. The law would let her wish be true, But her children won't. We're searching coffin plans. Reverently grim, Lovingly deferential, Dutifully rebellious, Solemn this journey be. Pine boards to honor her thrift But smooth and tight, Rope handles, fitted lid, Perhaps a little trim, Perhaps a sheaf of wheat carved For the old farmer she was. We'll bury her, Wrapped in her blanket, Tucked securely in pine Beside my father's ashes. Like a grain of wheat she'll lie Silent in her final say Inside our final say Waiting Resurrection Day.
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Aug 5, 2018
Aug 5, 2018 at 6:11 PM UTC
Coffin Building
I've been falling from the skies And I see no grounds, where I can just strike, Where my blood will smear all over. Nah! No poem or any story is it! Just an image of my thoughts! How beautifully am i messed! How my flaws are haunting me! I see nightmares, in which I've seen my death They, taking me in a coffin, walking so fast! I see myself crying, hailing as loud as possible They ain't listening to me! Then I open my eyes and see I'm still alive But look! I am dead inside! Now no one is carrying me! No coffins, no crowds, but a lone me! I cry, I hail, they hear and laugh! I see a darkness all around, I see some ascaping souls, Laughter of them tears my heart! I see moments stuck, I see the fierce sounds arising from somewhere! Why this restlessness my friend? Why? Now come, emerge from this darkness For my quests are unfinished without you!
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Jul 30, 2018
Jul 30, 2018 at 4:30 AM UTC
Restlessness
was me the mirrors confession resulting in shards in my back blood trinkles as i walked away remember me cry the shards they began to cry very hard oh my shards break from me these chains what comfort have i in thee blind me folded from corners what arms of disbelieve songs sung through the factors the blood of my love what is this blanket of affection have your clothes all been laundered clean repeat me repeat after me never to return have we left answer me circling them take me as i am this mere image an mortal-less man he had an candle but he could never blow it was he that dead poet ? ... .. .
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Feb 9, 2018
Feb 9, 2018 at 12:05 PM UTC
that dead poet
I see these places that will remain as strange as they are to me today. I see these little people scattered on the streets. I see them locked away in a world not their own. This lonely expanse on this never ending piece of earth. And I see these toy like cars and trucks. Somehow they don’t belong together. I try to guess (,to think) what it feels like to live in such small world and not on this huge earth. I guess they don’t know what I see from here. That life had a dead end. And at that end either we can choose to be in tinier coffins or we can be a part of never ending sky and this ever nourishing earth.
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Feb 8, 2017
Feb 8, 2017 at 3:52 AM UTC
Small World
The raging flame, That leaves behind havoc, The deceased have all the prayers from us, People that expired were a lot, The forest summoned the firefighters, Asking them to help the people in need. The flames could be diminished, But the gas cylinder caused destruction, So many bodies, So many coffins, So many people crying for justice. This was not but an accident, An evil man was behind this, It was a game, To make these innocent people pay !
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Sep 2, 2015
Sep 2, 2015 at 6:53 AM UTC
The killer
There are those who despise tight spaces who hate confinement at least in their own basement There's some truth I concur I need room not some gloomy tomb still there are some who are confined by the dust below and the clouds above they desire the width of the equator and claim the height to the stars but in the end with all man as a subject with majestic skyscrapers and treasuries filled to the brim their death creates borders implodes skyscrapers and loots the coffers alas, as they started in incubators they remain claustrophobic in coffins the world is not enough because we are not enough
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Apr 9, 2015
Apr 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM UTC
Claustrophobic