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Hello reader, it’s been a while, How is everyone on that side of the aisle? I’m checking in to make sure you’re happy— I know lately I’ve been a bit snappy. My tooth pain has finally cleared, No more whispered prayers filled with fear. Please, my friends, be well— Oh no… there goes my alarm bell! Thank you for reading my poems— Stick around… there’s more to come.
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Apr 26
Apr 26, 2026 at 12:31 PM UTC
Checking In
Frequently, a reminder appears, an app zap, It's a good time to check your posture! arrives with precise ir~regularity, when I, couch prone neck bent, spine most unfine, not in a good way, it somehow knows, which way my toes are curling Got me a weighted vest, to help me grow down straighter, but realized, already had one, whole life long, with the weights maldistributed, too heavy, and the curvatures of spine and line was what made me so unattractive, were curved with hard bad work over decades, Yes. Way to Late, To be undone, I Is What I have become undone by design                                 *but I write not of my physicality, but                           of mental posture, of my integrated thoughts,                    the integrated consciousness of a lifetime of thoughts.               deeds, desires, fires started and extinguished, acts summary, as zeroes and ones, binaurally coded in my treasury of memory cells,        edited by time, seasoned illusions, shame, with no recompense,                 totals of entirety and the totality of the net net of gains,                           losses, courages ******* sticking points that                                      unraveled by self~disassembling                                      and the stench of actions untaken                                     make me a bent soul, by ineffectual                                     posturing, flim~flam, and eventually                    the reminders to check my posture cease and desist*,                                             with no word of farewell,                                                nor a pose left behind                                                               <…>
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Jul 19, 2025
Jul 19, 2025 at 2:48 PM UTC
It's a good time to check your posture!
Frequently, a reminder appears, an app zap, It's a good time to check your posture! arrives with precise ir~regularity, when I, couch prone neck bent, spine most unfine, not in a good way, it somehow knows, which way my toes are curling Got me a weighted vest, to help me grow down straighter, but realized, already had one, whole life long, with the weights maldistributed, too heavy, and the curvatures of spine and line was what made me so unattractive, were curved with hard bad work over decades, Yes. Way to Late, To be undone, I Is What I have become undone by design                                 *but I write not of my physicality, but                           of mental posture, of my integrated thoughts,                    the integrated consciousness of a lifetime of thoughts.               deeds, desires, fires started and extinguished, acts summary, as zeroes and ones, binaurally coded in my treasury of memory cells,        edited by time, seasoned illusions, shame, with no recompense,                 totals of entirety and the totality of the net net of gains,                           losses, courages ******* sticking points that                                      unraveled by self~disassembling                                      and the stench of actions untaken                                     make me a bent soul, by ineffectual                                     posturing, flim~flam, and eventually                    the reminders to check my posture cease and desist*,                                             with no word of farewell,                                                nor a pose left behind                                                               <…>
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I love that you Treat me like a Library book Checking me out All the time
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Jun 19, 2022
Jun 19, 2022 at 12:03 PM UTC
Library book
Watching as my wares are consumed within this vessel carrying my world. Checking as if I were revising for that exam.. If I fail.. My heart palpitating as beads of sweat congregate upon every thought. Dripping into pools of reality.. Wish I was there, locking my door I breath...
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Apr 21, 2020
Apr 21, 2020 at 5:29 PM UTC
resfeber
(A Definition: OCD is a mental disorder where people feel the need to check things repeatedly, perform certain routines repeatedly or have certain thoughts repeatedly).         --------------------------------- Well, I'll tell you once Better make that twice just in case, Maybe even a third time to be sure To be sure it's securely in place Because you never know, do you, you     never know..... When I was young I worked for the     man I didn't have any other choice at the     time, A strange man, aren't they all Had a funny way of going on Had pet names for things, his own     private little vocabulary And there was always this one, this     one little proviso No matter what you seemed to do You! you were always wrong. If you were to ask him for directions     you'd surely end up lost Be left scratching your head or driving     into a wall, Even if you thought you knew what he     meant It was like he'd just turn it around,     stand it on its head And suddenly it wasn't what he meant,     it wasn't what he meant at all! But was something completely     different And you! you were always wrong. "Where are your eyes, can't you see!"     he'd say I could see alright but not what he was     saying to me Everything was upside down, every     which way across All jumbled up, awkward, out of place, I could never please him anyway, In the end you'd just give up, just     give in Admit you were stupid, admit you     were dim Playing a game only he could win With its ever changing rules all made     up by him, Maybe it was just the mood he was in He was a man though and I, I was only     a kid....only a kid.                            II Now its hard to live when you've     always been wrong When you don't trust yourself or the     whole world around You grow unsure about things, you     start to check things, Where others see things for what they are, you simply don't believe it Reality isn't reality you've learned, it's     something else entirely. Whereas the other guy can check     things once and let it go You gotta keep on checking & checking You look and you look and you look     again You strain to see what isn't there really Strain till your poor eyes are nearly     popping out of your head onto the         floor And even then it's not over, there's a     punchline When you finally do get something     done You still don't believe you've done it     right A Big Black doubt remains & it follows     you about A voice from your past comes back to      haunt you And to remind you, that "You! you     were always wrong". How could you ever hope to win Working three or four times as hard     just to stay even, just to keep up         with the next guy And it's hard, real hard, all that     indecision It's no great surprise when you start to     fall behind You look up & suddenly they've all     passed you by You look at them like their some kind of Supermen, the ease with which they     can do things, like real men But you, still like a little child who can     never get it right You feel such a failure, feel so small, so     small and so inadequate. And you stick out, others begin to notice you & your little peculiarity They snigger and laugh behind your     back They joke about you and call you     names Their not like you, no one's like you Nobody wants to be your friend, No! Nobody wants to be a friend to     that. You feel you don't fit, you don't belong, You feel so lost, you feel so alone. Bosses too, watching you work, they     shake their heads and say, " He's not very productive, is he? He's     very slow No! We can't keep him, he's no good,     he'll have to go ".                           III But where do you go? What do you     do? When all the doors are closed on you, If you're not all worn out by then,     your health all gone Well, maybe....maybe you seek another     reality, yeah, You take a drink and then another and     then wow! What's all this? a world gone crazy,     out of control, spinning & whirling          around And it's funny and you'd be laughing,     laughing at the craziness, the        absurdity of it all And the great thing, you didn't care     anymore You'd say to yourself " this is great, this     is amazing, Maybe now I'd found a world I could     live in Where things were always funny and I     wouldn't always be wrong" You'd made a new friend, and a friend     worth having Here was someone who could really     help you That could ease your pain and dull     that crazy brain of yours Someone that could fix you and     maybe, carry you home. And so, you managed to get yourself a      job, then rising real early every            morning You'd put some music on, then get the     drinks in Have yourself a little/ wee party Wait for the effect to kick in, the click     in your head to come When the seriousness would all     dissipate And the funniness come around     instead Then you'd head off to work, you'd be     high but careful to conceal it So as not to give yourself away You'd be like an actor playing a role,     the part of the 'normal person'         whatever that is But behind it all there was you,     watching yourself And you'd be sniggering & laughing,     far away and far out of it; And you'd be able to keep up with     them, the others Keep up long enough until lo and     behold, surprise of all surprises You'd see one of them make a mistake And this would give you some    confidence And you could build on that You'd start to think, maybe I wasn't so     bad after all And maybe they weren't the     Supermen I thought them to be, And slowly bit by bit, you'd start the     long trek back, back to sanity Till one day, suddenly you wouldn't     need it anymore, the drinking You'd have realized the truth, that you were as good if not a whole lot better     than any of them Yea, you'd realize the truth, that you'd     been robbed, you'd been duped There was nothing wrong with you,     there never was It was Him! all Him those many years     ago And that crazy way he had of going     on. How he always liked to make you feel   that it was such a really big deal Every time you made a mistake, did     something wrong It was something terrible! something     heinous!! O! It was the End of the World!!! His words, how they'd hit you right at     your heart's core, leave you reeling Made you feel you weren't human     anymore You were hopeless! Impossible! Like some kind of freak, some alien being... You know, sometimes I look at great     structures, big buildings, bridges          and the like And I wonder what kind of mind     made such a thing It wouldn't have been me that's for     sure I'd have been too afraid they'd     collapse or fall into the sea, And I think again of him who made     me this way His parents died when he was very     young He had awful teachers who scared and beat him mercilessly He had to emigrate to find work like     so many others Had to work with foreigners far     from his own home and kin Who knows what he must have gone through to make him the way he was What crazy world created him and     made him do the things he did He never wrote anything down, no!     not like I could And so it is...and so it goes (When one person bullies another and destroys their perception of the world) Now I know it's going to **** me one of     these days This penchant I still have for checking,     this overconcern for things When I think of all the energy I must     have wasted The things I could have done with it (I could surely do with it now) What might have been... if only... if     only.
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Jul 1, 2019
Jul 1, 2019 at 4:09 PM UTC
OCD (Obsessive Compulsive Disorder)
(A Definition: OCD is a mental disorder where people feel the need to check things repeatedly, perform certain routines repeatedly or have certain thoughts repeatedly).         --------------------------------- Well, I'll tell you once Better make that twice just in case, Maybe even a third time to be sure To be sure it's securely in place Because you never know, do you, you     never know..... When I was young I worked for the     man I didn't have any other choice at the     time, A strange man, aren't they all Had a funny way of going on Had pet names for things, his own     private little vocabulary And there was always this one, this     one little proviso No matter what you seemed to do You! you were always wrong. If you were to ask him for directions     you'd surely end up lost Be left scratching your head or driving     into a wall, Even if you thought you knew what he     meant It was like he'd just turn it around,     stand it on its head And suddenly it wasn't what he meant,     it wasn't what he meant at all! But was something completely     different And you! you were always wrong. "Where are your eyes, can't you see!"     he'd say I could see alright but not what he was     saying to me Everything was upside down, every     which way across All jumbled up, awkward, out of place, I could never please him anyway, In the end you'd just give up, just     give in Admit you were stupid, admit you     were dim Playing a game only he could win With its ever changing rules all made     up by him, Maybe it was just the mood he was in He was a man though and I, I was only     a kid....only a kid.                            II Now its hard to live when you've     always been wrong When you don't trust yourself or the     whole world around You grow unsure about things, you     start to check things, Where others see things for what they are, you simply don't believe it Reality isn't reality you've learned, it's     something else entirely. Whereas the other guy can check     things once and let it go You gotta keep on checking & checking You look and you look and you look     again You strain to see what isn't there really Strain till your poor eyes are nearly     popping out of your head onto the         floor And even then it's not over, there's a     punchline When you finally do get something     done You still don't believe you've done it     right A Big Black doubt remains & it follows     you about A voice from your past comes back to      haunt you And to remind you, that "You! you     were always wrong". How could you ever hope to win Working three or four times as hard     just to stay even, just to keep up         with the next guy And it's hard, real hard, all that     indecision It's no great surprise when you start to     fall behind You look up & suddenly they've all     passed you by You look at them like their some kind of Supermen, the ease with which they     can do things, like real men But you, still like a little child who can     never get it right You feel such a failure, feel so small, so     small and so inadequate. And you stick out, others begin to notice you & your little peculiarity They snigger and laugh behind your     back They joke about you and call you     names Their not like you, no one's like you Nobody wants to be your friend, No! Nobody wants to be a friend to     that. You feel you don't fit, you don't belong, You feel so lost, you feel so alone. Bosses too, watching you work, they     shake their heads and say, " He's not very productive, is he? He's     very slow No! We can't keep him, he's no good,     he'll have to go ".                           III But where do you go? What do you     do? When all the doors are closed on you, If you're not all worn out by then,     your health all gone Well, maybe....maybe you seek another     reality, yeah, You take a drink and then another and     then wow! What's all this? a world gone crazy,     out of control, spinning & whirling          around And it's funny and you'd be laughing,     laughing at the craziness, the        absurdity of it all And the great thing, you didn't care     anymore You'd say to yourself " this is great, this     is amazing, Maybe now I'd found a world I could     live in Where things were always funny and I     wouldn't always be wrong" You'd made a new friend, and a friend     worth having Here was someone who could really     help you That could ease your pain and dull     that crazy brain of yours Someone that could fix you and     maybe, carry you home. And so, you managed to get yourself a      job, then rising real early every            morning You'd put some music on, then get the     drinks in Have yourself a little/ wee party Wait for the effect to kick in, the click     in your head to come When the seriousness would all     dissipate And the funniness come around     instead Then you'd head off to work, you'd be     high but careful to conceal it So as not to give yourself away You'd be like an actor playing a role,     the part of the 'normal person'         whatever that is But behind it all there was you,     watching yourself And you'd be sniggering & laughing,     far away and far out of it; And you'd be able to keep up with     them, the others Keep up long enough until lo and     behold, surprise of all surprises You'd see one of them make a mistake And this would give you some    confidence And you could build on that You'd start to think, maybe I wasn't so     bad after all And maybe they weren't the     Supermen I thought them to be, And slowly bit by bit, you'd start the     long trek back, back to sanity Till one day, suddenly you wouldn't     need it anymore, the drinking You'd have realized the truth, that you were as good if not a whole lot better     than any of them Yea, you'd realize the truth, that you'd     been robbed, you'd been duped There was nothing wrong with you,     there never was It was Him! all Him those many years     ago And that crazy way he had of going     on. How he always liked to make you feel   that it was such a really big deal Every time you made a mistake, did     something wrong It was something terrible! something     heinous!! O! It was the End of the World!!! His words, how they'd hit you right at     your heart's core, leave you reeling Made you feel you weren't human     anymore You were hopeless! Impossible! Like some kind of freak, some alien being... You know, sometimes I look at great     structures, big buildings, bridges          and the like And I wonder what kind of mind     made such a thing It wouldn't have been me that's for     sure I'd have been too afraid they'd     collapse or fall into the sea, And I think again of him who made     me this way His parents died when he was very     young He had awful teachers who scared and beat him mercilessly He had to emigrate to find work like     so many others Had to work with foreigners far     from his own home and kin Who knows what he must have gone through to make him the way he was What crazy world created him and     made him do the things he did He never wrote anything down, no!     not like I could And so it is...and so it goes (When one person bullies another and destroys their perception of the world) Now I know it's going to **** me one of     these days This penchant I still have for checking,     this overconcern for things When I think of all the energy I must     have wasted The things I could have done with it (I could surely do with it now) What might have been... if only... if     only.
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crazy idea, silly notion, then again, come back, circle around, why not, you ask yourself now prior to posting hereon, every word with extra care reviewed sharing, checking in with my beloveds, here, those gone/disappeared telling myself telling anyone, talking to you letting you know my grace, your grace, one and the same, my face, your face, my child, my son know you're checking in, checking out, the comings, the goings, knowing full and well, I see you, my face, your face everywhere and everyday our conversation never ending, look for me here, at the intersection of memory and what's up, you see my messages, responding in a thousand different ways, our dialogue unending, formally organized Face to Facebook, your face, my Facebook my child, my son
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Feb 1, 2015
Feb 1, 2015 at 6:34 AM UTC
Checking Facebook From Heaven
Sometimes i type in what i have to to find You just to see how You're doing i still miss You
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Oct 22, 2015
Oct 22, 2015 at 7:19 PM UTC
Hiding
I look for you everywhere. Hallways, Classrooms, Shops downtown, Outside, Anywhere you could be. It's practically instinct now When I'm at school, To look around for you constantly. Wondering if you'll be here, Hoping you're there. Then sometimes, I find you. Out of the corner of my eye I see Blond hair, Standing tall, The proud stride And the little smile that make up you. When I see all of that, My heart skips a beat. I'm grinning and start to head for you, Then I remember. I can't spend every minute with you. You're not my boyfriend. You have a million friends, And I'm just one of them. They don't run up to you Every time they see you, So I shouldn't either. I can't. So instead of going up to you, Even just to say "hey" Because that would brighten my day, Usually, I'll keep walking in my path. Maybe I'll make eye contact with you, And we'll smile. Maybe you won't see me at all. You don't look for me. That's okay, though. I don't expect you to. I'll just keep looking for you, No matter what. And sometimes I'll go talk to you. We'll laugh and joke, We'll hug. I'll see you smile, Maybe even make you smile, And it'll be one of the high points of my day. That makes the times I pretend I don't see you Worth it. That's why I look for you. To bring us both together, And to check on you. I want to make sure that you're safe, And happy, And okay. So I look for you.
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Jan 12, 2015
Jan 12, 2015 at 3:15 PM UTC
Looking